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26Fudogg
You capture Spud perfectly. Mermaid civil war and unicorn apocalypse. Wonderful.
Keep updating. :)
26FudoggYou capture Spud perfectly. Mermaid civil war and unicorn apocalypse. Wonderful.
Keep updating. :)
2/24 c15
4Major Simi
well looks like our heros now know what the huntsclan is after, anyway great chaper
4Major Simiwell looks like our heros now know what the huntsclan is after, anyway great chaper
2/23 c15
1Noble6
We must think alike! I have Rose dressing up all pretty in the next chapter of my story! Except, it is for something in the Clan...
But anyway, Rose strikes me as not the very girly type. Since she is rather athletic, she wouldn't like being in a dress. I dunno. That's my personal head canon. Haha. I do think blue would fit her nicely.
So, if this story is taking the direction I think it is...it will follow the show and the Huntsclan is gonna ruin Homecoming by swooping down from helicopters and using the skulls. And then Rose will have to face the ultimate! Yeah...maybe not...guess I'll find out eventually, though.
Glad you could get a second in to update between your hectic schedule! Really enjoyed this new chapter!
1Noble6We must think alike! I have Rose dressing up all pretty in the next chapter of my story! Except, it is for something in the Clan...
But anyway, Rose strikes me as not the very girly type. Since she is rather athletic, she wouldn't like being in a dress. I dunno. That's my personal head canon. Haha. I do think blue would fit her nicely.
So, if this story is taking the direction I think it is...it will follow the show and the Huntsclan is gonna ruin Homecoming by swooping down from helicopters and using the skulls. And then Rose will have to face the ultimate! Yeah...maybe not...guess I'll find out eventually, though.
Glad you could get a second in to update between your hectic schedule! Really enjoyed this new chapter!
2/2 c14 Guest
Is this discontinued? D:
I REALLY LOVE IT3
I look foward to a possible update :D
Is this discontinued? D:
I REALLY LOVE IT3
I look foward to a possible update :D
1/9 c14
4ChristinCC
Awwww I like this story! I also like the fact that you don't use episode directly from the show! Good job and please update when you can!-CC
4ChristinCCAwwww I like this story! I also like the fact that you don't use episode directly from the show! Good job and please update when you can!-CC
1/3 c14
4TrickedPast
Sorry that I knida dissapeared on you, ada. But I'm back! Also, if you like Naruto at all, I'd like some feed back from you on my Naruto/ADJL crossover fic I'm writing.
Talk to you later,
trickedpast
4TrickedPastSorry that I knida dissapeared on you, ada. But I'm back! Also, if you like Naruto at all, I'd like some feed back from you on my Naruto/ADJL crossover fic I'm writing.
Talk to you later,
trickedpast
12/28/2012 c14
1Noble6
I smile because after reading the end of this chapter, it's pretty apparent that the once former foes are going to be love birds. Poor Rose, though. Having dreams of your past like that...that's harsh. The Huntsman is so evil.
Glad you finally were able to update! I'm looking forward to what you do with Homecoming...I still feel like something is going to happen. But maybe not; I'd love to just see Jake and Rose have their night. I guess we'll just have to see!
1Noble6I smile because after reading the end of this chapter, it's pretty apparent that the once former foes are going to be love birds. Poor Rose, though. Having dreams of your past like that...that's harsh. The Huntsman is so evil.
Glad you finally were able to update! I'm looking forward to what you do with Homecoming...I still feel like something is going to happen. But maybe not; I'd love to just see Jake and Rose have their night. I guess we'll just have to see!
12/27/2012 c14
3Grumpydrawer
Don't worry about how quickly their 'friendship' has moved along. The time skips let you skip the boring bits so it works perfectly well.
3GrumpydrawerDon't worry about how quickly their 'friendship' has moved along. The time skips let you skip the boring bits so it works perfectly well.
12/27/2012 c14
4Major Simi
wow, looks like the rumorse about your demise were exagerated, well welcome back to the land of living, anyway i hopped you had a nice christmas, so good chapter, i mean it i mean the reactions semm very real good descriptions and idea of her dreams. so a happy new year to you
4Major Simiwow, looks like the rumorse about your demise were exagerated, well welcome back to the land of living, anyway i hopped you had a nice christmas, so good chapter, i mean it i mean the reactions semm very real good descriptions and idea of her dreams. so a happy new year to you
