for The Sulfur Alchemist: Conqueror of Shamballa5/19 c1 lindy
keep the story going pls!
keep the story going pls!
3/4 c9 
1thegingershiroyuki
hehehe i read the prequel and now I'm reading the sequel, all i can say is; YOU'RE AWESOME MATE! YOU OFFICIALLY HAVE A NEW FAN! Oh and one more thing ... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
1thegingershiroyukihehehe i read the prequel and now I'm reading the sequel, all i can say is; YOU'RE AWESOME MATE! YOU OFFICIALLY HAVE A NEW FAN! Oh and one more thing ... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
2/8 c9 XxIllogicalRazzlexX
HI! I'm sorry I never reviewed before now..
But this chapter was really good! Update soon please!
TSA is amazing! It is one of my favorite stories on FF, and Riley is my role model! I'm a bit similar to her(personality)! I'm in different situations, and I think, what would Riley do?
And I was wondering, if you could pick a theme song for Riley, what would it be?
HI! I'm sorry I never reviewed before now..
But this chapter was really good! Update soon please!
TSA is amazing! It is one of my favorite stories on FF, and Riley is my role model! I'm a bit similar to her(personality)! I'm in different situations, and I think, what would Riley do?
And I was wondering, if you could pick a theme song for Riley, what would it be?
1/10 c9 3Gummy'Fish'Lover
I had the weirdest dream last night where this story crossed over with The Cask of Amontillado...and then it switched to Jersey Shore style (As in Riley was mad at Ed for falling in love with other world Riley)...I just want to know what I ate that brought that to my dreams... On a good note, It reminded me to come and review...So that is good.
I'll admit I have a slight love of Riley's chapters over Edward's. But I also really love your take on the character and how you've perceived him in the story. So I always get really immersed in the chapters, and then I get to the end and have to go find something else to read...
Oh Well. I loved the chapter! Hopefully your mother can find a stable job soon. If it makes you feel better, I got fired from Toys-R-Us on Christmas...though I don't know why it would. And I wasn't really sad about it...
I'll just stop typing now. Good Luck with your predicaments, update when you can.
3Gummy'Fish'LoverI had the weirdest dream last night where this story crossed over with The Cask of Amontillado...and then it switched to Jersey Shore style (As in Riley was mad at Ed for falling in love with other world Riley)...I just want to know what I ate that brought that to my dreams... On a good note, It reminded me to come and review...So that is good.
I'll admit I have a slight love of Riley's chapters over Edward's. But I also really love your take on the character and how you've perceived him in the story. So I always get really immersed in the chapters, and then I get to the end and have to go find something else to read...
Oh Well. I loved the chapter! Hopefully your mother can find a stable job soon. If it makes you feel better, I got fired from Toys-R-Us on Christmas...though I don't know why it would. And I wasn't really sad about it...
I'll just stop typing now. Good Luck with your predicaments, update when you can.
1/9 c9 5xXStarburstNinjaXx
First off, I want to applaud you for updating this when you're in such a sticky sitution. My family and I have also had it rough this past few weeks with some things, and I nearly broke down a couple of days ago (gawd I'm such a wimp). See that you're posting during a rough time is just amazing to me. I hope things get better for you. :)
Bleh I'm not good at this XP
I sense something not so good between Jacob and Ed *Grins evilly* Can't wait to see where that leads. just to be clear, because I am very very blonde, Elise is Riza's other dimension person, thing, right?
5xXStarburstNinjaXxFirst off, I want to applaud you for updating this when you're in such a sticky sitution. My family and I have also had it rough this past few weeks with some things, and I nearly broke down a couple of days ago (gawd I'm such a wimp). See that you're posting during a rough time is just amazing to me. I hope things get better for you. :)
Bleh I'm not good at this XP
I sense something not so good between Jacob and Ed *Grins evilly* Can't wait to see where that leads. just to be clear, because I am very very blonde, Elise is Riza's other dimension person, thing, right?
1/4 c9 kayleebaby13
So excited to have a new chapter and even more excited for the next one! I hope there will be another dream meeting soon; it's a unique way of having them communicate before German Riley shows up. Hope all goes well with you and your mom! Can't wait for another excellent chapter and the main storyline :)
So excited to have a new chapter and even more excited for the next one! I hope there will be another dream meeting soon; it's a unique way of having them communicate before German Riley shows up. Hope all goes well with you and your mom! Can't wait for another excellent chapter and the main storyline :)
1/4 c9 Rei13Reaper
Awesome chapter! But still... I want to see riley in our world SO BAD! then I can draw her! But oh well... I began drawing a awesome picture in art, I will have to see how it will turn out. I will tell you when it's done, and posted! I'm so exited for this story! Good luck!
Awesome chapter! But still... I want to see riley in our world SO BAD! then I can draw her! But oh well... I began drawing a awesome picture in art, I will have to see how it will turn out. I will tell you when it's done, and posted! I'm so exited for this story! Good luck!
