for Practice to Deceive5/17/2012 c22 shaz308
Well he will soon find out if he will get his girl back or ot. All signs point to yes though. Looking forward to your next update, thanks.
Well he will soon find out if he will get his girl back or ot. All signs point to yes though. Looking forward to your next update, thanks.
5/17/2012 c22 GorGirl
ohhhhhh you cliffy bitch. I hope Jake did talk to her, since he's the one that got Edward into the hot water. I hope he gives her his new journal. Thanks for getting them together, even if it was only for a second.
ohhhhhh you cliffy bitch. I hope Jake did talk to her, since he's the one that got Edward into the hot water. I hope he gives her his new journal. Thanks for getting them together, even if it was only for a second.
5/17/2012 c22 annaharding
Not nice, the cliffie! Is she happy to see him? Is she not ready yet? Hurry, hurry, enquiring minds want to know!
Not nice, the cliffie! Is she happy to see him? Is she not ready yet? Hurry, hurry, enquiring minds want to know!
5/17/2012 c22 
1jansails
Oh yes you are a cliffy b*tch!
How long we have to wait makes the difference ;)
Reading Edward's worries, his heartfelt cry to Bella was, "love me, trust me, believe in me... I won't let you down."
jansails/jan2
1jansailsOh yes you are a cliffy b*tch!
How long we have to wait makes the difference ;)
Reading Edward's worries, his heartfelt cry to Bella was, "love me, trust me, believe in me... I won't let you down."
jansails/jan2
5/17/2012 c22 Courtney37
Ooh cliffy! But Edward sounds yummy! Emmett's on our side with the details. Lol! I can't wait for Bella's reaction to Edwards change now. Thanks again. Bye for now.
Ooh cliffy! But Edward sounds yummy! Emmett's on our side with the details. Lol! I can't wait for Bella's reaction to Edwards change now. Thanks again. Bye for now.
5/17/2012 c22 3Maplestyle
I don't think you are a bitch BB..evil and mean maybe but not a bitch ;)
Great chapter. I knew she wasn't going to believe him about the girls. You almost made me cry again with this chapter. Maybe I'm just sensative!
3MaplestyleI don't think you are a bitch BB..evil and mean maybe but not a bitch ;)
Great chapter. I knew she wasn't going to believe him about the girls. You almost made me cry again with this chapter. Maybe I'm just sensative!
5/17/2012 c22 12evilnat
ohhhhhh you cliffy bitch. hahah how many people said it?
Great chapter, not as down as i thought it would be! Truthfully i think Bella is being to hard on Edward, she's dragging it out, at one point when she wouldn't answer the phone or return his calls i was thinking "just end it!" it wasn't fair to treat him like that and say he ruined them, it did take two. she believed stuff and didn't want to work it out. I know he was *mainly* to blame but i just started feeling sorry for him, she held all the power. He did the right thing threatening to go home!
Im glad he managed to survive training and cant wait to see where it goes now. hopefully we cant get any lower! haha
thanks mate!
xx
12evilnatohhhhhh you cliffy bitch. hahah how many people said it?
Great chapter, not as down as i thought it would be! Truthfully i think Bella is being to hard on Edward, she's dragging it out, at one point when she wouldn't answer the phone or return his calls i was thinking "just end it!" it wasn't fair to treat him like that and say he ruined them, it did take two. she believed stuff and didn't want to work it out. I know he was *mainly* to blame but i just started feeling sorry for him, she held all the power. He did the right thing threatening to go home!
Im glad he managed to survive training and cant wait to see where it goes now. hopefully we cant get any lower! haha
thanks mate!
xx
5/17/2012 c22 Magentablue
Great chapter! Really liked the letter from Jake. Next week can't come soon enough!
Great chapter! Really liked the letter from Jake. Next week can't come soon enough!
5/17/2012 c22 4HollBeth
You kiddin'. I love you more'n my coffe, and that's saying something! Besides, that is the GOOD kind of cliffie! At least it better be O.o ;)
The Jake thing - while it's something I felt he ought to want to do (fix what he broke), I just figured his story was over. Surprised, a little wary, but mostly really glad he explained and apologized.
Edward's letter? Perfection...
4HollBethYou kiddin'. I love you more'n my coffe, and that's saying something! Besides, that is the GOOD kind of cliffie! At least it better be O.o ;)
The Jake thing - while it's something I felt he ought to want to do (fix what he broke), I just figured his story was over. Surprised, a little wary, but mostly really glad he explained and apologized.
Edward's letter? Perfection...