for Rooftop4/1/2012 c4 
7giverofgrace
Wow! Great Chapter! I really enjoyed reading it! I love this story, and I hope you have time tot update soon because I want to know what Scorpia's going to do with Alex and whether he escapes or not! Not to mention whether Ben's going to show up.
Keep up the great writing!
7giverofgraceWow! Great Chapter! I really enjoyed reading it! I love this story, and I hope you have time tot update soon because I want to know what Scorpia's going to do with Alex and whether he escapes or not! Not to mention whether Ben's going to show up.
Keep up the great writing!
4/1/2012 c4 3Buninsun
Very nice and well written, if I say so myself. I can't wait to read the following chapters! Also, will Fox make an appearance? K-unit?
3BuninsunVery nice and well written, if I say so myself. I can't wait to read the following chapters! Also, will Fox make an appearance? K-unit?
4/1/2012 c4 13Aestiva
Poor Alex just can't get a break, now can he? Anyway, I think someone should be undercover in SCORPIA and Alex should recognize them. MI6 does mean that, but it's more of a nickname. The actual name is SIS, Secret Intelligence Service. Since there's MI5 people just started calling it MI6 and the name stuck.
13AestivaPoor Alex just can't get a break, now can he? Anyway, I think someone should be undercover in SCORPIA and Alex should recognize them. MI6 does mean that, but it's more of a nickname. The actual name is SIS, Secret Intelligence Service. Since there's MI5 people just started calling it MI6 and the name stuck.
3/20/2012 c3 25Doppler Effect
Oh my God, why have I never found this story before. *goes away to cry for a while*
Jeez, why did you ever read my crappy stories when you've got your own epic ideas (such as this one) to write? This was written like a real book! And so well done!
...Please update if you can?
25Doppler EffectOh my God, why have I never found this story before. *goes away to cry for a while*
Jeez, why did you ever read my crappy stories when you've got your own epic ideas (such as this one) to write? This was written like a real book! And so well done!
...Please update if you can?
3/18/2012 c3 5rawr52
Too slowly? I wouldn't say Alex talking to his dead mum and being kidnapped from his hospital room is slow!
5rawr52Too slowly? I wouldn't say Alex talking to his dead mum and being kidnapped from his hospital room is slow!
3/16/2012 c3 Albany
For me it was slow chapter, on the contrary was full of emotion, sleep with his mother, the effect produced by Alex.
I'll tell you this so well described that when I read accompany the reading with movements of my body. It's exciting.
Update soon.
For me it was slow chapter, on the contrary was full of emotion, sleep with his mother, the effect produced by Alex.
I'll tell you this so well described that when I read accompany the reading with movements of my body. It's exciting.
Update soon.
3/16/2012 c3 13Aestiva
I must admit, I thought he was dying for a minute there and I almost had a heart attack. Good job on showing Alex's feelings in the dream sequence! Also, I read that cloroform doesn't actully knock you out, just gives you breathing problems for the rest of your life. Oh, the things I've googled.
13AestivaI must admit, I thought he was dying for a minute there and I almost had a heart attack. Good job on showing Alex's feelings in the dream sequence! Also, I read that cloroform doesn't actully knock you out, just gives you breathing problems for the rest of your life. Oh, the things I've googled.
3/16/2012 c3 7giverofgrace
:)! This is a really really really great chapter! I really love how Alex gets to meet his mom (kinda) and then how he gets kidnapped! Nice cliffe!
Please update soon so that I can find out who kidnapped Alex, why, and if Ben can find him!
7giverofgrace:)! This is a really really really great chapter! I really love how Alex gets to meet his mom (kinda) and then how he gets kidnapped! Nice cliffe!
Please update soon so that I can find out who kidnapped Alex, why, and if Ben can find him!
3/14/2012 c2 15Musiclovesbest
I love your writing. Update soon I want to know whats going on with our boy! :)
15MusiclovesbestI love your writing. Update soon I want to know whats going on with our boy! :)
3/14/2012 c2 HannahBerry96
I liked it :) and I'm gunna guess that the thingy that sliced his arm was poisoned! D: haha I realty did like this :) keep it up! :)
I liked it :) and I'm gunna guess that the thingy that sliced his arm was poisoned! D: haha I realty did like this :) keep it up! :)
3/13/2012 c2 36Dragon Silhouette
That was amusing :)
Haha, I like the spyglass bit. I'm sure it'll come in handy later.
Oh noes, did he get poisoned? I'll bet it's poison. It's never anything normal with Alex.
36Dragon SilhouetteThat was amusing :)
Haha, I like the spyglass bit. I'm sure it'll come in handy later.
Oh noes, did he get poisoned? I'll bet it's poison. It's never anything normal with Alex.
3/13/2012 c2 sicily tears
DONT U DARE REWRITE THIS! It bloody, friggin', totally, spadastically, utterly consumably awsome!1 Just thought I'd say.
DONT U DARE REWRITE THIS! It bloody, friggin', totally, spadastically, utterly consumably awsome!1 Just thought I'd say.