for The Mirror5/10/2012 c1 
7Fortune Zyne
Very sad, I also go with the belief the younger twin died as Losgar...It must have been devastating to the remaining twin...
7Fortune ZyneVery sad, I also go with the belief the younger twin died as Losgar...It must have been devastating to the remaining twin...
1/12/2012 c1 5Sadie Sil - English stories
Well, it there is something wrong with you I hope it continue this way LOL.
This text is fantastic... every scene, every word. FANTASTIC!
Congratulations.
Sadie
5Sadie Sil - English storiesWell, it there is something wrong with you I hope it continue this way LOL.
This text is fantastic... every scene, every word. FANTASTIC!
Congratulations.
Sadie
1/11/2012 c1 Mornen My Real Review
To put it simply, I loved this story. It was beautiful. My favorite aspects were the words that his brother spoke to him and the image of him standing on the boat dock, his hair like flames consuming him. I could drown myself in that image. Or burn. But yes, I loved this. It was stunning.
To put it simply, I loved this story. It was beautiful. My favorite aspects were the words that his brother spoke to him and the image of him standing on the boat dock, his hair like flames consuming him. I could drown myself in that image. Or burn. But yes, I loved this. It was stunning.
1/8/2012 c1 27CrackinAndProudOfIt
Whoa, that was amazing! I loved the imagery, the emotions of his words, and his confused, somewhat-delusional thoughts. The lines in italics were the perfect touch, as well! :) Awesome work!
-Crackers
27CrackinAndProudOfItWhoa, that was amazing! I loved the imagery, the emotions of his words, and his confused, somewhat-delusional thoughts. The lines in italics were the perfect touch, as well! :) Awesome work!
-Crackers
1/8/2012 c1 20Galad Estel
I just wanted to tell you that I wrote the review below, not my sister, so please don't cotact her. She would be most annoyed. I forgot to log her out, before reviewing this story. Thanks a million!
-Galad Estel
20Galad EstelI just wanted to tell you that I wrote the review below, not my sister, so please don't cotact her. She would be most annoyed. I forgot to log her out, before reviewing this story. Thanks a million!
-Galad Estel
1/8/2012 c1 41Mornen
This was quite good:
"And I cannot live while he is dead"
that caputures a lot of emotion, I almost think that you should not have put "not truly" after it. It stands very well on its own
41MornenThis was quite good:
"And I cannot live while he is dead"
that caputures a lot of emotion, I almost think that you should not have put "not truly" after it. It stands very well on its own
1/7/2012 c1 85AzureSkye23
There you have it: the story of the Feanorionnath. They all go mad. Sooner or later, they all go mad...
I will tell you what I told Crackers. It is truly a complement when I say that you are very good at writing insane characters.
85AzureSkye23There you have it: the story of the Feanorionnath. They all go mad. Sooner or later, they all go mad...
I will tell you what I told Crackers. It is truly a complement when I say that you are very good at writing insane characters.