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Please update, pretty please?
Please update, pretty please?
9/26/2012 c3 
8Birdie Lo Green
Oh I'm so glad you included the Marauder's unveiled conversation between the twins & Remus & Sirius _ but
"I envy James, you know, that he didn't have to see us come to this."
*crying like I stubbed my toe*
The guilt seeping from between the lines! Wonderful writing as always.
8Birdie Lo GreenOh I'm so glad you included the Marauder's unveiled conversation between the twins & Remus & Sirius _ but
"I envy James, you know, that he didn't have to see us come to this."
*crying like I stubbed my toe*
The guilt seeping from between the lines! Wonderful writing as always.
9/26/2012 c1 Birdie Lo Green
-Sirius called him Lupin? *clutches heart & makes whale noises*
Also I cannot stop smiling...
"I have a life too, you know. I might have found myself a woman or something." Remus said, defensively.
"Well, have you?" Sirius prompted.
"Don't be ridiculous."
-"I got in a decent amount of practice after your incarceration." Remus admitted.
*wipes away tears*
Oh and may I suggest a better ending for this chapter...
'Sirius didn't end up going to his own bed that night. He crept in to the second floor guest bedroom and slipped under the covers with Remus.'
JOKING. This was so on point. Your dialogue is perfect, as are you my dear.
-Sirius called him Lupin? *clutches heart & makes whale noises*
Also I cannot stop smiling...
"I have a life too, you know. I might have found myself a woman or something." Remus said, defensively.
"Well, have you?" Sirius prompted.
"Don't be ridiculous."
-"I got in a decent amount of practice after your incarceration." Remus admitted.
*wipes away tears*
Oh and may I suggest a better ending for this chapter...
'Sirius didn't end up going to his own bed that night. He crept in to the second floor guest bedroom and slipped under the covers with Remus.'
JOKING. This was so on point. Your dialogue is perfect, as are you my dear.
9/25/2012 c12 CreativeWriter
Damn you Dumbledore!
Damn you Dumbledore!
8/28/2012 c7 18AshNox
Still loving this. I think you've conveyed Molly well. Her priority is her children and keeping them safe.
18AshNoxStill loving this. I think you've conveyed Molly well. Her priority is her children and keeping them safe.
8/28/2012 c3 AshNox
I have just read the first chapters, and I am loving this.
I actually find it very hard to imagine what Sirius must be like after coming out of Azkaban and everything he went through.
I think you have done a really good job with this, while hinting at Remus's life in those years, that no one knows about.
And I loved the way you wrote Fred and George being all impressed because they were meeting the Marauders.
One thing I wasn't sure about. You had Sirius say Remus had 'no where to stay' which I noticed because loads of people seem to think that Remus was living with Sirius because he was homeless and poor, but at the end of Goblet of Fire (which is only a few months before this?) Dumbledore tells Sirius to 'Lie Low at Lupins' so Remus had a house in August.
Hope that's not too nit-picking! I love you're story and am off to read the next chapter. :) Think I might just like to think Remus was there just because he wanted to be!
I have just read the first chapters, and I am loving this.
I actually find it very hard to imagine what Sirius must be like after coming out of Azkaban and everything he went through.
I think you have done a really good job with this, while hinting at Remus's life in those years, that no one knows about.
And I loved the way you wrote Fred and George being all impressed because they were meeting the Marauders.
One thing I wasn't sure about. You had Sirius say Remus had 'no where to stay' which I noticed because loads of people seem to think that Remus was living with Sirius because he was homeless and poor, but at the end of Goblet of Fire (which is only a few months before this?) Dumbledore tells Sirius to 'Lie Low at Lupins' so Remus had a house in August.
Hope that's not too nit-picking! I love you're story and am off to read the next chapter. :) Think I might just like to think Remus was there just because he wanted to be!
8/27/2012 c4 TheWalnutQueen
Such a good missing moment! I love Ron and Hermione as a couple, and I think we missed so many moments between them throughout the series. Loving the light humour, too :)
Such a good missing moment! I love Ron and Hermione as a couple, and I think we missed so many moments between them throughout the series. Loving the light humour, too :)
8/23/2012 c12 Dinky Dau
Due to the fact it's 0:25 in the morning this isn't going to be a very intelligent review :3
On the other hand I'm still up because I couldn't stop reading your fic, must count for something!
Well I wanted to say I'm immensely enjoying your fic and hope you will be able to update soon, you left us with bit of a cliffhanger I'm afraid
Due to the fact it's 0:25 in the morning this isn't going to be a very intelligent review :3
On the other hand I'm still up because I couldn't stop reading your fic, must count for something!
Well I wanted to say I'm immensely enjoying your fic and hope you will be able to update soon, you left us with bit of a cliffhanger I'm afraid
8/20/2012 c12 Lupinesence
Cool chapter, I'm rather cross with Dumbledore at the moment as I know he's gonna ban Sirius from going outside now completely. I don't see the harm in going to out-of-the-way places so he doesn't go stir crazy and I don't think he fully appreciates how much the incarceration at Grimmauld place is killing him.
Great to see this back :)
Cool chapter, I'm rather cross with Dumbledore at the moment as I know he's gonna ban Sirius from going outside now completely. I don't see the harm in going to out-of-the-way places so he doesn't go stir crazy and I don't think he fully appreciates how much the incarceration at Grimmauld place is killing him.
Great to see this back :)
8/19/2012 c12 18Kazo Sakamari
Ahh...I don't know if you mean to do this, but this chapter really made me hate Dumbledore. I know he means well, but honestly...
Anyways, thanks for updating! Please do so again soon!
18Kazo SakamariAhh...I don't know if you mean to do this, but this chapter really made me hate Dumbledore. I know he means well, but honestly...
Anyways, thanks for updating! Please do so again soon!
8/19/2012 c12 8MuggleCreator
Ooh! Dumbledore knows...
Is thsi gonna be canon all the way...? I forget...
8MuggleCreatorOoh! Dumbledore knows...
Is thsi gonna be canon all the way...? I forget...