for Lil Miss Rarity1/15 c1 Guest
Not bad. I thought you were gonna start from the begging like the post. It's good and keep up your stuff
Not bad. I thought you were gonna start from the begging like the post. It's good and keep up your stuff
1/3 c1 princessvader16
A very long and difficult read and a perplexing story
line but a very cool story
A very long and difficult read and a perplexing story
line but a very cool story
12/7/2012 c1 Walrus
it was hard to follow but i liked it for some reason
it was hard to follow but i liked it for some reason
11/26/2012 c1 DanielScarbrough
Very well written and i enjoyed it thoroughly. 9/10 for me because i feel it was missing a little bit of the darker elements readers are looking for in this story. And also my name didn't fit in the name box so i had delete the space in between my first and last name. Not your fault but it was frustrating. Other than that very good i feel i will probably read this again in the future. If you are going to write a sequel to it explaining what happens after this please email me the link at .
Very well written and i enjoyed it thoroughly. 9/10 for me because i feel it was missing a little bit of the darker elements readers are looking for in this story. And also my name didn't fit in the name box so i had delete the space in between my first and last name. Not your fault but it was frustrating. Other than that very good i feel i will probably read this again in the future. If you are going to write a sequel to it explaining what happens after this please email me the link at .
10/30/2012 c1 ZeldaStep
This doesnt feel complete. I kinda want this continued to find out whats wrong with Rarity but are you gonna be continuing this?
This doesnt feel complete. I kinda want this continued to find out whats wrong with Rarity but are you gonna be continuing this?
8/24/2012 c1 Guest
awww i wantt more :(
awww i wantt more :(
8/24/2012 c1 Guest
I have a very bad feeling that thus is gonna be silent pony ville four.8O
I have a very bad feeling that thus is gonna be silent pony ville four.8O
7/4/2012 c1 
6Limbus
Is their more for this story, or is this the end, I feel a lot of question have not been answer or I just don't see them. I look on your tumblr page, is the answer their, what did she do beside killing her cat, engaging in to sexual desire of masochism, in the privacy of her own home, and engaging in sex activity with a minor... with minors...and incest too.
6LimbusIs their more for this story, or is this the end, I feel a lot of question have not been answer or I just don't see them. I look on your tumblr page, is the answer their, what did she do beside killing her cat, engaging in to sexual desire of masochism, in the privacy of her own home, and engaging in sex activity with a minor... with minors...and incest too.
6/7/2012 c1 hhgggdd
I LOVE LIL MISS RARITY! I WISH I COULD FUCK YOU MOMMY!
I LOVE LIL MISS RARITY! I WISH I COULD FUCK YOU MOMMY!
1/27/2012 c1 3Questionable Object
Wow...
Just... Wow that's all I can really say...
That was incredible I loved it.
Happy that you've done lil miss rarity justice:
The Object of Questionable Desire
3Questionable ObjectWow...
Just... Wow that's all I can really say...
That was incredible I loved it.
Happy that you've done lil miss rarity justice:
The Object of Questionable Desire
1/18/2012 c1 1New account sign up taken name
This is a very different MLP story. I like it! If it helps I vote you! Please update soon!
1New account sign up taken nameThis is a very different MLP story. I like it! If it helps I vote you! Please update soon!