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5/11/2012 c19 nicolespics
I'm so excited that you finished this story! It turned out great! Can't wait to read the next one! Thanks!
4/30/2012 c19 keyuqing
Ah...that's why you haven't updated for so long! You wanted to finish it completely! I love how you handled the story from several different points of view. It's very true that Luc will probably never do something like this again...Sam on the other hand... : ) Good story!
4/29/2012 c19 9gaben
Nice to have Abby's take and cleverly done within Tim's POV... LOL he knows Abby so well. Still can't wait to see Sams face... I could well imagine Tim trying hard not to laugh.
4/29/2012 c19 11FanofGibbs68
Very funny with Sam and Tim. Sam will not be pleased when he sees the new paddle. LOL! Super story! I enjoyed reading it!
4/29/2012 c18 FanofGibbs68
Poor Luc. The confrontation with Mom had to be done. It sounded so much like Abby too. Wonderful job!
4/29/2012 c17 FanofGibbs68
Poor Tim. No good parent enjoys disciplining their child, but knows it must be done at times. Good job showing Tim's feelings.
4/29/2012 c16 FanofGibbs68
Wonderful thought process in all the questions Luc had before he was paddled. At least it is over for Luc! Wonderful as usual!
4/29/2012 c15 FanofGibbs68
Good 'ole GG. He knew how to quietly and stoically help out by making the new paddle fit for a wayward teen. Super!
4/29/2012 c14 FanofGibbs68
I loved the hug beforehand and the talk. It is wonderful that Luc owned up to his mistakes. I hope Luc can accept that they love him no matter what. Wonderful chapter!
4/29/2012 c13 FanofGibbs68
I loved reading about Tim's inner thoughts and the process he goes through in how he will discipline his son. He is a wonderful parent to take the time to go through that process. Super!
4/29/2012 c19 118IMSLES
Hee hee, yeah leave it to Abby to explain it to Sam.

As always a sweet ending with everyone back on track.

~~Sue
4/29/2012 c12 11FanofGibbs68
So wonderful that Gibbs can be there for Luc! Super!
4/29/2012 c19 wandamarie
wow thanks keep up the great work
4/29/2012 c18 wandamarie
wow good work
4/29/2012 c19 Lajoci
Loved Tim's thoughts about explaining Luc's "ma'm" to Abby and then his hug.

Tim is concerned about Sam, wanting to make sure he is ok and what does he get?... a typical brotherly response, made me LOL. The visual in Sam's room with the rocking chair was warm and comforting.

I'm with Tim I don't want to be there when Sam sees the new paddle GG made!

Great slice of the lives of Tim, Abby, Luc and Nic. One of my favorite story lines.
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