for Be Careful What You Wish For1/26 c16 catinahat
another great ch. I hope you update soon
another great ch. I hope you update soon
1/25 c14 catinahat
the amazing thing about yoru writing is that you show us all pov.s and in three-dimensional, realistic way. your skill at writing makes all the people fully developed with conflicting loyalties, needs and plans just like every person on earth. It makes it possible to fall headfirst into your writing and forget the world around me. Wonderful.
the amazing thing about yoru writing is that you show us all pov.s and in three-dimensional, realistic way. your skill at writing makes all the people fully developed with conflicting loyalties, needs and plans just like every person on earth. It makes it possible to fall headfirst into your writing and forget the world around me. Wonderful.
1/25 c13 catinahat
love elizabeth being so politically savvy at such a young age - which historically she was supposed to be. I do feel for Mary. Nofolk's reluctance to take a stand is also spot ot with his character - he'd only claim kinship with someone capable of solidifying his power, not diminishing it. perfectly done!
love elizabeth being so politically savvy at such a young age - which historically she was supposed to be. I do feel for Mary. Nofolk's reluctance to take a stand is also spot ot with his character - he'd only claim kinship with someone capable of solidifying his power, not diminishing it. perfectly done!
1/25 c12 catinahat
brilliant chapter - the characterizations are exactly right. wonderful.
brilliant chapter - the characterizations are exactly right. wonderful.
1/25 c11 catinahat
wonderful ch. love the interaction.
wonderful ch. love the interaction.
1/25 c10 catinhat
another interesting pov shown in this ch. I can't help but wish there was a way for H to be exposed for what he is - to himself, to Mary etc
another interesting pov shown in this ch. I can't help but wish there was a way for H to be exposed for what he is - to himself, to Mary etc
1/25 c9 catinahat
I think you have captured both jane and henry's pov's very well. henry 'must' be right and must make others guilty in his mind so his view of himself doesn't change. jane must believe in Anne's evil work so henry can be seen as a good man. spot on.
I think you have captured both jane and henry's pov's very well. henry 'must' be right and must make others guilty in his mind so his view of himself doesn't change. jane must believe in Anne's evil work so henry can be seen as a good man. spot on.
1/25 c8 catinahat
favorite chapter to date. Brandon being faced with the results of his actions is not only justice, but also gives him the chance to redeem himself. I also like Anne getting the chance to defend herself to her accuser.
favorite chapter to date. Brandon being faced with the results of his actions is not only justice, but also gives him the chance to redeem himself. I also like Anne getting the chance to defend herself to her accuser.
1/25 c7 catinahat
love that your show multiple viewpoints in this.
love that your show multiple viewpoints in this.
1/25 c6 catinahat
love the interaction btwn brandon and anne.
love the interaction btwn brandon and anne.
1/24 c2 catinahat
this is such a great fic. this is my second time reading what you've posted thus far. I hope you continue. I love the introduction of Anya to the story, and Anne's bravery in the face of coming death.
this is such a great fic. this is my second time reading what you've posted thus far. I hope you continue. I love the introduction of Anya to the story, and Anne's bravery in the face of coming death.
1/2 c16 helenamtavares
I miss Anne, where is my Anne? Henry should go running to her arms searching for someone to direct his rage to and end up in her arms RSRSRSRS it would be so much fun! Great story, by the way
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I miss Anne, where is my Anne? Henry should go running to her arms searching for someone to direct his rage to and end up in her arms RSRSRSRS it would be so much fun! Great story, by the way
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12/7/2012 c16 pepperjill
fantastic. all around brilliant. especially Mary/Lady Bryan - i found that scene in the series to be very odd, personally, because while they don't seem overly friendly, I can't imagine Mary forgetting Lady Bryan's prior treatment of her. Yours is an interesting insight into that moment.
I very much hope you update soon!
fantastic. all around brilliant. especially Mary/Lady Bryan - i found that scene in the series to be very odd, personally, because while they don't seem overly friendly, I can't imagine Mary forgetting Lady Bryan's prior treatment of her. Yours is an interesting insight into that moment.
I very much hope you update soon!
12/7/2012 c15 pepperjill
Henry certainly has a gift for puttng the women in his life at odds with eachother. Mary loves Elizabeth, but H sets up resentment etc
Henry certainly has a gift for puttng the women in his life at odds with eachother. Mary loves Elizabeth, but H sets up resentment etc
12/7/2012 c13 pepperjill
excellent again! you manage to be sympathetic to both Mary and Elizabeth which is very well done. One small thing: Anne thinks of something knawing at her heart, I am fairly certain you mean gnaw (as in teeth tearing)
excellent again! you manage to be sympathetic to both Mary and Elizabeth which is very well done. One small thing: Anne thinks of something knawing at her heart, I am fairly certain you mean gnaw (as in teeth tearing)