for The Out Of The Blue Job4/13/2012 c11 
5vguz04
My lady this story is amazing. You should have a sequel where they go to marissa wedding.
5vguz04My lady this story is amazing. You should have a sequel where they go to marissa wedding.
1/14/2012 c11 whovian42
Nice.
Loved Parker throwing herself off the balcony, Marissa almost having a heart attack, and Eliot simply catching the thief like it was nothing unusual.
And neat to bring back 'the locksmith'. Good character continuation. And that Marissa was smart enough to get the guy checked by the best LOL.
"by blood or bond". LOVE that phrase.
Well done. I look forward to your next!
Nice.
Loved Parker throwing herself off the balcony, Marissa almost having a heart attack, and Eliot simply catching the thief like it was nothing unusual.
And neat to bring back 'the locksmith'. Good character continuation. And that Marissa was smart enough to get the guy checked by the best LOL.
"by blood or bond". LOVE that phrase.
Well done. I look forward to your next!
1/14/2012 c11 Bails627
This was so good! I really want to see what happens with Eliot and Parker's relationship from this story. I know you wrote it a while ago but It would be fun to see how they act now that they are together.
This was so good! I really want to see what happens with Eliot and Parker's relationship from this story. I know you wrote it a while ago but It would be fun to see how they act now that they are together.
1/14/2012 c10 kurtainkid
Aww...Parker being friendly. That was great. And a little bit of E/P fluff. Always good. Love the story.
Aww...Parker being friendly. That was great. And a little bit of E/P fluff. Always good. Love the story.
1/13/2012 c10 saides
Beautiful! I'm so glad Parker had the presence of mind to talk with Marissa. Great chapter.
Thanks,
Mercedes
Beautiful! I'm so glad Parker had the presence of mind to talk with Marissa. Great chapter.
Thanks,
Mercedes
1/11/2012 c8 whovian42
So nice to get a new chapter every day!
I'm really enjoying this. LOL to Sophie being annoyed at the call-out on having been out-grifted.
And I just connected - "Hyperion Hotel"? In-joke for Angel?
So nice to get a new chapter every day!
I'm really enjoying this. LOL to Sophie being annoyed at the call-out on having been out-grifted.
And I just connected - "Hyperion Hotel"? In-joke for Angel?
1/10/2012 c7 whovian42
Oooh, a twist! Like it.
And Marissa went from 'not sure what Bryan was doing was so very bad' to wanting to bury him rather quickly once she found out he was really cheating LOL. Nice character touch there; people do react more viscerally to personal betrayal than to more abstract actions.
And hopefully Eliot will get his head out of his orifice soon regarding Parker...
Oooh, a twist! Like it.
And Marissa went from 'not sure what Bryan was doing was so very bad' to wanting to bury him rather quickly once she found out he was really cheating LOL. Nice character touch there; people do react more viscerally to personal betrayal than to more abstract actions.
And hopefully Eliot will get his head out of his orifice soon regarding Parker...
1/9/2012 c6 whovian42
Uh oh, jealous Parker and protective Nate... going to be interesting!
' "Er, they do now," said Hardison as carefully as he could.' LOL.
I'm liking how you're bringing out little character bits (Nate's effect on Missy after Sam's passing, Eliot's reaction to Parker's reaction :) about the 'making out' ) on each of them through the story. Not too much at one time; it's well timed.
Still enjoying!
Uh oh, jealous Parker and protective Nate... going to be interesting!
' "Er, they do now," said Hardison as carefully as he could.' LOL.
I'm liking how you're bringing out little character bits (Nate's effect on Missy after Sam's passing, Eliot's reaction to Parker's reaction :) about the 'making out' ) on each of them through the story. Not too much at one time; it's well timed.
Still enjoying!