for My Son2/20/2012 c1 The Lost Violinist
Poor Maeglin, loyalties to his two parents and eventually straying just like his father. The last line held so much determination in it, a properly fitting ending to this small story.
Poor Maeglin, loyalties to his two parents and eventually straying just like his father. The last line held so much determination in it, a properly fitting ending to this small story.
1/17/2012 c1 
38Mornen
I can really imagine Aredhel, who hates to be bound down, finding pride in her son when he decides to be free. This story captured that quite nicely.
38MornenI can really imagine Aredhel, who hates to be bound down, finding pride in her son when he decides to be free. This story captured that quite nicely.
1/8/2012 c1 26CrackinAndProudOfIt
That was a pithy and well-written little drabble, and I liked it a lot! I especially liked this line, because of the irony it presents when considered alongside Eöl's words in Gondolin: "I deemed he was no longer of the House of Eöl." Good work!
-Crackers :)
26CrackinAndProudOfItThat was a pithy and well-written little drabble, and I liked it a lot! I especially liked this line, because of the irony it presents when considered alongside Eöl's words in Gondolin: "I deemed he was no longer of the House of Eöl." Good work!
-Crackers :)