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7Athena Silverwolf
Ah, so that is where Wisp came from. Oh, Her Highness wants to know if all the Narnians make their way through the gaps
7Athena SilverwolfAh, so that is where Wisp came from. Oh, Her Highness wants to know if all the Narnians make their way through the gaps
12/10/2012 c3 5Epsilon Scorpii
I'm still not over how pe ended, it's so depressing, just like the real classic. I've noticed that many classics adopt tragic endings. This adds to the heavy atmosphere. But I still love the bitter imagery of what happened to Susan, being left alone. Again, awesome writing! :-P
5Epsilon ScorpiiI'm still not over how pe ended, it's so depressing, just like the real classic. I've noticed that many classics adopt tragic endings. This adds to the heavy atmosphere. But I still love the bitter imagery of what happened to Susan, being left alone. Again, awesome writing! :-P
10/16/2012 c3 M
I am a dreadful lurker and not much given to reviewing, but for you I simply must. This story, and the series attached, is excellent. Thanks.
I am a dreadful lurker and not much given to reviewing, but for you I simply must. This story, and the series attached, is excellent. Thanks.
6/24/2012 c3 5Firefly's Rebirth
I wanted to leave another review for you at the end of PE, but eheh...apparently doesn't allow multiple reviews per chapter, but anyhow, I thought on what happened in the last chapter with Susan, coupled with this particular story, and I realized that I've seen few Susan-centric stories, esp dealing with the aftermath of her siblings' deaths, and I would very much like you to continue that storyline. I'd very much like to see the story of what comes next for Susan and how she finds her way to Aslan once more. )
5Firefly's RebirthI wanted to leave another review for you at the end of PE, but eheh...apparently doesn't allow multiple reviews per chapter, but anyhow, I thought on what happened in the last chapter with Susan, coupled with this particular story, and I realized that I've seen few Susan-centric stories, esp dealing with the aftermath of her siblings' deaths, and I would very much like you to continue that storyline. I'd very much like to see the story of what comes next for Susan and how she finds her way to Aslan once more. )
5/19/2012 c3 4Rayven49
I liked this :) Wondered about those three items that Susan took with her to America. Now I know, which makes me happy lol.
I think of the three vignettes, I like the last one best. Maybe because Ed's my favorite, maybe because I love Peter and Edmund's interactions, or maybe because Wisp is so darn smart. The perfect companion for a kingdomless king.
Nice job!
Yours,
Rayven
4Rayven49I liked this :) Wondered about those three items that Susan took with her to America. Now I know, which makes me happy lol.
I think of the three vignettes, I like the last one best. Maybe because Ed's my favorite, maybe because I love Peter and Edmund's interactions, or maybe because Wisp is so darn smart. The perfect companion for a kingdomless king.
Nice job!
Yours,
Rayven
4/22/2012 c3 basaltone
Love the idea of a Narnian creature somehow trapped in England with the kids. Great idea.
Love the idea of a Narnian creature somehow trapped in England with the kids. Great idea.
2/18/2012 c3 3peanutmeg
I loved this look into Edmund's thoughts. His conversation with the kitten was wonderful, although my favorite bit had to be when Edmund spoke of Peter, both because it showed his absolute trust in him and because of the certainty and teasing way in which he said it. ;)
Peter's arrival was great too! Thanks so much for sharing!
3peanutmegI loved this look into Edmund's thoughts. His conversation with the kitten was wonderful, although my favorite bit had to be when Edmund spoke of Peter, both because it showed his absolute trust in him and because of the certainty and teasing way in which he said it. ;)
Peter's arrival was great too! Thanks so much for sharing!
2/17/2012 c3 4Melpomene Lee
Oh, man, it ** me off when I read books or see movies when people hurt animals! I was reading The Dead Zone the other day, and I get to this part where the antagonist just kicks the living daylights out of this dog, and I swear, I was yelling at him through the pages!
And clearly, this Cat is something special. I love that you've opened a door between two worlds that most people usually consider shut once the Pevensies return to England. Your stories really feel *magical* because of all the little things like that that you throw in. It's wonderful!
4Melpomene LeeOh, man, it ** me off when I read books or see movies when people hurt animals! I was reading The Dead Zone the other day, and I get to this part where the antagonist just kicks the living daylights out of this dog, and I swear, I was yelling at him through the pages!
And clearly, this Cat is something special. I love that you've opened a door between two worlds that most people usually consider shut once the Pevensies return to England. Your stories really feel *magical* because of all the little things like that that you throw in. It's wonderful!
2/14/2012 c3 Kusajishifukutaicho
Sorry for the spam. *coughs*
IT JUST OCCURED TO ME. Ed just met Wisp. So I'm totally off track, ain't I? This is before PE! Erm. Sorry for the mix-up. ^^ And sorry for double-reviewing.
