for Justice and Death2/7/2012 c1 
26CrackinAndProudOfIt
Oh, my goodness, I'm speechless! I so enjoyed your characterizations of the Feanorians in 'Righteous Deeds' and this fic was no exception! You captured Caranthir so well, and I loved the element of the song and his reflections on the past and his oath. The ending was so powerful, and I loved the way you portrayed death. The visit of Mandos was especially poignant. Excellent work!
-Crackers
26CrackinAndProudOfItOh, my goodness, I'm speechless! I so enjoyed your characterizations of the Feanorians in 'Righteous Deeds' and this fic was no exception! You captured Caranthir so well, and I loved the element of the song and his reflections on the past and his oath. The ending was so powerful, and I loved the way you portrayed death. The visit of Mandos was especially poignant. Excellent work!
-Crackers
1/26/2012 c1 sitara-asha
I have to admit that I'm entirely pleased when I find a fic where the Fëanorioni are backing Dior into a corner with their logic rather than with their swords. And that's certainly a battle that Dior had lost even before its beginning because, contrary to his beliefs, stealing from the thief doesn't make you the rightful owner, as your Celegorm aptly put it. To be fair, Dior is as responsible as the Fëanorioni for the ruin and destruction of his own kingdom. To be partial (like me), he's much more so.
A piece of good writing, in my opinion, so congratulations and sorry for reviewing so late!
Sitara
I have to admit that I'm entirely pleased when I find a fic where the Fëanorioni are backing Dior into a corner with their logic rather than with their swords. And that's certainly a battle that Dior had lost even before its beginning because, contrary to his beliefs, stealing from the thief doesn't make you the rightful owner, as your Celegorm aptly put it. To be fair, Dior is as responsible as the Fëanorioni for the ruin and destruction of his own kingdom. To be partial (like me), he's much more so.
A piece of good writing, in my opinion, so congratulations and sorry for reviewing so late!
Sitara
1/9/2012 c1 Noleme
Beautiful and sad, Gwen! You're a really good writer. I'd suggest you post this on CoE, as the section is in need of more serious fics, but I'm sure you've heard me say this before. ;)
The darker theme looks good in your writing.
Minor quip - you're writing Moryo wife-less?
Annnd... is it a wrong thing that I actually see more sense in the words of the Feanorioni than in Dior's? O_o
Beautiful and sad, Gwen! You're a really good writer. I'd suggest you post this on CoE, as the section is in need of more serious fics, but I'm sure you've heard me say this before. ;)
The darker theme looks good in your writing.
Minor quip - you're writing Moryo wife-less?
Annnd... is it a wrong thing that I actually see more sense in the words of the Feanorioni than in Dior's? O_o