for Competition5/12/2012 c1 IvannaB
It's a great beginning, it's interesting to see how Kono will deal with it.'Cause surfing is basicly a part of her. I'd love to read the next chapters. I already can sense that they will be as good as the first one.
It's a great beginning, it's interesting to see how Kono will deal with it.'Cause surfing is basicly a part of her. I'd love to read the next chapters. I already can sense that they will be as good as the first one.
1/18/2012 c6 sphekie
Wow! Amazing story...I don't want it to end :(
Steve and Kono were awesome, hope u will write more about them.
Wow! Amazing story...I don't want it to end :(
Steve and Kono were awesome, hope u will write more about them.
1/18/2012 c5 sphekie
What! Fryer! No way! I did not see it coming and why? Why he want to kill kono? There no way it him..damn this is good, it thrilling and like it.
What! Fryer! No way! I did not see it coming and why? Why he want to kill kono? There no way it him..damn this is good, it thrilling and like it.
1/18/2012 c4 sphekie
Intense plot...who make the bomb and why kill kono? Also why Lori acting a little bit weird...she doing something but I dont know it bad or good.
Great interest story lines!
Intense plot...who make the bomb and why kill kono? Also why Lori acting a little bit weird...she doing something but I dont know it bad or good.
Great interest story lines!
1/18/2012 c3 sphekie
What the hell? Is that a bomb in her house? Oh shit! I can't stop read more of this it soo good!
What the hell? Is that a bomb in her house? Oh shit! I can't stop read more of this it soo good!
1/18/2012 c2 sphekie
Omg! Who the intruder? How did he get in?
Ur story is interest..good chapter so far. Glad I found ur stories.
Omg! Who the intruder? How did he get in?
Ur story is interest..good chapter so far. Glad I found ur stories.
1/9/2012 c5 
1doobydoodah
There are parts to this story that I just don't like, especially the way you're portraying Lori, but the premise of it is good. Glad they got the bomb to switch off and that they figured out it was Fryer at the end.
1doobydoodahThere are parts to this story that I just don't like, especially the way you're portraying Lori, but the premise of it is good. Glad they got the bomb to switch off and that they figured out it was Fryer at the end.
1/5/2012 c5 36francis2
This is very weird. At first I thought it could be Lori. Maybe she's still involved. Fryer? What does he want? Can't wait to find out.
36francis2This is very weird. At first I thought it could be Lori. Maybe she's still involved. Fryer? What does he want? Can't wait to find out.
1/2/2012 c5 LadyAilith
It's FRYER? I'd have never guessed it was him. I can't wait til they get him - he's never gonna last in prison. Then again, because he's a cop, they'll probably put him in protected custody which should mean solitary confinement. I can't imagine a worse kind of hell. Grrr!
It's FRYER? I'd have never guessed it was him. I can't wait til they get him - he's never gonna last in prison. Then again, because he's a cop, they'll probably put him in protected custody which should mean solitary confinement. I can't imagine a worse kind of hell. Grrr!
1/1/2012 c5 6JenB
I knew there was something about Fryer I didn't like. I can almost hear the duh duh duh! after that revelation. Can't wait for what comes next.
6JenBI knew there was something about Fryer I didn't like. I can almost hear the duh duh duh! after that revelation. Can't wait for what comes next.
1/1/2012 c5 Guest
That bastard!
God i am way too into this!
Update,
Martha Smith-Jones
That bastard!
God i am way too into this!
Update,
Martha Smith-Jones