for Did you find a cookie?1/4/2012 c2 Cool
Awwww, I can't believe you're ending the story so soon. It was just getting good.
Awwww, I can't believe you're ending the story so soon. It was just getting good.
1/4/2012 c1 Cool
Funny and sweet at the same time. It's hard to find a story as good as this and the fact that you don't speak English makes it all the better. Update soon :)
Funny and sweet at the same time. It's hard to find a story as good as this and the fact that you don't speak English makes it all the better. Update soon :)
1/3/2012 c2 
5Childofacid
Is it bad that I found myself getting a little turned on during this chapter? I thoroughly enjoy this story and I'm slightly dissapointed that it is ending so soon.
5ChildofacidIs it bad that I found myself getting a little turned on during this chapter? I thoroughly enjoy this story and I'm slightly dissapointed that it is ending so soon.
1/3/2012 c2 Guest
Whoa, didn't see that coming. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Whoa, didn't see that coming. Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/3/2012 c2 The Black Okami
I like where this is goin...just sayin. Oh and if you hadn't said anything no one would have known english isn't your first language.
I like where this is goin...just sayin. Oh and if you hadn't said anything no one would have known english isn't your first language.
1/2/2012 c2 Wolfgangspiper
Yes! Looking forward to the next chapter! Little short, but fast updates make up for it!
Yes! Looking forward to the next chapter! Little short, but fast updates make up for it!
1/2/2012 c2 Nice
Very good chapter, I'll probably be sad when this story ends.
Very good chapter, I'll probably be sad when this story ends.
1/2/2012 c2 Jealousypants McCloppington
Aw, concluding it already? I was hoping for more secret admirer shenanigans. Anyway, I liked this chapter. Short, but good.
Aw, concluding it already? I was hoping for more secret admirer shenanigans. Anyway, I liked this chapter. Short, but good.
1/1/2012 c1 Wow
Absolutely wonderful! My friend told me about this (quote) "awesome story written by a German kid" and I decided to check it out. You completely blew all my expectations to the wind. Well done, please update soon.
Absolutely wonderful! My friend told me about this (quote) "awesome story written by a German kid" and I decided to check it out. You completely blew all my expectations to the wind. Well done, please update soon.
1/1/2012 c1 Darkfire
Whoa, your not English? That was written beautifully. Nice so far, but you should make Pinkie realize that writing it in purple probably gave the impression that it was twilight and not Pinkie. And then make her write another note somehow, but in pink. And that should hint abit.
Whoa, your not English? That was written beautifully. Nice so far, but you should make Pinkie realize that writing it in purple probably gave the impression that it was twilight and not Pinkie. And then make her write another note somehow, but in pink. And that should hint abit.
12/31/2011 c1 Guest
Pinkie Pie and Celestia. There's a couple I never thought I'd see.
Pinkie Pie and Celestia. There's a couple I never thought I'd see.
12/31/2011 c1 You're German
I'm genuinely impressed that you can write a story in English that's better than most English speaking writers when it's not your native language. It definitely surprised me.
I'm genuinely impressed that you can write a story in English that's better than most English speaking writers when it's not your native language. It definitely surprised me.
12/31/2011 c1 Jealousypants McCloppington
If English isn't your first language then I'm impressed. I couldn't tell. Your English is better than a lot of fanfiction writers I see. I don't usually notice small errors in writing when I'm reading something, but I didn't see any big mistakes.
There really isn't enough here yet for me to form an opinion on this story, but I definitely like the idea of Celestia/Pinkie Pie. There aren't enough Celestia shipping fics, IMHO.
If English isn't your first language then I'm impressed. I couldn't tell. Your English is better than a lot of fanfiction writers I see. I don't usually notice small errors in writing when I'm reading something, but I didn't see any big mistakes.
There really isn't enough here yet for me to form an opinion on this story, but I definitely like the idea of Celestia/Pinkie Pie. There aren't enough Celestia shipping fics, IMHO.