for Of the Ages5/31/2012 c6 
13DeafLizgon
Me: They have hurt Raimundo!
Lobo: (whistling in a slightly pissed off tone) I bet Khu is going to be angry. When he's pissed off, Hell will be freeze and Heaven will be burn.
Yamato: (grimaced at this, remembering that day) I still have that scar from that battle. I'd rather not fight him when he's mad.
Me: (to Kosmic) I'm happy you updated this chapter! More I heard about the monk/priests, more I see them as morons. Xiaolin Monks are the best, take that so called monk-priest... Wait, what's word for insult to the monk/priest, Khu?
Khu: Bouzu. ("Insulting term for Monk")
Me: Ha, take that, stupid bouzu!
Lobo: (to Khu) Lizzy's scary when she got pissed when a character of this show she likes get hurt.
Khu: (nod) I know.
Me: I can't wait to see next chapter to kick those bouzu butts back to where they came from! (cracked her knuckles)
13DeafLizgonMe: They have hurt Raimundo!
Lobo: (whistling in a slightly pissed off tone) I bet Khu is going to be angry. When he's pissed off, Hell will be freeze and Heaven will be burn.
Yamato: (grimaced at this, remembering that day) I still have that scar from that battle. I'd rather not fight him when he's mad.
Me: (to Kosmic) I'm happy you updated this chapter! More I heard about the monk/priests, more I see them as morons. Xiaolin Monks are the best, take that so called monk-priest... Wait, what's word for insult to the monk/priest, Khu?
Khu: Bouzu. ("Insulting term for Monk")
Me: Ha, take that, stupid bouzu!
Lobo: (to Khu) Lizzy's scary when she got pissed when a character of this show she likes get hurt.
Khu: (nod) I know.
Me: I can't wait to see next chapter to kick those bouzu butts back to where they came from! (cracked her knuckles)
3/9/2012 c5 1VanillaStratos
The storyplot is interesting:D
Cant wait to see whats gonna happen~
I dont often see stories whereby there are non-heylin ppl against the four of them:)
1VanillaStratosThe storyplot is interesting:D
Cant wait to see whats gonna happen~
I dont often see stories whereby there are non-heylin ppl against the four of them:)
3/3/2012 c5 13DeafLizgon
Me: (grins at Kimiko, Clay, and Rai) I have learned a lot about the hunters from you guys!
Yamato: But nothing about their weaknesses? (grumbles) And no bloody awesome fighting battles?
Khu: (reading this chapter, sipping his favorite tea) As long as they had to be careful around the hunters, they'll be fine on their own. (looked at me) But there will be a dark hour for them soon as I expected.
Me: Well, it will getting more and more exciting as it will reached to the end of the Season one. (grins) Updated soon!
13DeafLizgonMe: (grins at Kimiko, Clay, and Rai) I have learned a lot about the hunters from you guys!
Yamato: But nothing about their weaknesses? (grumbles) And no bloody awesome fighting battles?
Khu: (reading this chapter, sipping his favorite tea) As long as they had to be careful around the hunters, they'll be fine on their own. (looked at me) But there will be a dark hour for them soon as I expected.
Me: Well, it will getting more and more exciting as it will reached to the end of the Season one. (grins) Updated soon!
2/26/2012 c4 DeafLizgon
Lobo, Kobo, and Yamato: (hissing hateful at Purifiers)
Khu: They'd better not lay a single hair of my cousin or they will have to answer to me. (icy tone with a evil look)
Ciara: I am proud of what I am, a witch. But those weak-looking bugs like them do not worth of my eyes. (shot a look at Khu) If only I was in that story, I'd turn them into bunch of frogs with a simple spell!
Me: (hugs Kosmic) You don't know how much happy I am when I found out Raimundo is a dragon-blood!
Yamato: (rolled eyes at me) Geez, hey bastard, you made it worse. She'll go on and on about this whole dragon thing again.
Me: (threw a brick at Yamato but he avoided) Don't call him bastard! (hugs Kosmic again, glaring at Yamato)
Khu: (dragging Yamato) You still don't learned your manner, Yamato. (to Kosmic) I'd look forward to read next chapter and I'm sure our Lady will be happy when there is a new chapter. (smile)
Lobo, Kobo, and Yamato: (hissing hateful at Purifiers)
Khu: They'd better not lay a single hair of my cousin or they will have to answer to me. (icy tone with a evil look)
Ciara: I am proud of what I am, a witch. But those weak-looking bugs like them do not worth of my eyes. (shot a look at Khu) If only I was in that story, I'd turn them into bunch of frogs with a simple spell!
