for Pride3/18 c1 LadyMardore
Now that I'm barely busy with things I look forward to finally commenting on your work :) I'll be passing out reviews time to time on some of the Chapters to express my opinion personally on them when I couldn't. But now be ready lol!
Now that I'm barely busy with things I look forward to finally commenting on your work :) I'll be passing out reviews time to time on some of the Chapters to express my opinion personally on them when I couldn't. But now be ready lol!
3/10 c29 CripptedAngel
Well we finally finished it! After many coming-overs and Skype meet-ups we finished it with one more sleepover. I(both of our opinions) loved it, it has to be the best SetoxAtem story we have read (and mind you we read a LOT of them, wrote them as we go) but this is most likely the best. I think I'll stop searching for SetoxAtem stories for now because so far this one just takes the cake, and the icecream, and the pie, and all the other sweets you can think of. Well done, a wonderful job! :)
-Crippted and LadyMardore
Well we finally finished it! After many coming-overs and Skype meet-ups we finished it with one more sleepover. I(both of our opinions) loved it, it has to be the best SetoxAtem story we have read (and mind you we read a LOT of them, wrote them as we go) but this is most likely the best. I think I'll stop searching for SetoxAtem stories for now because so far this one just takes the cake, and the icecream, and the pie, and all the other sweets you can think of. Well done, a wonderful job! :)
-Crippted and LadyMardore
3/1 c10 CripptedAngel
Lol hours of reading and we stopped at this Chapter, just as we were talking about Atem's Egyptian body here it is mentioned on this Chapter! Major coincidence haha
Lol hours of reading and we stopped at this Chapter, just as we were talking about Atem's Egyptian body here it is mentioned on this Chapter! Major coincidence haha
1/12 c29 
22TexasDreamer01
... There is a lot more to astrology than sun signs, yes. From what you have described in your note, his sun sign and Mars placement are probably both in Scorpio (as Mars is typically prescribed for the men in a person's life, and seeing as he went for a man, would describe his lover as well). Aquarius would mostly likely be his moon sign, as the moon in astrology represents emotions and how a person deals with them.
But, a great story, regardless! Someone on tumblr recced it when I was browsing through the Prideshipping tag, and it certainly has lived up to expectations. I can honestly say I ship it now. XD
22TexasDreamer01... There is a lot more to astrology than sun signs, yes. From what you have described in your note, his sun sign and Mars placement are probably both in Scorpio (as Mars is typically prescribed for the men in a person's life, and seeing as he went for a man, would describe his lover as well). Aquarius would mostly likely be his moon sign, as the moon in astrology represents emotions and how a person deals with them.
But, a great story, regardless! Someone on tumblr recced it when I was browsing through the Prideshipping tag, and it certainly has lived up to expectations. I can honestly say I ship it now. XD
11/20/2012 c29 2EvilMidget6
Finished!...and enjoyed thoroughly :)
Got a particularly crappy day at work coming up tomorrow - thank you so much for distracting me from it, might actually be able to drop off now this has relaxed my mind.
Great story.
2EvilMidget6Finished!...and enjoyed thoroughly :)
Got a particularly crappy day at work coming up tomorrow - thank you so much for distracting me from it, might actually be able to drop off now this has relaxed my mind.
Great story.
11/20/2012 c25 EvilMidget6
Yay - the rest is here - for some reason my drop down went weird and wasn't showing the rest of the chapters...phew...happy now and off to read!
Yay - the rest is here - for some reason my drop down went weird and wasn't showing the rest of the chapters...phew...happy now and off to read!
11/20/2012 c24 EvilMidget6
Absolutely loving your story - tension now almost killing me - I'm going to see if there's a sequel or whether I have to await an update...
Your Atem/Kaiba relationship is very compelling stuff and I've been loving the storyline.
Come on Kaiba - that's some pretty strong desire - give in to it already!
Thanks for sharing this :)
Absolutely loving your story - tension now almost killing me - I'm going to see if there's a sequel or whether I have to await an update...
Your Atem/Kaiba relationship is very compelling stuff and I've been loving the storyline.
Come on Kaiba - that's some pretty strong desire - give in to it already!
Thanks for sharing this :)
11/20/2012 c29 8Bunny-Chan The Kick-Ass Ninja
So after reading this, I must say that I am in love. I really, really like how you captured Kaiba's personality so well. I love your writing style as well. Amazing!
8Bunny-Chan The Kick-Ass NinjaSo after reading this, I must say that I am in love. I really, really like how you captured Kaiba's personality so well. I love your writing style as well. Amazing!
10/15/2012 c29 4cuddlykids
Thank you for the story! Loved it xD
Thank you thank you thank you!
I'm filled with gratitude because I'd been going through countless not-as-good fanfics earlier. Yours is one of the best I've read so far. Just saying. So again, thank you.
4cuddlykidsThank you for the story! Loved it xD
Thank you thank you thank you!
I'm filled with gratitude because I'd been going through countless not-as-good fanfics earlier. Yours is one of the best I've read so far. Just saying. So again, thank you.
