for Ensnared: An Alternate Ending to The Hunger Games9/26/2012 c1 Guest
You should be inspired to know my students have plagiarized this piece!
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4/14/2012 c4 
3iLoveGale
That was beautiful. Well done. I wish your epilogue was the actual epilogue in Mockingjay.
3iLoveGaleThat was beautiful. Well done. I wish your epilogue was the actual epilogue in Mockingjay.
4/3/2012 c4 28driver picks the music
I loved this. I just finished reading the third book last night, and I find myself also loving the boy with the snares a little more than the boy with the bread. I did love Peeta, but I loved Gale a little more. Good job on a great story. :o)
28driver picks the musicI loved this. I just finished reading the third book last night, and I find myself also loving the boy with the snares a little more than the boy with the bread. I did love Peeta, but I loved Gale a little more. Good job on a great story. :o)
3/24/2012 c4 2shygirl04
Oh God. I'm sorry. I'm just. I'm really emotional right now considering I just cried twice in the past ten minutes. This was... depressing and sad. I can actually feel their pain and their sorrow. It's... You did well. You managed to portray and convey their emotions perfectly. This was amazing.
2shygirl04Oh God. I'm sorry. I'm just. I'm really emotional right now considering I just cried twice in the past ten minutes. This was... depressing and sad. I can actually feel their pain and their sorrow. It's... You did well. You managed to portray and convey their emotions perfectly. This was amazing.
1/14/2012 c4 1stephie 23
Even though I actually liked Peeta better than Gale in the first two books, I think Gale might have won out over me.
I really really wasn't a fan of book three, the war and all was fine, but the ending, and the way she killed off some of the characters (or made them disappear in Gale's case) was terrible.
This disappointment in the ending of book three led me to fanfiction, where I was able to read your story, and appreciate an alternate take on the ending. While it doesn't fix the horrible mess book three did the the series, it sure helped make it a little more bearable!
- To the boy with the snares, and to your story, which has a much better ending than the original! :)
1stephie 23Even though I actually liked Peeta better than Gale in the first two books, I think Gale might have won out over me.
I really really wasn't a fan of book three, the war and all was fine, but the ending, and the way she killed off some of the characters (or made them disappear in Gale's case) was terrible.
This disappointment in the ending of book three led me to fanfiction, where I was able to read your story, and appreciate an alternate take on the ending. While it doesn't fix the horrible mess book three did the the series, it sure helped make it a little more bearable!
- To the boy with the snares, and to your story, which has a much better ending than the original! :)
1/13/2012 c4 20Girl-in-the-Tiger-Kimono
Oh my gosh! i think i love you! THANK YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU!finally someone gets it! the boy with the snares is and always be better than the boy with the bread! THANK YOU! :D
20Girl-in-the-Tiger-KimonoOh my gosh! i think i love you! THANK YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU!finally someone gets it! the boy with the snares is and always be better than the boy with the bread! THANK YOU! :D
1/7/2012 c2 3TheWeekendSinner
Definitely in character, and an interesting alternative take on the story. Peeta's burial scene was great. Nice work! Keep writing.
3TheWeekendSinnerDefinitely in character, and an interesting alternative take on the story. Peeta's burial scene was great. Nice work! Keep writing.
1/6/2012 c4 4Cloud-Lover26
I loved it! So adorable :)
I hope you write more, you're really good at it!
Anywhore, good luck! 3
4Cloud-Lover26I loved it! So adorable :)
I hope you write more, you're really good at it!
Anywhore, good luck! 3