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4/15/2012 c19 lollipopciel
more plz :3
4/14/2012 c19 promocat
poor ciel ! he really does love his brother!
4/14/2012 c19 LOL
Ought he lied any way plz update!
4/14/2012 c19 2Bocchan832
Awwwwww
4/12/2012 c18 promocat
sebastian deosn't realize -the more yopu tell someone(esp. a ypuing teen) the more they want to do it-forbibben fruit
4/11/2012 c18 Yana5
i hope Ciel and Seby don't fall out
4/10/2012 c18 3JezebelStrike
Damn! You're evil, leaving us at a good point. Well update soon!
4/10/2012 c18 Crimson alone time
Wow that was really nice i love it ^.^
4/10/2012 c18 3CyIaNoDiY
let me guess...he's going to Sebastian's room..? yes; no; maybe;

anyways i need you to update VERY VERY SOON which means like tonight or tomorrow. i'll be happy XD oh and guess what this week is Benchmark for me which means that you have to update soo or i will DIE~! i love your story i want more. i need more of this story i don't have anything else to read because no ones updated...

love,

Cindy

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4/10/2012 c17 lollipopciel
i really love this story :3 more plz
4/9/2012 c17 Finally22
Oh I cant wait for the next chapter! This whole story is great and the idea of ciel being sebastians little demond brother is cool. I hope you update soon, good luck!
4/9/2012 c17 LOL
Love.it plz update soon!
4/8/2012 c17 ZodiacDOG101
Since I just read the whole story without reviewing any of chapters, I shall do a very long review on what I love and hate about the story. (well long in my standards)

What I love in no such order:

1. I love Sebastian as a caring and over-protective brother

2. love the explanation behind the black plague

3. Fact that Ciel didn't accept anything right away

4. Ciel/Liz

5. No yaoi (I'm no homophobe, I have nothing against yaoi. In fact one of my favourite couples of all time in anime are a yaoi couple. I feel that Sebastian and Ciel's relationship is too complicated to be concluded to be shounenai.

6. Sebastian's hooker heels

7. Phygra and Careti, they are the awesomenst OCs I read about

8. How your writing has improved over in every chapter.

9. The fact that your story is a better conclusion than the anime.

10. Claudius, that guy is cool.

11. How you set the scene

What I don't like:

1. The bloody cliff-hanger, I'm in so much suspense

2. The fact I have to wait until you update these stories

Well I hope this review is long enough to compensate for not reviewing for the previous chapters. Can't wait until you update.

ZodiaDOG101
4/8/2012 c17 Yana5
noo not a cliffy
4/7/2012 c17 promocat
i bet not all demons are happy sebastian has returned for good
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