7/2/2012 c29 Guest
I am incredibly happy to see the extra additions in the last-chapter re-write. LOVE how it turned out. It was at least satisfying in the first round, but I like the second version much better. There was more play between the characters, which is always fun (and was always one of my favorite parts of the show). I really enjoy reading about Seto being relaxed and laughing/smiling - it always warms me up a bit to think of him being happy. Yay Atem for finally putting a genuine smile on that man's face! Once again, I feel like you've done such an excellent job at keeping with the characters. (Often times, I can read a line of dialogue and hear it in my head clearly read in the character's anime voice. Very cool! I think that means you're doing a great job.) I'm so looking forward to having more of your YGO stories to read! I hadn't lost interest in this one - at all - but I got very busy right around the time you were wrapping up the story. I got to finish reading but never left my final review. Now that I've noticed this great addition, I just had to give more praise. You do great work, and I think I just might have to re-read this once... or a few times... between now and whenever you might get another story out :) Can't wait!
-Jill
I am incredibly happy to see the extra additions in the last-chapter re-write. LOVE how it turned out. It was at least satisfying in the first round, but I like the second version much better. There was more play between the characters, which is always fun (and was always one of my favorite parts of the show). I really enjoy reading about Seto being relaxed and laughing/smiling - it always warms me up a bit to think of him being happy. Yay Atem for finally putting a genuine smile on that man's face! Once again, I feel like you've done such an excellent job at keeping with the characters. (Often times, I can read a line of dialogue and hear it in my head clearly read in the character's anime voice. Very cool! I think that means you're doing a great job.) I'm so looking forward to having more of your YGO stories to read! I hadn't lost interest in this one - at all - but I got very busy right around the time you were wrapping up the story. I got to finish reading but never left my final review. Now that I've noticed this great addition, I just had to give more praise. You do great work, and I think I just might have to re-read this once... or a few times... between now and whenever you might get another story out :) Can't wait!
-Jill
5/21/2012 c29 3AliceMarieSwan
Waah! I love this so much I wish it didn't have to end! But all good things must come to an end, eventually... T.T I can't wait for your next great idea! Please keep writing!
3AliceMarieSwanWaah! I love this so much I wish it didn't have to end! But all good things must come to an end, eventually... T.T I can't wait for your next great idea! Please keep writing!
5/15/2012 c28 AliceMarieSwan
Just get the chapter out when you can, I'm sure everyone will love it, with or without character notes! This story is so amazing, I just love it! I can't believe it's over though! T.T keep writing and update soon!
Just get the chapter out when you can, I'm sure everyone will love it, with or without character notes! This story is so amazing, I just love it! I can't believe it's over though! T.T keep writing and update soon!
5/13/2012 c28 4ilovemanicures
HOORAY!
Their like actually together now! No more tug and pull, no more crying/begging. They've both admitted their faults, and are choosing to work with them, as opposed to against them!
I'm just so happy! *swoons*
I love what you did with the scarab. I really love what it symbolizes. And how it's been passed down from Atem to Set, and now Seto to Yami. I think that's really beautiful.
I love reading about past lives, dreams, and all that random spiritual stuff. I think it's a fun way to learn things about yourself, and others. And in my opinion, you did a fantastic job all the way through with incorporating both of their current/past lives into this amazing story.
Your characterization skills never cease to amaze me. There wasn't a single character you wrote that didn't seem like your own. Your plot was always exciting. The actions you made them take along the way were always entertaining. And the detail– oh my gosh, the detail!
In other words; you are super special awesome fantastically fantastical. And I love your work.
I'm looking forward to your epilogue, as well as your authors notes. Though I agree with you that some may not find it entertaining, I myself feel quite excited about it.
But whatever you decide to share will of course be enjoyable. So I'll just end this with saying thank you so much for making all this time so freakin' wonderful for me. Your story made me so emotional, I'm kinda sad to see it end. But I'm actually so happy for the characters, I think I can let them go now.
So again, thank you.
4ilovemanicuresHOORAY!
Their like actually together now! No more tug and pull, no more crying/begging. They've both admitted their faults, and are choosing to work with them, as opposed to against them!
I'm just so happy! *swoons*
I love what you did with the scarab. I really love what it symbolizes. And how it's been passed down from Atem to Set, and now Seto to Yami. I think that's really beautiful.
I love reading about past lives, dreams, and all that random spiritual stuff. I think it's a fun way to learn things about yourself, and others. And in my opinion, you did a fantastic job all the way through with incorporating both of their current/past lives into this amazing story.
Your characterization skills never cease to amaze me. There wasn't a single character you wrote that didn't seem like your own. Your plot was always exciting. The actions you made them take along the way were always entertaining. And the detail– oh my gosh, the detail!
In other words; you are super special awesome fantastically fantastical. And I love your work.
I'm looking forward to your epilogue, as well as your authors notes. Though I agree with you that some may not find it entertaining, I myself feel quite excited about it.
But whatever you decide to share will of course be enjoyable. So I'll just end this with saying thank you so much for making all this time so freakin' wonderful for me. Your story made me so emotional, I'm kinda sad to see it end. But I'm actually so happy for the characters, I think I can let them go now.
So again, thank you.