for The Divine Champion12/17/2012 c5 ShoutFinder
Ooh snap. I wonder how Revak is going to feel hearing the guards talk about how Tiber Septim had last been the Dragonborn summoned to High Hrothgar, and there Tiber Septim is, standing beside dead Mirmulnir, new recognized Dragonborn. Probably amused, and maybe a flash of nostalgia.
Anyway, wrote this before read next chapter. Going to read it right now :D
Ooh snap. I wonder how Revak is going to feel hearing the guards talk about how Tiber Septim had last been the Dragonborn summoned to High Hrothgar, and there Tiber Septim is, standing beside dead Mirmulnir, new recognized Dragonborn. Probably amused, and maybe a flash of nostalgia.
Anyway, wrote this before read next chapter. Going to read it right now :D
12/17/2012 c4 ShoutFinder
Ha, I like Lydia written in this style already. Makes me think of Uthgerd.
I wonder if Lydia's ever going to find out who Revak really is?...
Ha, I like Lydia written in this style already. Makes me think of Uthgerd.
I wonder if Lydia's ever going to find out who Revak really is?...
12/17/2012 c2 ShoutFinder
ohhh, I think he should still be called Talos.
Pity. Oh well, Revak's an OK name, I guess.
Going to go and read the other chapters now, I'm really envious, your story has been soooo popular
ohhh, I think he should still be called Talos.
Pity. Oh well, Revak's an OK name, I guess.
Going to go and read the other chapters now, I'm really envious, your story has been soooo popular
12/13/2012 c18 
4Partsu
This is good!
I have to thank user "Aryk von Straln" for recommending this to me!
Please update soon!
4PartsuThis is good!
I have to thank user "Aryk von Straln" for recommending this to me!
Please update soon!
11/30/2012 c18 Samuez
Great story, man.
I love the time skip, the ending of the last chapter was a bit strange. Why wanting to kill him or remove him back to the Divines when Alduin show up, anyway? That didn't made much sense.
Great story, man.
I love the time skip, the ending of the last chapter was a bit strange. Why wanting to kill him or remove him back to the Divines when Alduin show up, anyway? That didn't made much sense.
11/24/2012 c18 6Chindu Prince Of Darkness
I really like your idea of assigning Dragonborn missions and things related to side quests to separate people. It makes a lot more sense than having the Dragonborn (or Revak, if you will) be a Nightingale and a Listener, and, I dunno, Arch-mage? Maybe? Hmm. Love your writing style and the plot's got me hooked! Really really really really looking forward for more!
6Chindu Prince Of DarknessI really like your idea of assigning Dragonborn missions and things related to side quests to separate people. It makes a lot more sense than having the Dragonborn (or Revak, if you will) be a Nightingale and a Listener, and, I dunno, Arch-mage? Maybe? Hmm. Love your writing style and the plot's got me hooked! Really really really really looking forward for more!
11/10/2012 c17 Supergal47
I love the bit where Lydia notices Ralofs wearing an amulet of mara. i wonder how that will end up? i really really like this story and all your original characters andi hope you update soon.
I love the bit where Lydia notices Ralofs wearing an amulet of mara. i wonder how that will end up? i really really like this story and all your original characters andi hope you update soon.
10/17/2012 c6 Guest
If you have noticed when(if) the dragonborn comes to deliver the killing blow Mirmulnir actually says "No Dovahkiin!".
If you have noticed when(if) the dragonborn comes to deliver the killing blow Mirmulnir actually says "No Dovahkiin!".
9/23/2012 c17 WingedWing
I was to lazy to log in, but hey this story's awesome, 9/10 good job bro, I wish I could see into the future to keep reading this thing
I was to lazy to log in, but hey this story's awesome, 9/10 good job bro, I wish I could see into the future to keep reading this thing