for Little Moments1/20/2012 c1 Guest
This was okay but you.need.to.focus on the person you are writing in. You randomly.change from he to I half way through. Its.confusing and made me stop reading.
This was okay but you.need.to.focus on the person you are writing in. You randomly.change from he to I half way through. Its.confusing and made me stop reading.
1/16/2012 c1 Nerdy Slytherin
Please write more! I loved this one, I'm pretty sure I got a cavity from the amazing fluffiness. The multi-chaptered Drarry sounds awesome and *hint hint* I'm a sucker for Klaine!
Please write more! I loved this one, I'm pretty sure I got a cavity from the amazing fluffiness. The multi-chaptered Drarry sounds awesome and *hint hint* I'm a sucker for Klaine!
1/11/2012 c1 ness
Hey, just a little heads up for future fics. Stick to either first or third person narration for the entirety of the story, that way the story doesn't become confusing for people who don't pick up the abrupt change straight away. But! A cute fic all the same :)
Hey, just a little heads up for future fics. Stick to either first or third person narration for the entirety of the story, that way the story doesn't become confusing for people who don't pick up the abrupt change straight away. But! A cute fic all the same :)
1/8/2012 c1 
11sassyfiestycrazychic
This was cute, and that multi-chapter fic sounds interesting. And some Klaine would be great XD
11sassyfiestycrazychicThis was cute, and that multi-chapter fic sounds interesting. And some Klaine would be great XD