for A Hidden Threat6/18/2012 c16 LoveyDovey
I have always loved your story! I have probably read it over three times because it is soo good! Thank you for being such an amazing author. Btw, I have an account. Fanfic is just being spaz and not letting me login. ;)
I have always loved your story! I have probably read it over three times because it is soo good! Thank you for being such an amazing author. Btw, I have an account. Fanfic is just being spaz and not letting me login. ;)
6/17/2012 c16 
2No.1 Merlock Fan
Wow. Just... wow. Possibly one of the best chapters I've ever read. Really loved the emotional insight we got into Lucan's feelings and his contemplation of the time that must come. *Swoon* He's so deep. God, that chapter has just made my mouth water for the next one that sounds (if this is even possible) even better! So yeah, loved it. You should be very proud my friend. Very pround indeed.
More please!
2No.1 Merlock FanWow. Just... wow. Possibly one of the best chapters I've ever read. Really loved the emotional insight we got into Lucan's feelings and his contemplation of the time that must come. *Swoon* He's so deep. God, that chapter has just made my mouth water for the next one that sounds (if this is even possible) even better! So yeah, loved it. You should be very proud my friend. Very pround indeed.
More please!
6/8/2012 c15 No.1 Merlock Fan
Only just got round to reviewing this chapter. It was definitely well worth the wait! Really liked the internal monologue of Carmen in this. You real make us feel her thoughts and emotions ofr ourselves, even though we don't even know what she's done or what she's talking about. Not really sure how you do that... But anyways, really brilliant chapter and your A/U has left me wondering what will happen to Carmen. I'm pretty sure Lucan will have something to do with it. Really looking forward to their confrontation by the way. Very intriguing. Hoping we'll find out more about what Carmen and Lucan got up to together in their past.
So another brilliant chapter and, as usual, has left me begging for more. Thanks for the update and definitely looking forward to the next one!
Only just got round to reviewing this chapter. It was definitely well worth the wait! Really liked the internal monologue of Carmen in this. You real make us feel her thoughts and emotions ofr ourselves, even though we don't even know what she's done or what she's talking about. Not really sure how you do that... But anyways, really brilliant chapter and your A/U has left me wondering what will happen to Carmen. I'm pretty sure Lucan will have something to do with it. Really looking forward to their confrontation by the way. Very intriguing. Hoping we'll find out more about what Carmen and Lucan got up to together in their past.
So another brilliant chapter and, as usual, has left me begging for more. Thanks for the update and definitely looking forward to the next one!
5/16/2012 c14 No.1 Merlock Fan
I'm trying not to start every review I do of this story with 'oooohhh', but you keep doing these lovely bits in the plot! Ah, and to think I thought that Carmen's history would be told in this chapter as well... Ah well, another uncomfortable wait perched on the edge of my seat until the next update... ;] Looking forward to it! Nice to see someone else terroring the baddies than Merlin himself, even if it is Carmen... Still loving Lucan by the way, can really imagine these venomous glares he gives people when he's trying to belittle them. Keep em coming and congrats on finishing school! Another 2 years for me... *Sigh*
I'm trying not to start every review I do of this story with 'oooohhh', but you keep doing these lovely bits in the plot! Ah, and to think I thought that Carmen's history would be told in this chapter as well... Ah well, another uncomfortable wait perched on the edge of my seat until the next update... ;] Looking forward to it! Nice to see someone else terroring the baddies than Merlin himself, even if it is Carmen... Still loving Lucan by the way, can really imagine these venomous glares he gives people when he's trying to belittle them. Keep em coming and congrats on finishing school! Another 2 years for me... *Sigh*
5/9/2012 c13 No.1 Merlock Fan
Ooh, why hello there again Lucan ;) May I just say you're looking mighty fine Luckey boy!
