for Betraying a Friend4/5 c1 
49acosta perez jose ramiro
Heh, short yet nice.
Guess Spike got some photo evidence or something.
Keep the good writing.
49acosta perez jose ramiroHeh, short yet nice.
Guess Spike got some photo evidence or something.
Keep the good writing.
1/10 c1 16Gosalyn2007
Now Spike realizes that it was Jerry who was causing trouble, that naughty mouse finally gets what is coming to him.
16Gosalyn2007Now Spike realizes that it was Jerry who was causing trouble, that naughty mouse finally gets what is coming to him.
10/7/2012 c1 Guest
Thank you! I always hated how jerry got away with everything. I understand that he was defending himself, i mean tom WAS chasing him. But sometimes the way jerry treated tom was just plain cruel. It was his job to hunt jerry. And i feel conflicted cause my favorite parts as a child were the ones where spike hurt tom and when jerry got payback for tom trying to hurt his nephew. But im glad spike knows the truth about jerry's antics. The only thing i can say i didn't like was the lack of slapstick comedy and the overall rushed feeling. But i still liked it, because spike using his fists instead of pies and baseball bats, and that's more in character. Brute force is spikes style, traps and chasing But again, overall, i loved the story. Please write more!
Thank you! I always hated how jerry got away with everything. I understand that he was defending himself, i mean tom WAS chasing him. But sometimes the way jerry treated tom was just plain cruel. It was his job to hunt jerry. And i feel conflicted cause my favorite parts as a child were the ones where spike hurt tom and when jerry got payback for tom trying to hurt his nephew. But im glad spike knows the truth about jerry's antics. The only thing i can say i didn't like was the lack of slapstick comedy and the overall rushed feeling. But i still liked it, because spike using his fists instead of pies and baseball bats, and that's more in character. Brute force is spikes style, traps and chasing But again, overall, i loved the story. Please write more!
9/8/2012 c1 metabob62
i'v seen spike angry with jerry but not like this good story
i'v seen spike angry with jerry but not like this good story
8/26/2012 c1 Flying Witch
Finally! Jerry deserved it.
Finally! Jerry deserved it.