for Who Are They?5/15/2012 c5 
1Esperanza934
Okay. I started out interested in the beginning of the story. Then you started rushing and getting all weird. I think this could have been a good story had you spent time on it and actually tried. If I were you, I'd start over and try again. Who knows? It might actually be good story!
1Esperanza934Okay. I started out interested in the beginning of the story. Then you started rushing and getting all weird. I think this could have been a good story had you spent time on it and actually tried. If I were you, I'd start over and try again. Who knows? It might actually be good story!
1/7/2012 c1 NarutoQueen
So far so good. Keep up the good work! :)
So far so good. Keep up the good work! :)