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2/13 c16 10x Where the Wild Roses Grow x
I'm so glad you've updated this, I've been looking forward to it! I really hated Mana at the start of this, but I'm starting to feel a little bad for her now. And Max doesn't seem like such a bad guy anymore now. Anyways, I'll be looking forward to your update again!
2/10 c16 Rari
Hooray! After checking in day after day for so long there's a new chapter to make my day! As much as I dislike Mana in this story I'm actually starting to pity her quite a bit, ahaha. I can't wait to see what goes down in the next chapter!
2/10 c16 6Cecily Rose Midnight
Wow, Mana is crazy. Well, maybe not crazy, but just hurt by how everything turned out.
And wow, Max turned out to be a good guy. I'm really proud of how he turned out to be.
Anyhoot, I really liked this chapter. Aria and her adorableness returned. :D
Well, I can't wait to see more chapters, whenever they come out! Good luck and happy writing! :D
2/6 c15 TheReihani
Nice !
1/16 c15 Cecily Rose Midnight
Whaaaat?! RayxBarrett? Whaaaaaat? Lol. I can't wait to read more! MOAR. Lol. I'm kinda hyper right now, too much sugar...
Can't wait to see more chapters! Especially longer ones! :D Good luck and happy writing! :)
1/16 c15 5LeiaMordio
Mhm yokay I can't really say anything to this chapter. It's so short x.x
And, I don't know, Ray and Barrett is kinda odd... xD But oh well, it's your story.
Sooooo thankies for the update! I was really glad seeing that you're still alive c:
1/15 c15 10x Where the Wild Roses Grow x
Aw no, you left me on a cliffhanger! And I was so excited to finally see an update too...ah, that's life, though. Sorry I didn't review on earlier chapters, I'm lazy. But not today! Anyways, hope to see an update soon. Ciao.
12/11/2012 c13 4FayeFox
You really... "don't like" Mana, do you? XD
11/10/2012 c14 6Cecily Rose Midnight
Great chapter love! :D I've been waiting patiently for a new chapter, and its very well written! :D
Once again, Aria's adorableness amazes me! :D
Looking forward to more chapters! Good luck and happy writing!
11/9/2012 c14 5Duchess-Yukine-Suoh
Eeee! Goodgoodgood! I. Love. Yue and her subplot.
8/19/2012 c13 Duchess-Yukine-Suoh
Pretty good! Kyle needs to stop overreacting though; after all he did cheat on Mans.
8/16/2012 c13 Rari
Oh man, I'm loving this so much! I've actually been stalking this story for quite a while. 3

You should have an extra chapter when the story's finished with everything that didn't fit in, because I would certainly love to see the things you took out.

Keep up the wonderful work, and I will be anxiously waiting for some more.
8/16/2012 c13 6Cecily Rose Midnight
Oh god this was a great chapter. Its hilarious. Barrette parrot?! So freaking hilarious.
I can't believe Mana. She's... just no. Thats my reaction to her: 'Mana, just no. Don't even try to defend yourself. Just no.' Lol.
And Aria is being so adorable again! And I really wonder about Ray... :D Can't wait to see!
One last thing: Dorothy and Yue make an adorable couple. I just wish you'd hear more from Dorothy instead of Yue, but then again, Yue is incredibly shy. :)
You're a good writer! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to furture chapters! :)
8/16/2012 c13 5LeiaMordio
QvA Thank you for updating!
Maaanaaaa, you little ** . Go and die!
[No Mana, I love you xD]
I feel bad about this: I wish Kyle has something serious and then Barret will do everything to cure him! TTvTT
I hope it will turn out like that!
If not; I hope you'll find something that will statisfy me ò.ó ! xD
8/10/2012 c12 6Cecily Rose Midnight
'Know what? I DON'T KNOW ANYTHING, I SWEAR!' Yeah right Yue. Spit it out.
This chapter was incredibly short, and I was sad. But, I can't wait to see the next one. And YESSS! Yue and Dorothy! Woot woot! I have no idea why Im so happy about that, but whatever. It makes me happy.
Can't wait to see how Mana freaks out in the next chapter. :DDD
I seriously love how horny Barrett is. I think its hilarious. And when Kyle gets soooooo frickin embarrassed about it, it so adorable! :D They make such a cute pair. Never really realized its full potential up until now. ;)
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