for Love Is9/14/2012 c6 
20happygirl57
Honestly this is such a late review and there's no excuse for it except the fact I've been so busy this past month and a half and I've barely even been home. Nevertheless, I'm reviewing now.
I know I've told you this numerous times before but I'm so jealous of your writing style. It's so perfect and everything seems to flow unlike mine. You're an amazing writer and this chapter proved nothing less.
I really loved not only all the sweet Jucy moments (and they were beyond adorable even if Lucy was intoxicated, I may add) but also the Lomille because it really showed their frustration and stubbornness for each other.
20happygirl57Honestly this is such a late review and there's no excuse for it except the fact I've been so busy this past month and a half and I've barely even been home. Nevertheless, I'm reviewing now.
I know I've told you this numerous times before but I'm so jealous of your writing style. It's so perfect and everything seems to flow unlike mine. You're an amazing writer and this chapter proved nothing less.
I really loved not only all the sweet Jucy moments (and they were beyond adorable even if Lucy was intoxicated, I may add) but also the Lomille because it really showed their frustration and stubbornness for each other.
8/29/2012 c6 8poeticjustice13
So sorry that this review is late.
1) I wanted to catch up on all the chapters so I don't ask any stupid questions.
2) I was way too busy with school and can only do FF on the weekends.
Let me just say YAY you're back boo!
Do you know you write like the writers on HBO or Showtime? I've read scripts of old HBO shows and the way they write everything and all the detail, even the smallest of them all resemble you. You can put so much emotion into one little sentence. You do the impossible that a lot (including me) of writers on this can't do.
Sometimes it takes me forever to get a point across in a chapter but you do it perfectly. You should try screenwriting. I think you'd be excellent at it.
I love James/Lucyin this chapter. They add to the romance in the story and its so real. The trials that James faces having feelings for the Lucy is incredible and leaves me on the edge of my seat.
I love the Lomille especially because they really don't know what they want. They know that it has a lot to do with each other but they don't know exactly what it is. It's difficult but so beautiful in its own way.
Great job Kaylia, I'm honestly astounded at this chapter and this story in general. It may have been a while since you updated but it was worth the wait.
Can't wait for more.
8poeticjustice13So sorry that this review is late.
1) I wanted to catch up on all the chapters so I don't ask any stupid questions.
2) I was way too busy with school and can only do FF on the weekends.
Let me just say YAY you're back boo!
Do you know you write like the writers on HBO or Showtime? I've read scripts of old HBO shows and the way they write everything and all the detail, even the smallest of them all resemble you. You can put so much emotion into one little sentence. You do the impossible that a lot (including me) of writers on this can't do.
Sometimes it takes me forever to get a point across in a chapter but you do it perfectly. You should try screenwriting. I think you'd be excellent at it.
I love James/Lucyin this chapter. They add to the romance in the story and its so real. The trials that James faces having feelings for the Lucy is incredible and leaves me on the edge of my seat.
I love the Lomille especially because they really don't know what they want. They know that it has a lot to do with each other but they don't know exactly what it is. It's difficult but so beautiful in its own way.
Great job Kaylia, I'm honestly astounded at this chapter and this story in general. It may have been a while since you updated but it was worth the wait.
Can't wait for more.
8/29/2012 c6 Silent Reader
As creepy as this may sound I've been following all your stories and I just love them all.
You're such an amazing writer and I can't fathom how people are too blind to see that.
I'm sorry for being so quiet this whole time but I wanted to take this time out and say thank you for sharing your creativity and originality with us all.
I hope you write more soon even though I can imagine you must be busy. I'll always be waiting to read something new of yours whether it be just a chapter or more.
Good luck and I hope life treats you well.
As creepy as this may sound I've been following all your stories and I just love them all.
You're such an amazing writer and I can't fathom how people are too blind to see that.
I'm sorry for being so quiet this whole time but I wanted to take this time out and say thank you for sharing your creativity and originality with us all.
I hope you write more soon even though I can imagine you must be busy. I'll always be waiting to read something new of yours whether it be just a chapter or more.
Good luck and I hope life treats you well.
8/26/2012 c1 legendaryhuntress
Just a couple of things: I thought Camille was Logan's first girlfriend? You said in the first part that Logan has dated other girls.. Anyways
It was really sweet, the descriptions were spot-on. But at first I thought it was going to be one big essay about Lomille lol :D I'm glad there was a plot in the end. And it's nice to show Camille's vulnerable side.. We usually just see the wackier side.
Just a couple of things: I thought Camille was Logan's first girlfriend? You said in the first part that Logan has dated other girls.. Anyways
It was really sweet, the descriptions were spot-on. But at first I thought it was going to be one big essay about Lomille lol :D I'm glad there was a plot in the end. And it's nice to show Camille's vulnerable side.. We usually just see the wackier side.
8/20/2012 c3 Alecks454
Great chapter! And the bouquet of candy were so sweet! I would want that since i love candy WAY more then flowes!
Great chapter! And the bouquet of candy were so sweet! I would want that since i love candy WAY more then flowes!
8/20/2012 c6 Alecks454
Awesome chapter! But why do i feel like i am having deja vu? Cause i felt like i have read this chapter before... hmm
Awesome chapter! But why do i feel like i am having deja vu? Cause i felt like i have read this chapter before... hmm
8/20/2012 c6 Guest
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
4/7/2012 c5 2Left4Hunger
I just really need to put out here, you're an amazing writer. You understand these characters so well, the way they interact with each other makes me feel like I'm watching the show as if it were on the CW or HBO. So, really, great job.