Me: (hugs Kosmic) You don't know how much happy I am when I found out Raimundo is a dragon-blood!
Yamato: (rolled eyes at me) Geez, hey bastard, you made it worse. She'll go on and on about this whole dragon thing again.
Me: (threw a brick at Yamato but he avoided) Don't call him bastard! (hugs Kosmic again, glaring at Yamato)
Khu: (dragging Yamato) You still don't learned your manner, Yamato. (to Kosmic) I'd look forward to read next chapter and I'm sure our Lady will be happy when there is a new chapter. (smile)
2/26/2012 c3 DeafLizgon
Khu: Looks like I will tell Marc to replace Rai's bed with mat as a prank. (rubs his chin in dark thought since he's a Pedrosa, of course)
Me: Isn't bit too far, Khu?
Khu: (shrugs) We're Pedrosa.
Lobo: Well, Clay's a werewolf, huh. Too gentle for a wolf if you ask me.
Yamato: At least he's not a lecherous flea-bitten dirty mutt like you.
Lobo: (being offended as he glared at Yamato) Hey! I don't have fleas, thank you very much!
Kobo: Never mind that, Look, Wuya is out again. (points at her)
Me: (grins) I already now read this ch 3, going to read ch 4! (runs to read the fourth chapter)
Khu: Looks like I will tell Marc to replace Rai's bed with mat as a prank. (rubs his chin in dark thought since he's a Pedrosa, of course)
Me: Isn't bit too far, Khu?
Khu: (shrugs) We're Pedrosa.
Lobo: Well, Clay's a werewolf, huh. Too gentle for a wolf if you ask me.
Yamato: At least he's not a lecherous flea-bitten dirty mutt like you.
Lobo: (being offended as he glared at Yamato) Hey! I don't have fleas, thank you very much!
Kobo: Never mind that, Look, Wuya is out again. (points at her)
Me: (grins) I already now read this ch 3, going to read ch 4! (runs to read the fourth chapter)
1/14/2012 c2 DeafLizgon
Me: I'm glad they found Raimundo. They're not lying when the wind kid is hard to tame or train. (amused grin)
Khu: No kidding. (nods in agreement) He often get in trouble a lot because he's too easy bored and tends to get his attentions in his own way.
Me: Yeah. (to Alex) I can't wait to see what happen when all Xiaolin Dragons comes together in next chapter! (excited grins)
Me: I'm glad they found Raimundo. They're not lying when the wind kid is hard to tame or train. (amused grin)
Khu: No kidding. (nods in agreement) He often get in trouble a lot because he's too easy bored and tends to get his attentions in his own way.
Me: Yeah. (to Alex) I can't wait to see what happen when all Xiaolin Dragons comes together in next chapter! (excited grins)
1/13/2012 c1 DeafLizgon
Me: (excited) A fantasy/adventure supernatural type story! (to Khu) I can see why Evila insists us to go read here.
Khu: (nod in agreement, smiles) Also I'm sure our werewolves would like to read as well, right guys?
Lobo: Well, at least those are hot chicks! (drooling over Aya and Rei)
Kobo: (looked away from his lecherous brother, pretends he didn't know him) Since it's been 1,500 years, I wonder Humans and Demons finally been in peace? (rub chin, looking interested) All my questions will be answered once the chapters in this story will be all completed.
Me: Which it means, we are looking forward to see more new chapter updates!
Me: (excited) A fantasy/adventure supernatural type story! (to Khu) I can see why Evila insists us to go read here.
Khu: (nod in agreement, smiles) Also I'm sure our werewolves would like to read as well, right guys?
Lobo: Well, at least those are hot chicks! (drooling over Aya and Rei)
Kobo: (looked away from his lecherous brother, pretends he didn't know him) Since it's been 1,500 years, I wonder Humans and Demons finally been in peace? (rub chin, looking interested) All my questions will be answered once the chapters in this story will be all completed.
Me: Which it means, we are looking forward to see more new chapter updates!
12/31/2011 c1 12TornadoWeirdo
Pretty interesting, especially the idea that the demons have some evil AND some good. Just work on that spelling and grammar, and everything will be fine and dandy!
12TornadoWeirdoPretty interesting, especially the idea that the demons have some evil AND some good. Just work on that spelling and grammar, and everything will be fine and dandy!