for Sekirei Eds9/11/2012 c1 
1PeLaPad
Carry on writing i wonder how it is going to work cuz she can only have one (excuse the spelling) asukarbi...
1PeLaPadCarry on writing i wonder how it is going to work cuz she can only have one (excuse the spelling) asukarbi...
3/29/2012 c1 Hmccullough9
XD, this is the most random yet creative thing ive saw, bar none.! XD those are two cometely different different anime zones tho.
XD, this is the most random yet creative thing ive saw, bar none.! XD those are two cometely different different anime zones tho.
1/21/2012 c1 18Harlequin de Rustre
Meh.
You do a good enough telling a story with just the Eds talking, but they need more depth than this.
Try writing a narrative, as well as keeping as far away from having the story overexplain everything, via the characters, the narrative, or just the general setup of introducing plot sequences oand characters.
18Harlequin de RustreMeh.
You do a good enough telling a story with just the Eds talking, but they need more depth than this.
Try writing a narrative, as well as keeping as far away from having the story overexplain everything, via the characters, the narrative, or just the general setup of introducing plot sequences oand characters.
1/7/2012 c1 ThaviduZeroX
Hi there Matfix, Its me ThaviduZeroX a.k.a Eric Wong. Listen, I did read the Sekirei Eds Fanfic as well as the Dark Bloody Report Redux, & the "true" ending of the The Big Picture Show (even though it's fan-made, at least this is a rare moment where we see Eddy's Brother truly care for Eddy despite his abuse towards him) & I even recently read The Shadow Neuroi Invasion, & lets just say, I REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE YOUR NEW ED, EDD, N EDDY FAN-FICTIONS (BONUS POINTS FOR IMPROVING SOME OF YOUR FANFICS)! Okay, now anyway I heard that the 1st chapter of this new fanfic that you need my help doing this crossover than OKAY I'll help you out with this fanfic so that everyone will know how did the Eds met the Sekirei in the climax of the Ultimate Final Battle, BUT unfortunately I'm not ready to make fan-made stories yet, so all I have to do is to is to give you ideas for this crossover correct? Good. So basiclly before we get to the ideas, lets see if you know the Sekirei series (If you forgot or don't know everything, go to the Sekirei Wiki Page.). Good, Next if my Ideas can't help out for this fanfic, you can get ideas by reading other Sekirei Fanfics (the most popular are Sekirei: The Fallen Sekirei, The Hopes of Ascension, Sekirei Reverse Rebirth, Claws & Kisses, Fifty Feathers, The Wind Flower, The Master of Discipline, Minato's One & Only Wife, Ocean's Heart, Sekirei Lifestlye, It's How You Play The Game, Be My Master, The Chronicles of Flame Sekirei, Broken No More, MMKMTKHMA, YSM, CU, SHH, 4KHB). Okay the Ideas for this Fanfic Crossover: Well Since this Chapter Involves the Eds meeting Musubi, I'm thinking that the next 10-15 chapters will involve the eds meeting & winging Kusano, Matsu, Tsukiumi, Kazehana, & Homura like in the Sekirei storyline, But to make sure this is a sekirei crossover fanfic, try having Miya, Akitsu, Kuruse, Yashima, Nanami,& Saki as the ed's [Ed: Nanami & Kuruse Edd: Miya & Saki Eddy: Akitsu & Yashima like how the eds get 2 powers for each in Super Eds] sekirei for this crossover fanfic. [the Reasons: Akitsu: Her terrible backsotry & Disused Number Status is just like the Ed's status as Outcasts due to their scams to gain acceptance which is good enough to be Eddy's exclusive Sekirei, Yashima: her abusement by her Ashikabi (who's possibly a bloodthristy serial killer who use her to kill people, no matter who or what, even if the victums is his own family just for his own amusement & really hates all kinds of Love & kindness to the point where he will GUTTED kids who were just getting along with themselves & didn't even bother him at all as seen with his fight against Yukari in the Manga) is just like how Eddy's Bro abusing Eddy, his pals, the kids, & even all of peach creek for his whole life (even to the point where he has no problem KILLING ALL OF THE PEACH SREEK POPULATION INCLUDING HIS FAMILY IN FRONT OF THE WHOLE WORLD) just for his own amusement means that she can be Eddy's exclusive Sekirei instead of her jerkish ashikabi, Kuruse: THE SEKIREI VIDEO GAME (which she appears in) NEVER GOT TO BE RELEASED OUTSIDE OF JAPAN, SO ANYONE BARLELY KNOWS HER AT ALL, which resulted in her becoming Ed's Exclusive Sekirei to make up the fact that she's a Video-game only character, thus never get to appear in the anime & manga, Saki: Not only do her spy capabilities & her disguise skills is just like the time where the ed's spyed on kevin in that one episode, BUT SHE ONLY APPEARED IN THE CONCEPT ART OF THE SEKIREI SERIES instead ofthe anime & manga which can be make up by being Double-D's Exclusive Sekirei in this story, Nanami: her Ashikabi cruelly taunts & look down on the Sekirei he deafeated like how Kevin taunts the Ed's Badly so much that she can be Ed's Exclusive Sekirei as an alternative, & Miya: Her loss of her husband Takehito is so great that her being Double-D's Exclusive Sekirei will let her moved on, get over Takehito's death & get a 2nd chance in love.] One last thing, about my EEnE X-Over Fanfic, I'm not ready to make this fanfiction for the fans, YET. the Reason is because I'm well aware that not only do I don't have what it takes to make a decent fanfic, but I fear that if I did make this fanfic at some point, I might possibly get a lot of flamers & negative reviews to the point where I might have to either cancel or delete my fanfic when things don't go to well, so maybe I will start this fanfic of mine when there are "Certain" requirements of some media to pass, improve my grammar capabilities, & start planning the Plot, character roles, timelines, pairings, plot Elements, & specific events that I have in stored for my Fanfic in the near future, possibly at the start of 2014. so good day to you & good luck.
