for Final Bloom12/27/2012 c8 Nessa671
Please update soon.
Please update soon.
11/20/2012 c8 yunabesaid
Hey, it's been a while. I am still interested in reading the rest of the story, but in the end, fanfiction is supposed to be enjoyable to the author, too, not just the readers. I used to write quite a bit, but then I fell into depression and was later diagnosed with Bipolar II. I haven't written since. It just isn't the same to me anymore...anyway, my point is that if you enjoy writing, write away! If you don't, then by all means, don't force yourself to! I'll keep on reading and reviewing your story as long as you write it, (Until I get married...then I won't have time.) but only write if it brings you pleasure. One note, though, I would enjoy it more if there wasn't as much foul language. Remember, there was no foul language in the game, just a few damn/dammit s.
Anyway, it should be interesting to see how T&Y's love story plays out, and how Tidus replies to the immediate question...
Hey, it's been a while. I am still interested in reading the rest of the story, but in the end, fanfiction is supposed to be enjoyable to the author, too, not just the readers. I used to write quite a bit, but then I fell into depression and was later diagnosed with Bipolar II. I haven't written since. It just isn't the same to me anymore...anyway, my point is that if you enjoy writing, write away! If you don't, then by all means, don't force yourself to! I'll keep on reading and reviewing your story as long as you write it, (Until I get married...then I won't have time.) but only write if it brings you pleasure. One note, though, I would enjoy it more if there wasn't as much foul language. Remember, there was no foul language in the game, just a few damn/dammit s.
Anyway, it should be interesting to see how T&Y's love story plays out, and how Tidus replies to the immediate question...
8/19/2012 c2 SexyV
Im so sorry for not making a review when I finished Reading the Chapter, but NoW i will. So far this STORY IS AWESOME! I like it how you make details on every Chapters, How YUNA's EMOTIONS turns out to be. The Last Time I had Read this story was I think Last 2months? Where Yuna ang Tidus meets at the Street? I need to read this sTORY again! It inspires me reading stories that has innocency and Purity!
Im so sorry for not making a review when I finished Reading the Chapter, but NoW i will. So far this STORY IS AWESOME! I like it how you make details on every Chapters, How YUNA's EMOTIONS turns out to be. The Last Time I had Read this story was I think Last 2months? Where Yuna ang Tidus meets at the Street? I need to read this sTORY again! It inspires me reading stories that has innocency and Purity!
8/10/2012 c7 yunabesaid
Awww! How sweet! Great way to end the chapter.
I'm glad that you updated again, and I'm sorry about your computer being so unreliable...Maybe you could get a backup, online or otherwise.
This chapter was very well written, barely any mistakes, nice format, and it carried the story smoothly and effectively, while holding my interest for every word. Great job!
TidusxYuna Always
Awww! How sweet! Great way to end the chapter.
I'm glad that you updated again, and I'm sorry about your computer being so unreliable...Maybe you could get a backup, online or otherwise.
This chapter was very well written, barely any mistakes, nice format, and it carried the story smoothly and effectively, while holding my interest for every word. Great job!
TidusxYuna Always
6/28/2012 c6 
6yunabesaid
This chapter is very good! The beginning was dramatic and nicely presented, and the rest went smoothly and at the perfect pace. (I was listening to the PERFECT song when reading that part! *Joking Sarcasm* Good time by Owl City! I REALLY matched what was going on! (*NOT*) LOL
I don't remember if the rest of the story is like this, but I noticed that you used quite an impressively large vocabulary. It made it all the more dynamic to read, though you should be cautious when using the story teller's large vocabulary on the characters, because they don't really speak like that. (For instance, Tidus used the term, "Um, okay…I guess I'll pretend that your answer holds sufficient information." The sufficient information part, in my opinion, was a bit much, for Tidus.)
Well, the picture you have posted now is also very pretty, but I really didn't mean to make a big deal out of it...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update, and also excited about Tidus and Yuna meeting! :D
TidusxYuna Always
6yunabesaidThis chapter is very good! The beginning was dramatic and nicely presented, and the rest went smoothly and at the perfect pace. (I was listening to the PERFECT song when reading that part! *Joking Sarcasm* Good time by Owl City! I REALLY matched what was going on! (*NOT*) LOL
I don't remember if the rest of the story is like this, but I noticed that you used quite an impressively large vocabulary. It made it all the more dynamic to read, though you should be cautious when using the story teller's large vocabulary on the characters, because they don't really speak like that. (For instance, Tidus used the term, "Um, okay…I guess I'll pretend that your answer holds sufficient information." The sufficient information part, in my opinion, was a bit much, for Tidus.)
Well, the picture you have posted now is also very pretty, but I really didn't mean to make a big deal out of it...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update, and also excited about Tidus and Yuna meeting! :D
TidusxYuna Always
5/7/2012 c5 yunabesaid
Hey, I just looked at your profile, and saw your profile picture...is that you? If so, you are REALLY pretty! (Don't get me wrong, I'm a straight female, but I think that it's ok to compliment other girls.)
I know, kinda random, yeah, but I just thought I'd tell you, cause I was litteraly shocked when I saw how pretty you are...
