for One More Story5/16/2012 c7 
7TinaraXx
Oh my. I hope Henry is going to be ok. There were a few small mistakes but I give you a 9/10. Love the story, hate that Henry was hurt :( Xx
7TinaraXxOh my. I hope Henry is going to be ok. There were a few small mistakes but I give you a 9/10. Love the story, hate that Henry was hurt :( Xx
3/26/2012 c7 cmindsluver
Great work! update soon please ! :)
Great work! update soon please ! :)
3/26/2012 c7 8crayolakid0413
Hey I just picked this up at chapter 7... Wow. I really liked the way you began this with Jaj finding Henry that way. The details are great it's super angsty. I was hanging on every scene holding my breath that they would find Henry and he would be okay. It would destroy JJ.
I'd love to see more support from a teammate like Emily keeping JJ together. Picking up the pieces. But wow! Added to favorite author can't wait to read more
8crayolakid0413Hey I just picked this up at chapter 7... Wow. I really liked the way you began this with Jaj finding Henry that way. The details are great it's super angsty. I was hanging on every scene holding my breath that they would find Henry and he would be okay. It would destroy JJ.
I'd love to see more support from a teammate like Emily keeping JJ together. Picking up the pieces. But wow! Added to favorite author can't wait to read more
3/9/2012 c6 shamrockgirl
omg i feel so sad for henry!:(:( really good chaper though please update soon!
shamrockgirl ;)
omg i feel so sad for henry!:(:( really good chaper though please update soon!
shamrockgirl ;)
2/15/2012 c4 Carolann
"JJ had been upside at first, for the thought of her little baby growing up was bittersweet. Will thought his son was finally becoming a man" How can someone be upside? They can be upset but not upside.
"He have to fill that brain of yours with knowledge." Shouldn't it be "we" have to fill that brain of yours with knowledge?
This is why it's important to proofread before posting. The story in unreadable if you don't understand what the writer is trying to say.
"JJ had been upside at first, for the thought of her little baby growing up was bittersweet. Will thought his son was finally becoming a man" How can someone be upside? They can be upset but not upside.
"He have to fill that brain of yours with knowledge." Shouldn't it be "we" have to fill that brain of yours with knowledge?
This is why it's important to proofread before posting. The story in unreadable if you don't understand what the writer is trying to say.
2/13/2012 c5 HD
love this story. i hope you update soon :)
love this story. i hope you update soon :)