Hi there Matfix, Its me ThaviduZeroX a.k.a Eric Wong. Listen, I did read the Sekirei Eds Fanfic as well as the Dark Bloody Report Redux, & the "true" ending of the The Big Picture Show (even though it's fan-made, at least this is a rare moment where we see Eddy's Brother truly care for Eddy despite his abuse towards him) & I even recently read The Shadow Neuroi Invasion, & lets just say, I REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE YOUR NEW ED, EDD, N EDDY FAN-FICTIONS (BONUS POINTS FOR IMPROVING SOME OF YOUR FANFICS)! Okay, now anyway I heard that the 1st chapter of this new fanfic that you need my help doing this crossover than OKAY I'll help you out with this fanfic so that everyone will know how did the Eds met the Sekirei in the climax of the Ultimate Final Battle, BUT unfortunately I'm not ready to make fan-made stories yet, so all I have to do is to is to give you ideas for this crossover correct? Good. So basiclly before we get to the ideas, lets see if you know the Sekirei series (If you forgot or don't know everything, go to the Sekirei Wiki Page.). Good, Next if my Ideas can't help out for this fanfic, you can get ideas by reading other Sekirei Fanfics (the most popular are Sekirei: The Fallen Sekirei, The Hopes of Ascension, Sekirei Reverse Rebirth, Claws & Kisses, Fifty Feathers, The Wind Flower, The Master of Discipline, Minato's One & Only Wife, Ocean's Heart, Sekirei Lifestlye, It's How You Play The Game, Be My Master, The Chronicles of Flame Sekirei, Broken No More, MMKMTKHMA, YSM, CU, SHH, 4KHB). Okay the Ideas for this Fanfic Crossover: Well Since this Chapter Involves the Eds meeting Musubi, I'm thinking that the next 10-15 chapters will involve the eds meeting & winging Kusano, Matsu, Tsukiumi, Kazehana, & Homura like in the Sekirei storyline, But to make sure this is a sekirei crossover fanfic, try having Miya, Akitsu, Kuruse, Yashima, Nanami,& Saki as the ed's [Ed: Nanami & Kuruse Edd: Miya & Saki Eddy: Akitsu & Yashima like how the eds get 2 powers for each in Super Eds] sekirei for this crossover fanfic. [the Reasons: Akitsu: Her terrible backsotry & Disused Number Status is just like the Ed's status as Outcasts due to their scams to gain acceptance which is good enough to be Eddy's exclusive Sekirei, Yashima: her abusement by her Ashikabi (who's possibly a bloodthristy serial killer who use her to kill people, no matter who or what, even if the victums is his own family just for his own amusement & really hates all kinds of Love & kindness to the point where he will GUTTED kids who were just getting along with themselves & didn't even bother him at all as seen with his fight against Yukari in the Manga) is just like how Eddy's Bro abusing Eddy, his pals, the kids, & even all of peach creek for his whole life (even to the point where he has no problem KILLING ALL OF THE PEACH SREEK POPULATION INCLUDING HIS FAMILY IN FRONT OF THE WHOLE WORLD) just for his own amusement means that she can be Eddy's exclusive Sekirei instead of her jerkish ashikabi, Kuruse: THE SEKIREI VIDEO GAME (which she appears in) NEVER GOT TO BE RELEASED OUTSIDE OF JAPAN, SO ANYONE BARLELY KNOWS HER AT ALL, which resulted in her becoming Ed's Exclusive Sekirei to make up the fact that she's a Video-game only character, thus never get to appear in the anime & manga, Saki: Not only do her spy capabilities & her disguise skills is just like the time where the ed's spyed on kevin in that one episode, BUT SHE ONLY APPEARED IN THE CONCEPT ART OF THE SEKIREI SERIES instead ofthe anime & manga which can be make up by being Double-D's Exclusive Sekirei in this story, Nanami: her Ashikabi cruelly taunts & look down on the Sekirei he deafeated like how Kevin taunts the Ed's Badly so much that she can be Ed's Exclusive Sekirei as an alternative, & Miya: Her loss of her husband Takehito is so great that her being Double-D's Exclusive Sekirei will let her moved on, get over Takehito's death & get a 2nd chance in love.] One last thing, about my EEnE X-Over Fanfic, I'm not ready to make this fanfiction for the fans, YET. the Reason is because I'm well aware that not only do I don't have what it takes to make a decent fanfic, but I fear that if I did make this fanfic at some point, I might possibly get a lot of flamers & negative reviews to the point where I might have to either cancel or delete my fanfic when things don't go to well, so maybe I will start this fanfic of mine when there are "Certain" requirements of some media to pass, improve my grammar capabilities, & start planning the Plot, character roles, timelines, pairings, plot Elements, & specific events that I have in stored for my Fanfic in the near future, possibly at the start of 2014. so good day to you & good luck.