I'm loving the way you're doing things with James and Lucy, you aren't just playing matchmaker and pairing them off, you're actually understanding them and taking the pieces of them that would mesh together in a relationship. I LOVE it.
So really, I love this fic. LOVE IT. and I MISSED it, I got so excited when I saw the email I got this morning saying that it updated. I remember you telling me this is a chapter that sets a lot of stuff up, so now I am REALLY excited for the next chapter. Kudos :)
-Cody
2Left4HungerI just really need to put out here, you're an amazing writer. You understand these characters so well, the way they interact with each other makes me feel like I'm watching the show as if it were on the CW or HBO. So, really, great job.
I'm loving the way you're doing things with James and Lucy, you aren't just playing matchmaker and pairing them off, you're actually understanding them and taking the pieces of them that would mesh together in a relationship. I LOVE it.
So really, I love this fic. LOVE IT. and I MISSED it, I got so excited when I saw the email I got this morning saying that it updated. I remember you telling me this is a chapter that sets a lot of stuff up, so now I am REALLY excited for the next chapter. Kudos :)
-Cody
4/6/2012 c5 3SyFyDiva
Awesome story..just read all the chapters and i love it so far! please update soon!
3SyFyDivaAwesome story..just read all the chapters and i love it so far! please update soon!
4/6/2012 c5 20happygirl57
No I've missed your updates!
Aww thank you. Right back atcha. Okay I'm just going to embarrass myself and probably make no sense at all... But yeah, I can recognize people's writing. Well not everyone's but I know when it's you who wrote something, or Nessa or some of the other people I'm really close to. Okay.
My nails are pink. Lol. :) I had all my friends over today so they wanted to straighten my hair and I did my nails for the first time in months. My hair's straight! At least for a little while until I wash it.
Okay I'm off topic but to be fair I just drank soda. Got sugar in my system. Okay I'm saying okay a lot.
Moving on... I really loved this chapter. I think you're doing a really wonderful job with the character's and their emotions. Logan's especially. I mean Camille's too but for some reason, I just fell in love with Logan in this chapter. But yeah, Camille's doubts on the dress and not wanting to admit that she was doing it for Logan and that it had everything to do with him.
You really know how to capture the feelings of the characters and how to paint a picture in someone's head. Like I could imagine Logan shrinking away from all the flashing lights and see him in awe when he sees Camille. Logan's stalking her... kinda. My friend and I stalked her dad today... kind of. He got lost. OKAY. Off topic again.
He's ignoring her again. Oh my gosh, I think my heart just broke a little for Camille. Logan needs to stop making her cry. But I really love how he's afraid of himself, really. I get how he doesn't want to confront his emotions so he's avoiding them in hopes they go away. But even though it doesn't work that way, I like how he's doing it so his friendship with Camille isn't ruined. I like how he's running away from his emotions.
Cam's angry...
Aww Jucy? Lames? omg, I discovered it! Jacy? I think that's slightly better...
Lucy got drunk... but their little moment was still adorable. Awe. Can't wait to see what their plan is and why do I have a feeling that it'll make Logan and Camille meet again?
Okay, I absolutely adored this chapter. Thank you so much for the birthday wishes and I love you so much! :)
20happygirl57No I've missed your updates!
Aww thank you. Right back atcha. Okay I'm just going to embarrass myself and probably make no sense at all... But yeah, I can recognize people's writing. Well not everyone's but I know when it's you who wrote something, or Nessa or some of the other people I'm really close to. Okay.
My nails are pink. Lol. :) I had all my friends over today so they wanted to straighten my hair and I did my nails for the first time in months. My hair's straight! At least for a little while until I wash it.
Okay I'm off topic but to be fair I just drank soda. Got sugar in my system. Okay I'm saying okay a lot.
Moving on... I really loved this chapter. I think you're doing a really wonderful job with the character's and their emotions. Logan's especially. I mean Camille's too but for some reason, I just fell in love with Logan in this chapter. But yeah, Camille's doubts on the dress and not wanting to admit that she was doing it for Logan and that it had everything to do with him.
You really know how to capture the feelings of the characters and how to paint a picture in someone's head. Like I could imagine Logan shrinking away from all the flashing lights and see him in awe when he sees Camille. Logan's stalking her... kinda. My friend and I stalked her dad today... kind of. He got lost. OKAY. Off topic again.
He's ignoring her again. Oh my gosh, I think my heart just broke a little for Camille. Logan needs to stop making her cry. But I really love how he's afraid of himself, really. I get how he doesn't want to confront his emotions so he's avoiding them in hopes they go away. But even though it doesn't work that way, I like how he's doing it so his friendship with Camille isn't ruined. I like how he's running away from his emotions.
Cam's angry...
Aww Jucy? Lames? omg, I discovered it! Jacy? I think that's slightly better...
Lucy got drunk... but their little moment was still adorable. Awe. Can't wait to see what their plan is and why do I have a feeling that it'll make Logan and Camille meet again?
Okay, I absolutely adored this chapter. Thank you so much for the birthday wishes and I love you so much! :)