for Darkness2/1 c1
16Piece Bot
This was an awesome one-shot. I actually think I cried. It had a bittersweet ending.
16Piece BotThis was an awesome one-shot. I actually think I cried. It had a bittersweet ending.
1/19/2012 c1
5Your Hopeless Romanticist
Very original, I love it! It's really intriguing and I think that there should be more reviews!
-Colly
5Your Hopeless RomanticistVery original, I love it! It's really intriguing and I think that there should be more reviews!
-Colly
1/17/2012 c1 En ar Ciel
:( …Poor errone.
I have a serious propensity for drama and tragedy, though, so this satisfied my terrible, sadistic bloodlust. I only wish it were longer.
:( …Poor errone.
I have a serious propensity for drama and tragedy, though, so this satisfied my terrible, sadistic bloodlust. I only wish it were longer.
1/17/2012 c1
4SweetGeorgie
Hello there,
I really liked this one-shot, your description and the way the plot was planned out worked really well.
I only have one small detail that I saw which I think should be pointed out.
When a reporter writes their news report, they use the person's full name when first mentioning them but when necessary to say their name again they will use their last name. So instead of the news reporter saying Ikuto they would say Mr. Tsukiyomi and instead of Amu they would say Miss. Hinamori.
That's all I really felt the need to point out. I thought it was a good story and the ending was bittersweet.
~~ SweetGeorgie
4SweetGeorgieHello there,
I really liked this one-shot, your description and the way the plot was planned out worked really well.
I only have one small detail that I saw which I think should be pointed out.
When a reporter writes their news report, they use the person's full name when first mentioning them but when necessary to say their name again they will use their last name. So instead of the news reporter saying Ikuto they would say Mr. Tsukiyomi and instead of Amu they would say Miss. Hinamori.
That's all I really felt the need to point out. I thought it was a good story and the ending was bittersweet.
~~ SweetGeorgie
