for The Beauty and the Blind Beast3/20/2012 c6 deemama66
Good ...remember ...research ...and a even flow and rythm
Waiting for the next one
Good ...remember ...research ...and a even flow and rythm
Waiting for the next one
2/7/2012 c5 deemama66
Very good
The flows still there and the plot thickens
Thumbs up ..
Waiting for the new chapyer
Very good
The flows still there and the plot thickens
Thumbs up ..
Waiting for the new chapyer
1/25/2012 c4 deemama66
Short but to the point and the flow was not interrupted ..very good ..yes very good indeed ..*high fives *
Short but to the point and the flow was not interrupted ..very good ..yes very good indeed ..*high fives *
1/25/2012 c4 
13DarkwingDuckie
I think this story has so much potential to go so many places and am a bit dissapointed in the short chapter. I do hope you continue writing because I really really want to know what happens next!
13DarkwingDuckieI think this story has so much potential to go so many places and am a bit dissapointed in the short chapter. I do hope you continue writing because I really really want to know what happens next!
1/13/2012 c3 deemama66
Very good Sandra
Flowed without interruption
Something that might make it easier...?..hold the conversations in your head ..nods
Be Ianto ..then Jack ..shrugs..people might think your crazy ..nods
But it usually works..shrugs..
The trying to get the plot to work is one of the reasons I don't right
But I love to read ..and this is coming along fine ..
Question ..how did Ianto become blind ..?
Maybe that's one of the things that you could write next
Ianto explaining to Jack or Jack finding out from a housekeeper or?
Very good Sandra
Flowed without interruption
Something that might make it easier...?..hold the conversations in your head ..nods
Be Ianto ..then Jack ..shrugs..people might think your crazy ..nods
But it usually works..shrugs..
The trying to get the plot to work is one of the reasons I don't right
But I love to read ..and this is coming along fine ..
Question ..how did Ianto become blind ..?
Maybe that's one of the things that you could write next
Ianto explaining to Jack or Jack finding out from a housekeeper or?
1/7/2012 c1 deemama66
Sandra ..its ..Yvonne ...
Yep ..the insane Yvonne you know and hopefully love ..?
Advice ..let the chapters * FLOW* TOGETHER ...nods
I love it so far ..OK ..?
Hell I love ya too ...but you need to let the chapters flow ..smoothly into each other ...
Waiting for more and yes I've read chapter 2
See you at the cult
Sandra ..its ..Yvonne ...
Yep ..the insane Yvonne you know and hopefully love ..?
Advice ..let the chapters * FLOW* TOGETHER ...nods
I love it so far ..OK ..?
Hell I love ya too ...but you need to let the chapters flow ..smoothly into each other ...
Waiting for more and yes I've read chapter 2
See you at the cult
1/7/2012 c2 deemama66
OK ..thumbs up
Didn't expect the blindness ..!
But I like this...
Waiting for an update
OK ..thumbs up
Didn't expect the blindness ..!
But I like this...
Waiting for an update
1/4/2012 c1 3nemosangel
Love this new twist Sandra... Glad you have not gone for Jack as the beast as it has been done several times... Look forward to how you will develop this story. (Cheryl from Cult of Ianto Jones)
3nemosangelLove this new twist Sandra... Glad you have not gone for Jack as the beast as it has been done several times... Look forward to how you will develop this story. (Cheryl from Cult of Ianto Jones)