for My Wedding Present4/12 c1 
7EmmaDel
I hate Bella. She is a bitch. She's a bitch all through the books. I hate the way she uses Jacob and how he always caves in. Even when she kicked him to the curb he was still there for her when she needed him. He's a glutton for punishment and she's a bitch.
She should have just asked for a three way with the stipulation that only Edward could penetrate her. That would make everybody happy.
7EmmaDelI hate Bella. She is a bitch. She's a bitch all through the books. I hate the way she uses Jacob and how he always caves in. Even when she kicked him to the curb he was still there for her when she needed him. He's a glutton for punishment and she's a bitch.
She should have just asked for a three way with the stipulation that only Edward could penetrate her. That would make everybody happy.
3/17 c2 1borednhomealone
I am totally supposed to be writing a case study for my psych class... but this is a helluva lot more fun! Seriously... need a smoke after that one! HOT, HOT, HOT!
1borednhomealoneI am totally supposed to be writing a case study for my psych class... but this is a helluva lot more fun! Seriously... need a smoke after that one! HOT, HOT, HOT!
3/2 c2 TheHoboCouple
GODDAMN IT THAT WAS HOT, HOTTER THAN ANYTHING I'VE READ IN A WHILE. You know how everyone writes smut bc they think they can but its just wannabe porn? Well, this is DEFINITELY not that! Also, I would want you to continue, just to see what Edward has in mind lol. But no, this feels..complete, and is perfect as it is! I don't ever read slash, but I'm glad I made an exception today. I've been having flashbacks of the MMA 2010 Best Kiss ever since! XD I blame that on you lol. LOVED IT! :)
GODDAMN IT THAT WAS HOT, HOTTER THAN ANYTHING I'VE READ IN A WHILE. You know how everyone writes smut bc they think they can but its just wannabe porn? Well, this is DEFINITELY not that! Also, I would want you to continue, just to see what Edward has in mind lol. But no, this feels..complete, and is perfect as it is! I don't ever read slash, but I'm glad I made an exception today. I've been having flashbacks of the MMA 2010 Best Kiss ever since! XD I blame that on you lol. LOVED IT! :)
1/25 c2 featherme
Very nice..I'll agree with Bella, "it was unbelievably hot. I was banking these images for later. This shit was gonna get me off for years." Yum yum yum.
I loved the ending. Edward is a naughty boy...just the way I like him.
Very nice..I'll agree with Bella, "it was unbelievably hot. I was banking these images for later. This shit was gonna get me off for years." Yum yum yum.
I loved the ending. Edward is a naughty boy...just the way I like him.
1/25 c1 featherme
Damn, she is conniving, but this is gonna be hot! I got so swept up at the end, when I read "... walked away, leaving him hard and wanting." I totally thought it said leaving him hard and wanking, which is probably true! Hehe
Damn, she is conniving, but this is gonna be hot! I got so swept up at the end, when I read "... walked away, leaving him hard and wanting." I totally thought it said leaving him hard and wanking, which is probably true! Hehe
12/6/2012 c2 4TheWritingFreak
Well shit. This is awesome slash. Best slash I've ever read. This was... interesting to say the least but good interesting.
If you were to ever do the Bella/Tanya thing you eluded to at the end of this chapter I would read it.
4TheWritingFreakWell shit. This is awesome slash. Best slash I've ever read. This was... interesting to say the least but good interesting.
If you were to ever do the Bella/Tanya thing you eluded to at the end of this chapter I would read it.
12/6/2012 c1 TheWritingFreak
I laughed at how ridiculously easy it was for Bella to have them both cave in. Yeah, so convincing but nothing really major in my opinion.
Two birds with 1 stone: I looked at that, laughed and said to myself- No pun intended.
I'm curious as to how this will work out so I'm going to read the next chapter.
I laughed at how ridiculously easy it was for Bella to have them both cave in. Yeah, so convincing but nothing really major in my opinion.
Two birds with 1 stone: I looked at that, laughed and said to myself- No pun intended.
I'm curious as to how this will work out so I'm going to read the next chapter.
10/25/2012 c2 bbutterfly689
Loved this.I think edward loved it way more than jacob. I think Edward wouldn't hv a problem doing it again. I just wish bella could hv touched jacob a little. Great story.
Loved this.I think edward loved it way more than jacob. I think Edward wouldn't hv a problem doing it again. I just wish bella could hv touched jacob a little. Great story.
5/30/2012 c2 missvamp007
U have to contine please,I thought Edward and Jacob was if Bella and tanya did it,that would be even be hotter,I'm begging on my knees,please please!
U have to contine please,I thought Edward and Jacob was if Bella and tanya did it,that would be even be hotter,I'm begging on my knees,please please!
5/30/2012 c2 missvamp007
U have to contine please,I thought Edward and Jacob was if Bella and tanya did it,that would be even be hotter,I'm begging on my knees,please please!
U have to contine please,I thought Edward and Jacob was if Bella and tanya did it,that would be even be hotter,I'm begging on my knees,please please!