Aww, I find it really quite thoughtful that Lucan thought up such a cute yet so very sinister plot to get them all together like that. I love the way he (or you?) paired each persons' screams with the people they were most close to or had the strongest feelings for (and yes, I noticed the way Arthur heard Merlin's scream - very cute!). Very well thought out! Oh yeah, and thanks for the shout out in the AU! Much appreciated! Love you too gal! Wow, what a lot of exclamation marks! Well, thanks again and good luck with all the school work giving you so much grief! x
Ooh, why hello there again Lucan ;) May I just say you're looking mighty fine Luckey boy!
Aww, I find it really quite thoughtful that Lucan thought up such a cute yet so very sinister plot to get them all together like that. I love the way he (or you?) paired each persons' screams with the people they were most close to or had the strongest feelings for (and yes, I noticed the way Arthur heard Merlin's scream - very cute!). Very well thought out! Oh yeah, and thanks for the shout out in the AU! Much appreciated! Love you too gal! Wow, what a lot of exclamation marks! Well, thanks again and good luck with all the school work giving you so much grief! x
5/9/2012 c12 No.1 Merlock Fan
Sorry I didn't review for the last chapter but I really wanteed to see what happened next so I had to leave the blue button just this once. Hope you don't mind :) But I have decided. I am currently undecided on Carmen but I am totally decided on Lucan. He is one attractive evil sorcerer ;P Why do I always like the bad guys? But again, you never cease to produce a piece of amazing writing that is at the standard way about your expected one (did that make sense?) So yeah, cue next chapter! Please? x
Sorry I didn't review for the last chapter but I really wanteed to see what happened next so I had to leave the blue button just this once. Hope you don't mind :) But I have decided. I am currently undecided on Carmen but I am totally decided on Lucan. He is one attractive evil sorcerer ;P Why do I always like the bad guys? But again, you never cease to produce a piece of amazing writing that is at the standard way about your expected one (did that make sense?) So yeah, cue next chapter! Please? x
5/9/2012 c10 No.1 Merlock Fan
Oooohhh, Carmen has magic, I think I kind of knew inside of me :P So yeah, another brill chapter. I especially liked the way you got the desperation of Gwaine and Carmen as they tried to get out of the room. The thought of them being trapped in a locked room with that creature is pretty scary! Although, I still rather like him ;)
Oooohhh, Carmen has magic, I think I kind of knew inside of me :P So yeah, another brill chapter. I especially liked the way you got the desperation of Gwaine and Carmen as they tried to get out of the room. The thought of them being trapped in a locked room with that creature is pretty scary! Although, I still rather like him ;)
5/8/2012 c9 No.1 Merlock Fan
Haha, go Merlin and his magic! Not sure about Carmen knowing though... just seems a bit too abrupt and suspicious. Sorry, it's just me, probably because I don't like other women getting too close to Merlin cause he's mine, all mine! Mwah ha ha!
Ahem, well, another action-packed chapter and I'm sure there's more to come!
Haha, go Merlin and his magic! Not sure about Carmen knowing though... just seems a bit too abrupt and suspicious. Sorry, it's just me, probably because I don't like other women getting too close to Merlin cause he's mine, all mine! Mwah ha ha!
Ahem, well, another action-packed chapter and I'm sure there's more to come!
5/8/2012 c8 No.1 Merlock Fan
Oh gawd... Why do I like this evil guy so much? I think it's just the emphasis you give him to make him sound so full of pure evil and power. that last paragraph with Merlin and the sorcerer made my heart stop for a second. Seriously, you are such a gifted writer! Need to read more! NOW!
Oh gawd... Why do I like this evil guy so much? I think it's just the emphasis you give him to make him sound so full of pure evil and power. that last paragraph with Merlin and the sorcerer made my heart stop for a second. Seriously, you are such a gifted writer! Need to read more! NOW!