Sorry for the spam. *coughs*
IT JUST OCCURED TO ME. Ed just met Wisp. So I'm totally off track, ain't I? This is before PE! Erm. Sorry for the mix-up. ^^ And sorry for double-reviewing.
2/14/2012 c3 12KusajishiFukutaicho
Sorry for the late review! ): (And happy Valentines'!XD) Y'know, I think I've gushed about it before.
I ADORE YOUR STORIES, ESPECIALLY YOUR NARNIA ONESSSSSSSSSSS.
*goes utterly bonkers* (And yes, the CAPs were ENTIRELY NECESSARY.)
I looooooove this fic soooooooo much. I like your random moments of Ed whump(because I like the ensuing fluff TOO MUCH) and well, all the fussing after:3333333333333333
And Wisp is so adorable! I love cats. :D
I didn't really understand the severity of the situation the first time I read it though:P I was wondering how was it that Ed was going to die just cuz it was raining. -_-
But after I read it again...uhhhh. This story is set around the short period after PE where Ed still had to limp around, isn't it? Which was why Ed was worrying about drowning(or falling to hypothermia, really^^;), I guess.
Just for 'the LOLZ', you can measure bloodflow by just looking at a person? Wow. Hahahaha. XDDDDDDDDD
The fluff fangirl in me wished that you did a chapter with the 2nd last paragraph in Peter's point of view, though. It would make my day. And I would probably be unable to concentrate in school after thatXD
Great chapter! You have a minor typo somewhere: I think you typed 'there was four of them' instead of 'there were four of them', I think. (:
I can't wait for your Susan story!:D
12KusajishiFukutaichoSorry for the late review! ): (And happy Valentines'!XD) Y'know, I think I've gushed about it before.
I ADORE YOUR STORIES, ESPECIALLY YOUR NARNIA ONESSSSSSSSSSS.
*goes utterly bonkers* (And yes, the CAPs were ENTIRELY NECESSARY.)
I looooooove this fic soooooooo much. I like your random moments of Ed whump(because I like the ensuing fluff TOO MUCH) and well, all the fussing after:3333333333333333
And Wisp is so adorable! I love cats. :D
I didn't really understand the severity of the situation the first time I read it though:P I was wondering how was it that Ed was going to die just cuz it was raining. -_-
But after I read it again...uhhhh. This story is set around the short period after PE where Ed still had to limp around, isn't it? Which was why Ed was worrying about drowning(or falling to hypothermia, really^^;), I guess.
Just for 'the LOLZ', you can measure bloodflow by just looking at a person? Wow. Hahahaha. XDDDDDDDDD
The fluff fangirl in me wished that you did a chapter with the 2nd last paragraph in Peter's point of view, though. It would make my day. And I would probably be unable to concentrate in school after thatXD
Great chapter! You have a minor typo somewhere: I think you typed 'there was four of them' instead of 'there were four of them', I think. (:
I can't wait for your Susan story!:D
2/13/2012 c3 4rainpaint
I loved this! Edmund's voice was fantastically consistent.
"Seeing that Peter's sodium intake had not lowered from his time at Hartbee's School for Young Men, this was hardly surprising." I love this line. So much. "Your kidneys are going to pop."
And I LOVE the idea that Wisp is a Talking Cat. So unexpected.
Wonderful story! Can't wait to read more from you. Thanks for using your gift :)
4rainpaintI loved this! Edmund's voice was fantastically consistent.
"Seeing that Peter's sodium intake had not lowered from his time at Hartbee's School for Young Men, this was hardly surprising." I love this line. So much. "Your kidneys are going to pop."
And I LOVE the idea that Wisp is a Talking Cat. So unexpected.
Wonderful story! Can't wait to read more from you. Thanks for using your gift :)
2/13/2012 c3 1Gallagher Girl
Awww, Wisp is so awesome. :) I do quite like this story; stories of Susan post-train accident are always so sad, but so touching and so meaningful. Brilliant job. :)
1Gallagher GirlAwww, Wisp is so awesome. :) I do quite like this story; stories of Susan post-train accident are always so sad, but so touching and so meaningful. Brilliant job. :)
2/12/2012 c3 32OldFashionedGirl95
I LOVE IT.
The stuff about a Giant. The Things which needed doing. The Bermunda Triangle. Peter's sodium intake at Hartbee's. The Knowing Cat. It's brilliant. I don't know how you do this stuff, but it's brilliant, and the more I read of your universe, the more I like it.
I can't wait to see Susan and Wisp together. Keep writing, please!
32OldFashionedGirl95I LOVE IT.
The stuff about a Giant. The Things which needed doing. The Bermunda Triangle. Peter's sodium intake at Hartbee's. The Knowing Cat. It's brilliant. I don't know how you do this stuff, but it's brilliant, and the more I read of your universe, the more I like it.
I can't wait to see Susan and Wisp together. Keep writing, please!