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12/16/2012 c1 4hiddenhibernian
Really liked this, you set up your AU very neatly and didn't over-explain things - it works much better when there's a bit of mystery left! A sequel would be nice - or a prequel :)
10/12/2012 c1 whitegurl2013
I can't wait to read more!
10/11/2012 c1 3January
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8/6/2012 c1 Noble Korhedron
Tell you what, you re-work this and I'll give you a verdict on the whole thing, m'kay? :-)
7/29/2012 c1 1angel897
loved it
2/21/2012 c1 59LJ Summers
Aw, this is sweet! I would love to see more of their initial conversations... Dating Carlisle is SO SWEET. :)
1/24/2012 c1 sanglin
It's a really great start! Hope you update this and resonating light soon!
1/6/2012 c1 Nissa-Cullen
I like this. I'm hoping you'll continue it. I'd like to know how things turn out for them. Is Alice with Jasper? Did she never see Carlisle or his way of life? Does she feed from humans? Bella knew about the eyes so I'm guessing no.
1/6/2012 c1 2erythra-selena
oh wow, I truly love it so far. You describe every action in wonderful clarity and I find it easy to identify with bella as well as with Cralisle.

The words flow and give life to your story. Also, the plot is very interesting and I am very anxious to see, where you will lead us.

Please continue. Thank you for the time you invest into this story for us.
1/4/2012 c1 Lady Dragona
What a wonderful Carlisle and Bella story. I would love to see how Bella met Alice and for this story to continue.

I know that without Edward and Esme there will be no Rosalie or Emmett. I was just wondering if Jasper and Alice made it together or if that did not occur as well.

Did Edward survive the Influenza or did he die like unto his parents?

Thank you for such an amazing read.
1/3/2012 c1 SagaDevotee
ohhhhh, yummy yummy Carlisle. love this. more please?
1/3/2012 c1 4Bells. Just Bells
I thought your lemon was great! You have nothing to worry about :)

I loved the moment when they touched, it was perfect! LOL, and I also loved Charlie telling Carlisle he was Chief or Sir again! That made me laugh. So Charlie :)

Oh, and Carlisle...HOT! I'm looking forward to the rest of this story :)
1/3/2012 c1 1Lady Tazz
I LOVED it! I'm instantly drawn to C/B stories, and you didn't disappoint! I can't wait for more.
1/3/2012 c1 19IamTheAlleyCat
Thank you so much for this little gem !

I loved the twist that you took on canon. It is definitely not what I had expected, but in a very very good way.

I read that there are outtakes. Me want!

I know how plot bunnies are, but if you ever want to make this into a multi chapter, I'd definitely love to see how you work it out.

I really loved this one. It was funny, I was fluffy, and it definitely left me wanting more.

Way to go!

Alley Cat.
1/1/2012 c1 eli-dunbigboot
*fangirly squeal* I am SO going to put this story on alert! Wowee! I assume Bella knows about vampires through Alice. You know what? I think this is the first time I've read Carlisle/Bella (I'm not adverse to the pairing, it's just the randomness of how I pick fics to read).
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