5/8/2012 c7 No.1 Merlock Fan
'Arthur could feel the magic bleeding from the sorcerer's eyes,' oh, I love that! Mind if I steal it ;P The one thing that I don't like about this Fic is that damn 'Reviews: 20' sign looming at the top of the page. Why have you got so little reviews? This is certainly one of the best Fics I have read, why don't others agree? Maybe they just can't recognise an extemely talented writer when they see one ;D Thanks for another amazing chapter and I will read the others soon! x
'Arthur could feel the magic bleeding from the sorcerer's eyes,' oh, I love that! Mind if I steal it ;P The one thing that I don't like about this Fic is that damn 'Reviews: 20' sign looming at the top of the page. Why have you got so little reviews? This is certainly one of the best Fics I have read, why don't others agree? Maybe they just can't recognise an extemely talented writer when they see one ;D Thanks for another amazing chapter and I will read the others soon! x
5/7/2012 c6 No.1 Merlock Fan
Agh! The harsh mistress of time has caught me again and the clutches of schoolwork are closing in around me... I am so sorry I have not been able to read more, I really am. Nag me!
I really like the way you make this sorcerer have this atmosphere of pure power and the way that he could take out everyone in the room with a single glance. Gives me shivers dude!
So yeah, interesting how this sorcerer reacted to Carmen, really want to hear more about that.
Ooooo, so intriguing! I need to read more! Thank you for this chapter and I will read more soon! x
Agh! The harsh mistress of time has caught me again and the clutches of schoolwork are closing in around me... I am so sorry I have not been able to read more, I really am. Nag me!
I really like the way you make this sorcerer have this atmosphere of pure power and the way that he could take out everyone in the room with a single glance. Gives me shivers dude!
So yeah, interesting how this sorcerer reacted to Carmen, really want to hear more about that.
Ooooo, so intriguing! I need to read more! Thank you for this chapter and I will read more soon! x
5/1/2012 c12 10Lady Willamina
Merlin and Carmen are going to have to combine their skills to defeat this Lucan character aren't they.
Still want to know more about Carmen's 'history' with the Pendragons and the previous struggle she had with Lucan.
Clearly, she came out better than him last time, this gives me hope she will again.
10Lady WillaminaMerlin and Carmen are going to have to combine their skills to defeat this Lucan character aren't they.
Still want to know more about Carmen's 'history' with the Pendragons and the previous struggle she had with Lucan.
Clearly, she came out better than him last time, this gives me hope she will again.
4/23/2012 c12 lordstarlight
I for one appreciate your writing and understand you have a life, just know that you are appreciated and good luck.
I for one appreciate your writing and understand you have a life, just know that you are appreciated and good luck.
3/12/2012 c11 Wholivesinapineappleunderthec
Oooooooooooo! I think the cliffhangers are killing me, but in a sort of enjoyable way? Does that make sense? I dunno... I guess what I mean is as horrible as they are they really do make the story better. You're writing everything at a great pace and I'm loving all of the action. I honestly check every day to see if this has been updated (No, that does NOT make me strange!) I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (in a completely non-creepy way)
Oooooooooooo! I think the cliffhangers are killing me, but in a sort of enjoyable way? Does that make sense? I dunno... I guess what I mean is as horrible as they are they really do make the story better. You're writing everything at a great pace and I'm loving all of the action. I honestly check every day to see if this has been updated (No, that does NOT make me strange!) I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (in a completely non-creepy way)
3/11/2012 c5 2No.1 Merlock Fan
Woah! Who is this mysterious stranger? And why the hell is he hurting our poor little Artie? But again, another epic chapter! I think I'm going to make a little Vocab Book just for your Fics. I'm one of these people who love finding out new words, dunno why ;). I love all the vocabulary you use! You can't just be doing your GCSEs! You are way too good of a writer to just be doing that! You should be on A levels, at least! But anyway, really liked this chapter and I am intrigued to find out more about this mysterious sorcerer! Love it!
No.1 Merlin Fan xoxo
2No.1 Merlock FanWoah! Who is this mysterious stranger? And why the hell is he hurting our poor little Artie? But again, another epic chapter! I think I'm going to make a little Vocab Book just for your Fics. I'm one of these people who love finding out new words, dunno why ;). I love all the vocabulary you use! You can't just be doing your GCSEs! You are way too good of a writer to just be doing that! You should be on A levels, at least! But anyway, really liked this chapter and I am intrigued to find out more about this mysterious sorcerer! Love it!
No.1 Merlin Fan xoxo