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5/30/2012 c1 missvamp007
Oh my,I'm gonna love the next chapter.I also love this chapter.
5/29/2012 c2 cbzoo
great job
4/23/2012 c2 OcSickGirl
Ohhh that was good...and I love the way you ended it. So fucking hot!
4/23/2012 c1 OcSickGirl
Ok, wait did she just tell both guys they were gonna be the ones doing the fucking? LOL, this is gonna be good!
4/10/2012 c2 BurchGirl
You HAVE to give us Bella & Tanya. I know I'm not the only one who has requested it. Come on. PLEASE!
2/10/2012 c2 1eternallyedward
Now this is what I wanted to see in BD. Incredibly hot.
2/9/2012 c2 1Twilight0Forever
I liked it, very much! But the best part? The last line. "I have a favor to ask, Tanya." I wonder how Bella will react? -Laughs evilly-
2/3/2012 c2 Princess Mishawaka
This was really good. I love the way you write. It is so smooth and clear so I could understand and see in my minds eye every little thing that you were describing.

Jake and Edward are hot together and adding Bella to the mix really brought the story home.

Now Tanya and Bella?
2/3/2012 c1 Princess Mishawaka
mabarberella recommended this story so I thought I would try it and I am so glad I did.

This is a short review because...I want to get to the next chapter.

I am sure you understand.
2/1/2012 c2 mimimgr
HOT! liked the ending ;)
1/31/2012 c2 21Sophiepicklegirl
Ha ha! Loved the ending - the rest was pretty hot too!
1/31/2012 c2 grrrr.edward
hot holy damn. shit.
1/30/2012 c1 crystalshanta
Freaking loved this one! Wow, never thought about this situation. But bella had the right idea...that was the only way she could "be" with jacob without edward killing him! LOL!
1/30/2012 c2 9xoxocullenluverxoxo
Oh my god..that was so fucking hot! Please do an out take on this with bella and tanya...o jesus that would be somethin...pleeease!
1/30/2012 c2 18EdwardsMate4ever
so so hot...loved it
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