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5hp772222
It's a good story (: I like how she isn't sucked into the game through a television or something like that haha there were a few grammar mistakes, but everyone makes them so it's no big deal lol I'm curious on how this story will continue ... Keep up the good work :D
5hp772222It's a good story (: I like how she isn't sucked into the game through a television or something like that haha there were a few grammar mistakes, but everyone makes them so it's no big deal lol I'm curious on how this story will continue ... Keep up the good work :D
5/24/2012 c2 Signorina Auditore
Great work!1! Please continue the story, I love how you talk with the reader, makes me feel like a part of the story. Continue, please! :)
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Great work!1! Please continue the story, I love how you talk with the reader, makes me feel like a part of the story. Continue, please! :)
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1/10/2012 c1 Tinytetochan
You better continue
I like this!
In that situation I would ask the same thing to Claudia ... T^T but boy would I refrase it differently because I'm really moody like that!
Keep up the good work
You better continue
I like this!
In that situation I would ask the same thing to Claudia ... T^T but boy would I refrase it differently because I'm really moody like that!
Keep up the good work
1/9/2012 c1 1Diamond1502
Now I'm interested, I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I wish you luck with future chapters. :)
1Diamond1502Now I'm interested, I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I wish you luck with future chapters. :)
1/8/2012 c1 1X-tremeFighter2000
Well, that was interesting ^^ A few grammar mistakes here and there, but over all, you did well.
Alright, you'd better update soon girly! I'm curious to see where this is going :)
1X-tremeFighter2000Well, that was interesting ^^ A few grammar mistakes here and there, but over all, you did well.
Alright, you'd better update soon girly! I'm curious to see where this is going :)
1/8/2012 c1 41kciuqadkcin
I've read a lot of the "girl gets sucked into Assassin's Creed 2" stories as well. I like how yours doesn't involve physically getting sucked into the TV and how your character isn't wearing modern clothes, makng things okward likke in most of those stories. I also liked the twist you added at the end and can't wait to see how things play out.
P.S. I think Romainian is a romance language too
I've read a lot of the "girl gets sucked into Assassin's Creed 2" stories as well. I like how yours doesn't involve physically getting sucked into the TV and how your character isn't wearing modern clothes, makng things okward likke in most of those stories. I also liked the twist you added at the end and can't wait to see how things play out.
P.S. I think Romainian is a romance language too