for The Insider5/8 c16 
1Noble6
NO ADA STAHP YOU'RE KILLING ME WITH FEELS!
I absolutely LOVED the scene on the rooftop! So emotional and powerful...
And no, Jake, you silly buffoon! Listen to Fu (for once, he's not spouting nonsense!) Just go ahead and fall in love already! You're only delaying the inevitable! Noo, don't make me get all dramatic about this one and only OTfreakingP!
Ahem. I've been exposed to way too much Tumblr.
I'm really looking forward to the dance! I really hope you don't make it rain either...have a soul! Let it be perfect and amazing! And yeah. Great update! Can't wait to read more!
1Noble6NO ADA STAHP YOU'RE KILLING ME WITH FEELS!
I absolutely LOVED the scene on the rooftop! So emotional and powerful...
And no, Jake, you silly buffoon! Listen to Fu (for once, he's not spouting nonsense!) Just go ahead and fall in love already! You're only delaying the inevitable! Noo, don't make me get all dramatic about this one and only OTfreakingP!
Ahem. I've been exposed to way too much Tumblr.
I'm really looking forward to the dance! I really hope you don't make it rain either...have a soul! Let it be perfect and amazing! And yeah. Great update! Can't wait to read more!
5/8 c16 4Major Simi
Well in that case congratulations are in order I know how hard school isanyway good chapter and the scene whit Fu testing Jake was funny
4Major SimiWell in that case congratulations are in order I know how hard school isanyway good chapter and the scene whit Fu testing Jake was funny
4/26 c15 Kiku-Goldenflower
Loving this story. Looks like thinks are going to start picking up for here too. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Loving this story. Looks like thinks are going to start picking up for here too. Can't wait for the next chapter.
3/25 c15 SapphireDragon
Hey I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been busy as of late school and what not. I'm sure you're busy too but it's actually been about a month since you're last update and that seems to be the schedule you update on so I was hoping as my birthday present you might post a new chapter in the next couple of days, Im 18 today whooo hoo :D hope to hear from ya soon! You're loyal reviewer
SD
Hey I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been busy as of late school and what not. I'm sure you're busy too but it's actually been about a month since you're last update and that seems to be the schedule you update on so I was hoping as my birthday present you might post a new chapter in the next couple of days, Im 18 today whooo hoo :D hope to hear from ya soon! You're loyal reviewer
SD
3/24 c15 18Hezpeller
Yaaaay I caught up! hahaa, aaaaah this fic is so good! The entire story is very intriguing, and I'm very interested in seeing where this goes!
18HezpellerYaaaay I caught up! hahaa, aaaaah this fic is so good! The entire story is very intriguing, and I'm very interested in seeing where this goes!
3/10 c15 friend
Update soon, please, not to hurry you up or anything, but i'm taking you pretty seriously here kid. I mean it when I say i'm your friend, but I cant connect your talent with the boss man until I get some proof of it. I'm going to present insider to him, but he will want a completed story. I have the highest hopes for you.
Hopefully,
Loyally,
Friend
Update soon, please, not to hurry you up or anything, but i'm taking you pretty seriously here kid. I mean it when I say i'm your friend, but I cant connect your talent with the boss man until I get some proof of it. I'm going to present insider to him, but he will want a completed story. I have the highest hopes for you.
Hopefully,
Loyally,
Friend
3/4 c15 friend
you are ganing popularity, it seems. i will log in and tell you who i am eventualy, i believe, but know that you will need to impress me. shock me. make me believe it.
you are ganing popularity, it seems. i will log in and tell you who i am eventualy, i believe, but know that you will need to impress me. shock me. make me believe it.
3/3 c15 friend
very nice. keep it up. don't give up. you have talent, kid. i'll be watching you. surprise me.
very nice. keep it up. don't give up. you have talent, kid. i'll be watching you. surprise me.
2/27 c15 Grumpydrawer
Don't worry about taking so long to update, I can understand what it's like to be very busy. Any hints to why Rose was feeling dizzy when they mentioned the Huntsclan.
Don't worry about taking so long to update, I can understand what it's like to be very busy. Any hints to why Rose was feeling dizzy when they mentioned the Huntsclan.
2/25 c15 2Zappy Shoes
Love it! All the characters are perfectly in character! UPDATE AND KEEP WRITING!
2Zappy ShoesLove it! All the characters are perfectly in character! UPDATE AND KEEP WRITING!