for Hidden Feelings6/5/2012 c1 Anette
I AM LITERALLY DYING HERE! That was absolutely brilliant! There are too damn few novice!Dannyl fics out there!
I AM LITERALLY DYING HERE! That was absolutely brilliant! There are too damn few novice!Dannyl fics out there!
1/21/2012 c1 Heidi
Laura from the black magician forum suggested this story, and I really loved this chapter.Im not good at reviews but I think you wrote Dannyl and Tayend very well, its so funny seeing them younger. I cant wait to read more :)
Laura from the black magician forum suggested this story, and I really loved this chapter.Im not good at reviews but I think you wrote Dannyl and Tayend very well, its so funny seeing them younger. I cant wait to read more :)
1/18/2012 c1 
2darkmagician777
Wow, i love this story, it great that you've show what would happen if Tayend joined the guild,and its great to see Dannyls times as a novice. This fic is so well writen, i love how you have portrayed the characters, there exactly as i would imagine them. It going to be so interesting to see what will happen now that there are two novices Dannyl could potentially be with. I cant wait to see what happens next this is a amazing fic and im now hooked after reading this chapter :D
2darkmagician777Wow, i love this story, it great that you've show what would happen if Tayend joined the guild,and its great to see Dannyls times as a novice. This fic is so well writen, i love how you have portrayed the characters, there exactly as i would imagine them. It going to be so interesting to see what will happen now that there are two novices Dannyl could potentially be with. I cant wait to see what happens next this is a amazing fic and im now hooked after reading this chapter :D
1/18/2012 c1 38Laura Scofield
Yay this is finally being posted, after all our crazy chats and discussions XD I was surprised when I saw it was 3000 words, it didnt feel like that when i was Beta-ing it!
As I said before, I really love the characterisations in this, and how you're taking Dannyl, Tayend, Rothen and Fergun and putting them in a different context than we normally see them in other fics (or the books!). Its especially not easy to try to write about characters when they're younger, but I really think you nailed Dan & Tay in this chapter, not to mention the other scenes i've seen, which I shouldn't talk about yet :P And I keep repeating myself, but the first chapter in a series like this is certainly a big feat to write, as you're introducing all the characters and the setting and conflicts. But you pulled it off so effortlessly, I was realy impressed at how you managed that! And you began building up the tensions so effectively, and I really like how you portray Fergun, he's so hateable!
This is the start of a really great and engrossing series, and I cant really express how excited I am that you're writing about this concept of Tayend at the Guild, I have full confidence in you that you can pull it off wonderfully XD
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38Laura ScofieldYay this is finally being posted, after all our crazy chats and discussions XD I was surprised when I saw it was 3000 words, it didnt feel like that when i was Beta-ing it!
As I said before, I really love the characterisations in this, and how you're taking Dannyl, Tayend, Rothen and Fergun and putting them in a different context than we normally see them in other fics (or the books!). Its especially not easy to try to write about characters when they're younger, but I really think you nailed Dan & Tay in this chapter, not to mention the other scenes i've seen, which I shouldn't talk about yet :P And I keep repeating myself, but the first chapter in a series like this is certainly a big feat to write, as you're introducing all the characters and the setting and conflicts. But you pulled it off so effortlessly, I was realy impressed at how you managed that! And you began building up the tensions so effectively, and I really like how you portray Fergun, he's so hateable!
This is the start of a really great and engrossing series, and I cant really express how excited I am that you're writing about this concept of Tayend at the Guild, I have full confidence in you that you can pull it off wonderfully XD
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