for The World as We Know It6/19/2012 c1
5DandelionKing
Saying that Utena is Anthy's prince defeats the purpose of the story in which the revolution was against rigid gender roles where girls are rose brides (passive) and boy's are princes (aggressive). Aside from that, I like the story so far :)
5DandelionKingSaying that Utena is Anthy's prince defeats the purpose of the story in which the revolution was against rigid gender roles where girls are rose brides (passive) and boy's are princes (aggressive). Aside from that, I like the story so far :)
1/16/2012 c2
20James Birdsong
Unreadable due to large paragraphs and story cannot be deciphered thus awful even if a good story underneath
20James BirdsongUnreadable due to large paragraphs and story cannot be deciphered thus awful even if a good story underneath
1/10/2012 c1 James Birdsong
Excellent. I would have been even happier with more paragraph breaks but this is still readable and the plot is exciting, suspenseful and thrilling ^_^
Excellent. I would have been even happier with more paragraph breaks but this is still readable and the plot is exciting, suspenseful and thrilling ^_^
