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2/25/2012 c3 375a mountain of gideon's scones
OMFG THIS IS SOSOSOS SAD

why do you have to break my heart?

seriously, visa, this was stunning. so sad and sosososos heartbreaking, since astoria was just so heartbroken with draco leaving her...and she's pregnant.

it was so lovely how you split up the reading of the letter with her thoughts, and they were written so beautifully. xxxx
2/13/2012 c7 77WeasleySeeker
I was only going to read the first one... but I couldn't resist reading them all, and one word comes to mind - heartbreaking. Seriously, this is beautiful writing and so believable, him trying to face up to becoming a father and her being left to cope by herself - I think their feelings are so real. And it's amazing how you can capture all these tiny moments and make them into something really, really special.
2/5/2012 c6 17bells-mannequin
great one!

now, I'm looking forward to the real confrontation-slash-reunion xD
2/4/2012 c5 bells-mannequin
nice one :)
2/3/2012 c4 bells-mannequin
This seems like a really interesting drabble collection.

I'm really looking forward for more :)
1/31/2012 c2 375a mountain of gideon's scones
aww bb this one was just. ghdfkbhknkd amazing.

words can't describe it. Seriously, I don't actually think I've read anything as awwwable as this about Drastoria.

It was just like, hahahahahahhahahahahahha because he was tired so early because of...shopping. Lol how Astoria dragged him round all le shops.

It was just super fantaby dozy and me encanta it xx
1/31/2012 c1 a mountain of gideon's scones
OH MY GOD, THIS IS DRASTORIA.

I LOVE DRASTORIA.

lol, you get draco all bothered and like "oh my freakinggawd, my patronus has changed," then astoria's like -.- "i don't give a crap."

then it's like oh yeah, i'm preggers. and then draco is like YAYYA

omg so perfect bb, i am jel of your writing, ngl, just perfect. xxx
1/29/2012 c4 61codependency
Oh god, why make me cry? This Draco is so sad, how he thinks he's not good enough, sobs :( You capture his emotione so well!
1/29/2012 c3 codependency
Noooooooo! How can you do this to me? Poor Astoria!
1/11/2012 c1 24rainbowspring
Cool!
1/11/2012 c2 61codependency
You write their relationship so well, Loooooooooo! I loved this. :)
1/11/2012 c1 codependency
That was gorgeous, and cute, and made me smile. Drastoria is amazing, and OMG, I just realised she's pregnant with Scorpius! Omg!

/is a fangirl

Great Drabble!

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