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4/9/2012 c17 LOL
Love.it plz update soon!
4/8/2012 c17 ZodiacDOG101
Since I just read the whole story without reviewing any of chapters, I shall do a very long review on what I love and hate about the story. (well long in my standards)

What I love in no such order:

1. I love Sebastian as a caring and over-protective brother

2. love the explanation behind the black plague

3. Fact that Ciel didn't accept anything right away

4. Ciel/Liz

5. No yaoi (I'm no homophobe, I have nothing against yaoi. In fact one of my favourite couples of all time in anime are a yaoi couple. I feel that Sebastian and Ciel's relationship is too complicated to be concluded to be shounenai.

6. Sebastian's hooker heels

7. Phygra and Careti, they are the awesomenst OCs I read about

8. How your writing has improved over in every chapter.

9. The fact that your story is a better conclusion than the anime.

10. Claudius, that guy is cool.

11. How you set the scene

What I don't like:

1. The bloody cliff-hanger, I'm in so much suspense

2. The fact I have to wait until you update these stories

Well I hope this review is long enough to compensate for not reviewing for the previous chapters. Can't wait until you update.

ZodiaDOG101
4/8/2012 c17 Yana5
noo not a cliffy
4/7/2012 c17 promocat
i bet not all demons are happy sebastian has returned for good
4/7/2012 c17 2Bocchan832
Omg clif hanger!
4/7/2012 c17 3Paxloria
Yeah! Its good to see Ciel with a little independence.
4/7/2012 c17 yuki-chan
Awww I miss your story well thank you for this another chapter... It is well done.. I really do enjoyed Ciel's training! And hmmm I'm having a really bad feeling about Sebastian's problem and I wonder what is the stone Alois given to Ciel..



Please update soon!
4/7/2012 c17 18Pri-Chan 1410
loved it!

I wonder what does that stone is...or does...

update soon please!
4/7/2012 c17 3JezebelStrike
OMG I so need to read right now!
4/7/2012 c17 Crimson alone time
Yay cant wait till next chapter
4/6/2012 c16 3CyIaNoDiY
update!
4/6/2012 c16 PennyBlu
OMG I love this story! Please update soooon!
4/5/2012 c16 LOL
Awesome!plz update soon!
4/3/2012 c16 3JezebelStrike
Yes I sure did enjoy Sebastian bipolarness and I loved the scene at the end. Hmm I wonder what the stone is for? Update soon! Mwuahaha Alois got beat!
4/3/2012 c16 9TsukizuNya
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! FLUFF!

*coughs*

You have to wonder; if Ciel loses his human memories, then won't the sight of Lizzie's locket bring them back? And now Alois is messing things up, as per usual. Why can't those two brother just be allowed to get along in PEACE?

Bipolar! (Or rather; happy teasing Sebastian)Sebby=♥♥♥♥
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