for Atonement7/27/2012 c24
34LadyPalma
This story is wonderful, really! I Liked very much charles/catherine and I Also loved elizabeth/thomas , gregory/Anna (this one in particular) and mary/Philip parts ... And then the encounters with God For the dead characters Was amazing! :)
34LadyPalmaThis story is wonderful, really! I Liked very much charles/catherine and I Also loved elizabeth/thomas , gregory/Anna (this one in particular) and mary/Philip parts ... And then the encounters with God For the dead characters Was amazing! :)
7/3/2012 c24
9Vader'sMistress
It is a beautiful ending, it has been a great ride, I am glad Lottie got her happy ending at last :) and KOA reunited with Charles in heaven :)
9Vader'sMistressIt is a beautiful ending, it has been a great ride, I am glad Lottie got her happy ending at last :) and KOA reunited with Charles in heaven :)
6/26/2012 c13
6Elfsquire90
good story thus far, just one issue, Charles Brandon married Henry's sister Mary Tudor not Margret, Margret was his sister who married the king of Scotland.
6Elfsquire90good story thus far, just one issue, Charles Brandon married Henry's sister Mary Tudor not Margret, Margret was his sister who married the king of Scotland.
6/26/2012 c23
23Vain x Life Poetess
Aww. I llve zgeorge and Jane Parker getting their happy ending in this life.
23Vain x Life PoetessAww. I llve zgeorge and Jane Parker getting their happy ending in this life.
6/17/2012 c1
15TheCuteVamp
It sounds like a good story but you can only have 4 children at once naturally and even that's unlikely.
15TheCuteVampIt sounds like a good story but you can only have 4 children at once naturally and even that's unlikely.
6/15/2012 c22
23Vain x Life Poetess
It is a just punishment, Ironic and just. Is this going to span into the next generation? :) Is Katherine still alive?
Update soon!
23Vain x Life PoetessIt is a just punishment, Ironic and just. Is this going to span into the next generation? :) Is Katherine still alive?
Update soon!
6/6/2012 c21 Vain x Life Poetess
The endings of Charles and Henry were sad, sad for Henry because of all the resentment he left behind like Gregory, I am glad AOC spend time with him instead of going and are happy together with two children, and Charles' death was sad. You depicted it very well.
The endings of Charles and Henry were sad, sad for Henry because of all the resentment he left behind like Gregory, I am glad AOC spend time with him instead of going and are happy together with two children, and Charles' death was sad. You depicted it very well.
6/1/2012 c20 Vain x Life Poetess
Gregory is a better man than her previous husband, he loves AOC for who she is, the last scene really summed that up, AOC is going to be happier with him. Poor Edward he is not made for that horrific stuff, Arthur seems to be hungry for that and adventure.
update soon.
VLXP
Gregory is a better man than her previous husband, he loves AOC for who she is, the last scene really summed that up, AOC is going to be happier with him. Poor Edward he is not made for that horrific stuff, Arthur seems to be hungry for that and adventure.
update soon.
VLXP
5/24/2012 c19 Vain x Life Poetess
I am slightly a bit worried Arthur showed too much excitement, hope its a one time thing, in contrast Edward seems to have inherited more of his mother's empathy, I love the relatinship you built around Gregory and AOC, poor Cromwell really gruesome death.
update soon!
I am slightly a bit worried Arthur showed too much excitement, hope its a one time thing, in contrast Edward seems to have inherited more of his mother's empathy, I love the relatinship you built around Gregory and AOC, poor Cromwell really gruesome death.
update soon!
5/22/2012 c19
5Failed to De-anon
Such a sad chapter. I really feel for the Cromwell's and Anne. I know children grew up more quickly in that era, but, I wonder what Charles was thinking taking children to a beheading. Update soon.
5Failed to De-anonSuch a sad chapter. I really feel for the Cromwell's and Anne. I know children grew up more quickly in that era, but, I wonder what Charles was thinking taking children to a beheading. Update soon.
5/7/2012 c17
23Vain x Life Poetess
Another good chapter, I loved how Charles as the series was sublte and careful in his delivery the marriage is over to AOC and happy that Elizabeth and Thomas are expecting another baby, the Mary and Philip scenes are lovely and it is refreshing to see she has a happy ending here and has a husband who does appreciate her.
update soon!
~Carolina
23Vain x Life PoetessAnother good chapter, I loved how Charles as the series was sublte and careful in his delivery the marriage is over to AOC and happy that Elizabeth and Thomas are expecting another baby, the Mary and Philip scenes are lovely and it is refreshing to see she has a happy ending here and has a husband who does appreciate her.
update soon!
~Carolina