1/4 c9 4StarTrail
Yay Riza! I've always liked reading about the lookalike's for all the characters that never made it into the Germany parts of the movie. Can't wait for the next update!
4StarTrailYay Riza! I've always liked reading about the lookalike's for all the characters that never made it into the Germany parts of the movie. Can't wait for the next update!
1/4 c9 1katsekala
Cool chapter! I'm sorry about your mom. Don't worry, be positive! Many kisses and Happy New Year!
1katsekalaCool chapter! I'm sorry about your mom. Don't worry, be positive! Many kisses and Happy New Year!
12/27/2012 c8 3Gummy'Fish'Lover
See my brain just goes "Did you review...yeah you did" and then I realize I didn't. Anyway, So I really liked this chapter, maybe it's just my love for Riley and Edward fluff, but I read this a couple times. (Just to randomly note, I was going to put 'Like 5 times' but I really don't want to start the 'saying like after like everything phase' again). Hope you and your family are still doing okay.
3Gummy'Fish'LoverSee my brain just goes "Did you review...yeah you did" and then I realize I didn't. Anyway, So I really liked this chapter, maybe it's just my love for Riley and Edward fluff, but I read this a couple times. (Just to randomly note, I was going to put 'Like 5 times' but I really don't want to start the 'saying like after like everything phase' again). Hope you and your family are still doing okay.
12/15/2012 c8 4StarTrail
aww, it's over for now...
tbh, i enjoy reading Riley more than i do Ed. i just like her point of view more :P
4StarTrailaww, it's over for now...
tbh, i enjoy reading Riley more than i do Ed. i just like her point of view more :P
12/7/2012 c8 1katsekala
I'm glad things seem to go somewhat well for you and your family. Great chapter! Many kisses!
1katsekalaI'm glad things seem to go somewhat well for you and your family. Great chapter! Many kisses!
12/5/2012 c8 5xXStarburstNinjaXx
Hiya! I somehow managed to miss three updates. :/ I really need to quit doing that.
Anyways amazing job. Jonah is a very interesting character so far and I like him already. Ed and blackburn's fight was awesome! :) I dont know if i've said this before but i think besides riley or shaori (i still dont know if i spelled that right) or hannah... okay so i like them all but thats not the point! :)
Cant wait for your next update!
5xXStarburstNinjaXxHiya! I somehow managed to miss three updates. :/ I really need to quit doing that.
Anyways amazing job. Jonah is a very interesting character so far and I like him already. Ed and blackburn's fight was awesome! :) I dont know if i've said this before but i think besides riley or shaori (i still dont know if i spelled that right) or hannah... okay so i like them all but thats not the point! :)
Cant wait for your next update!
12/4/2012 c8 Rei13Reaper
I love it! I would love to send you the pictures exept... I don't know how! I only have my iPhone to do anything with. And even I I were to they are REALLY ... old. Like, 3 months old. I would send you those, an some new ones, but I can't unless I figure out how... Maybe if you befriend me on Facebook? I'm mikayla buck, and my pic is me in a pikachu hoodie...I will post pictures that will give no hint to the fact that ou are writing,they will just be... Well, pictures. Unless you can figure out how to post on deviant art on the iPod. That's most likely better. Anyways... This chapter really gave us a taste of who Riley is as a whole. I LOVED it! How old is riley again? I forgot... 16, right? Can you give me the description of what Riley looks like in cos and the series? I have another urge to start drawing her again... Se has short messy hair right? And... If you could see one picture of Riley, what would it be like? Lol... Too many questions... I love this to DEATH! You are just so amazing! You portrayed Ed REALLY well. Ou know when you read text, you usually hear your own voice in your head? Well, when Edward was speaking I heard his voice. I couldn't help it, I could imagine every expression, move, because you wrote it SO well! Thank you for writhing such a perfect story!
I love it! I would love to send you the pictures exept... I don't know how! I only have my iPhone to do anything with. And even I I were to they are REALLY ... old. Like, 3 months old. I would send you those, an some new ones, but I can't unless I figure out how... Maybe if you befriend me on Facebook? I'm mikayla buck, and my pic is me in a pikachu hoodie...I will post pictures that will give no hint to the fact that ou are writing,they will just be... Well, pictures. Unless you can figure out how to post on deviant art on the iPod. That's most likely better. Anyways... This chapter really gave us a taste of who Riley is as a whole. I LOVED it! How old is riley again? I forgot... 16, right? Can you give me the description of what Riley looks like in cos and the series? I have another urge to start drawing her again... Se has short messy hair right? And... If you could see one picture of Riley, what would it be like? Lol... Too many questions... I love this to DEATH! You are just so amazing! You portrayed Ed REALLY well. Ou know when you read text, you usually hear your own voice in your head? Well, when Edward was speaking I heard his voice. I couldn't help it, I could imagine every expression, move, because you wrote it SO well! Thank you for writhing such a perfect story!