TidusxYuna Always
Hey, I just looked at your profile, and saw your profile picture...is that you? If so, you are REALLY pretty! (Don't get me wrong, I'm a straight female, but I think that it's ok to compliment other girls.)
I know, kinda random, yeah, but I just thought I'd tell you, cause I was litteraly shocked when I saw how pretty you are...
TidusxYuna Always
5/7/2012 c5 6yunabesaid
Nice! I really liked this chapter, though it was short, it kept my interest for every word of it! For some reason, it was really riveting to me!
I have never read such a menacing description of Wakka, and it made me chuckle.
It was also funny when Gipple whined as he told Tidus how he was a "man".
Brother was kinda OOC...
Anyway, great job with this one, though I had some trouble remembering what was going on, because it's been so long...Please try to update more often! (I know that if you can't, you can't, but I really do like this story!)
TidusxYuna Always
P.S. For some reason, I wasn't subscribed to this, but now, I am!X)
6yunabesaidNice! I really liked this chapter, though it was short, it kept my interest for every word of it! For some reason, it was really riveting to me!
I have never read such a menacing description of Wakka, and it made me chuckle.
It was also funny when Gipple whined as he told Tidus how he was a "man".
Brother was kinda OOC...
Anyway, great job with this one, though I had some trouble remembering what was going on, because it's been so long...Please try to update more often! (I know that if you can't, you can't, but I really do like this story!)
TidusxYuna Always
P.S. For some reason, I wasn't subscribed to this, but now, I am!X)
3/23/2012 c4 4Princess of Heart 11
NICE, I love this story! :3 I'm giving you a heads up on my story! Yuna's daughter travels to Lightning's world and meets her, after Serrah's killed by the organization 13 member! O.o Okay enough spoiling: Please review my story, even though its called: The Summoner's true love. :D Oh yeah, there will be more pairings in my Kingdom Hearts sequel please read it, and review whenever I make it. I will try to work on the first chapter today. It will be called Kingdom Hearts: Shattered Memories! It will have Dissidia, Anime like Naruto, Tsubasa/xxxHolic, A little bit of Kuroshitsuji, , Final Fantasy 13, maybe 13-2 (Depends if I pass FF13 and get the game soon, hopefully.) Final Fantasy X-2. (X-2 never happened after Final Fantas X. -_- But it will!) Final Fantasy 7, etc! You can PM me and tell me what you think about this cool Sequel I'm going to be working on!
4Princess of Heart 11NICE, I love this story! :3 I'm giving you a heads up on my story! Yuna's daughter travels to Lightning's world and meets her, after Serrah's killed by the organization 13 member! O.o Okay enough spoiling: Please review my story, even though its called: The Summoner's true love. :D Oh yeah, there will be more pairings in my Kingdom Hearts sequel please read it, and review whenever I make it. I will try to work on the first chapter today. It will be called Kingdom Hearts: Shattered Memories! It will have Dissidia, Anime like Naruto, Tsubasa/xxxHolic, A little bit of Kuroshitsuji, , Final Fantasy 13, maybe 13-2 (Depends if I pass FF13 and get the game soon, hopefully.) Final Fantasy X-2. (X-2 never happened after Final Fantas X. -_- But it will!) Final Fantasy 7, etc! You can PM me and tell me what you think about this cool Sequel I'm going to be working on!
3/9/2012 c4 6yunabesaid
This chapter's pretty good, it held my interest, and there were few mistakes. I think that Yuna should tell Lulu, but I can see and echo of FFX-2 here, so maybe it's your plan to have her not...
I like the fact that Tidus doesn't like his star-life...since he's gonna run away, it looks like, this should be interesting...Yuna runs from peace and quiet on Besaid to Zanarakand, and Tidus runs from fame and fun in Zanarkand to Besaid!
TidusxYuna Always
6yunabesaidThis chapter's pretty good, it held my interest, and there were few mistakes. I think that Yuna should tell Lulu, but I can see and echo of FFX-2 here, so maybe it's your plan to have her not...
I like the fact that Tidus doesn't like his star-life...since he's gonna run away, it looks like, this should be interesting...Yuna runs from peace and quiet on Besaid to Zanarakand, and Tidus runs from fame and fun in Zanarkand to Besaid!
TidusxYuna Always
2/17/2012 c3 Ashley Ayuso
I like it! this story has potential, can't wait to see how everyone will react with each other soon!
I like it! this story has potential, can't wait to see how everyone will react with each other soon!
2/11/2012 c3 yunabesaid
Nice! I think I can see where this is going, and I like it! Run away, Yuna! Be free!
You are VERY welcome for reviewing! I like to review the stories I read; I've written quite a bit in the last month, since I joined, and I know it's SO exciting to get a review! This was well written, not many mistakes, It seems that you have a talent when it comes to describing people.
I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work!
TidusxYuna Always
Nice! I think I can see where this is going, and I like it! Run away, Yuna! Be free!
You are VERY welcome for reviewing! I like to review the stories I read; I've written quite a bit in the last month, since I joined, and I know it's SO exciting to get a review! This was well written, not many mistakes, It seems that you have a talent when it comes to describing people.
I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work!
TidusxYuna Always