for A New Face on a New Team2/6/2012 c4 
13Sin - NaMe
WHAT THE FUDGE?
I WANNA READ MORE! D:!
Update soon Pwease!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Other chapters:
LOL Más y Menos are so funny XD Estoy loca
And Danny acted like their father ._. It was creepy, no kidding.
Still... LUV IT!
Bye!
13Sin - NaMeWHAT THE FUDGE?
I WANNA READ MORE! D:!
Update soon Pwease!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Other chapters:
LOL Más y Menos are so funny XD Estoy loca
And Danny acted like their father ._. It was creepy, no kidding.
Still... LUV IT!
Bye!
2/6/2012 c4 Rajani Ikati Ride
Pleeeeaaasseee I beg u PLEEEAASSEE never stop writing this fan fic! Please keep writing!
Pleeeeaaasseee I beg u PLEEEAASSEE never stop writing this fan fic! Please keep writing!
2/6/2012 c4 18VampireFrootloopsRule
You evil evil author! If it wasnt so suspenseful i would send klemper after u... alas i cannot. Awesome job!
18VampireFrootloopsRuleYou evil evil author! If it wasnt so suspenseful i would send klemper after u... alas i cannot. Awesome job!
1/26/2012 c3 18VampireFrootloopsRule
Ha. Fun with speedy! Nicely done. I liked it. I would like to give one piece of constructive critism though: repetition. I noticed you use it alot. Instead of saying things like "he had his hands on the bar. The bar was long. The bar was cold" just a quick example that popped up but you get the idea right? Try to limit that and youll go far
18VampireFrootloopsRuleHa. Fun with speedy! Nicely done. I liked it. I would like to give one piece of constructive critism though: repetition. I noticed you use it alot. Instead of saying things like "he had his hands on the bar. The bar was long. The bar was cold" just a quick example that popped up but you get the idea right? Try to limit that and youll go far
1/18/2012 c2 18VampireFrootloopsRule
Hmm. I dont have a fav pairing but the twins and aqualad are my fav characters of titans east. Is that the actual translation from the show or did you put your own? Just curius. You did wonderfully. Although, i did see a sentance missing somewhere... cant remeber sorry. Oh well.
Awesome chapter! Keep it up! Hehe. Fish tacos...
18VampireFrootloopsRuleHmm. I dont have a fav pairing but the twins and aqualad are my fav characters of titans east. Is that the actual translation from the show or did you put your own? Just curius. You did wonderfully. Although, i did see a sentance missing somewhere... cant remeber sorry. Oh well.
Awesome chapter! Keep it up! Hehe. Fish tacos...
1/18/2012 c2 19DizzlyPuzzled
not a fan of pairings...unless its Danny and Sam...and by the story line, yeah thats not gonna happen...oh well. good chapter, it was easier to read this go around, hope you update soon..
19DizzlyPuzzlednot a fan of pairings...unless its Danny and Sam...and by the story line, yeah thats not gonna happen...oh well. good chapter, it was easier to read this go around, hope you update soon..