for 6 for 612/1/2012 c9 Guest
Look bro, your story is bad **, and I don't hate you for liking dub step, although I use my maschine and other crap to make dubstep, many hate it for such extreme amounts of bass. Oh well, keep up the good work
Look bro, your story is bad **, and I don't hate you for liking dub step, although I use my maschine and other crap to make dubstep, many hate it for such extreme amounts of bass. Oh well, keep up the good work
8/25/2012 c13 
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with all the songs i went to youtube and played the songs while reading the lyrics here pretty awesome how you incoporated songs in this
2Ghostdad7with all the songs i went to youtube and played the songs while reading the lyrics here pretty awesome how you incoporated songs in this
8/6/2012 c3 2xmanDELTA 507
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7/24/2012 c20 1Beef Franklin
I'd like to start by saying I will cut you for finishing badly but all that is good cannot end well. However I would like to inquire as to my fate and that of the luitennant, also is Xavier a pony or our bro from school, no need to publicly post the answers unless you see fit to do so, otherwise you can just pm/email me.
1Beef FranklinI'd like to start by saying I will cut you for finishing badly but all that is good cannot end well. However I would like to inquire as to my fate and that of the luitennant, also is Xavier a pony or our bro from school, no need to publicly post the answers unless you see fit to do so, otherwise you can just pm/email me.
7/19/2012 c21 9ShiningShadow1965
Dude I put the word out on your sequel when I review my buddies other story so your voice is getting out there.
9ShiningShadow1965Dude I put the word out on your sequel when I review my buddies other story so your voice is getting out there.
7/16/2012 c20 2Akkura
First of all it is allonys-y with a dash. OCD FTW/\\!. Idk what that was... I saw some spelling errors and I think you could slow your writing down and add more details. If you want to look at some well written stories ask me and I can provide you with a link. I would not suggest mine tho because I don't think it's that great but if you want you can read it XD
2AkkuraFirst of all it is allonys-y with a dash. OCD FTW/\\!. Idk what that was... I saw some spelling errors and I think you could slow your writing down and add more details. If you want to look at some well written stories ask me and I can provide you with a link. I would not suggest mine tho because I don't think it's that great but if you want you can read it XD
7/16/2012 c20 9ShiningShadow1965
Ok so everybody died in equestria and Cooper lived? So what is going next a epilogue or that's it well interested ending great job on it bravo.
9ShiningShadow1965Ok so everybody died in equestria and Cooper lived? So what is going next a epilogue or that's it well interested ending great job on it bravo.
7/14/2012 c20 1Volt the Great
Hey Coop it's cole and just finished the story! Loved it but the torture scenes were kinda uncalled for I think... also the ending was a little odd for me because of what happened with the mane 6 but it's your story so I agree with it. All around a great story and I have been working on ideas for the little project we were talking about. When I get back from MN I'll be sure to call ya. Can't wait to read the sequal or a whole new story altogether. Sorry for the long review!
P.S. Going to begin on my story soon :)
1Volt the GreatHey Coop it's cole and just finished the story! Loved it but the torture scenes were kinda uncalled for I think... also the ending was a little odd for me because of what happened with the mane 6 but it's your story so I agree with it. All around a great story and I have been working on ideas for the little project we were talking about. When I get back from MN I'll be sure to call ya. Can't wait to read the sequal or a whole new story altogether. Sorry for the long review!
P.S. Going to begin on my story soon :)
7/14/2012 c20 1FireBreath5150
Holy crap it's literally 5:28 a.m. right now. I can't believe I read this beginning to end in one shot especially since I started after midnight. I have no life...
1FireBreath5150Holy crap it's literally 5:28 a.m. right now. I can't believe I read this beginning to end in one shot especially since I started after midnight. I have no life...
7/12/2012 c20 Guest
zsd nice story but i think the colt that gavve RD kids in the time visonhould be cooper
zsd nice story but i think the colt that gavve RD kids in the time visonhould be cooper
7/12/2012 c20 1Traintrax
I smell a sequel in the air. My excitement can barely be contained. I like the finale, but it seemed a bit odd. Like some things just weren't quite right. Ehh, I'm probably just paranoid. Congrats though on finishing your story.
1TraintraxI smell a sequel in the air. My excitement can barely be contained. I like the finale, but it seemed a bit odd. Like some things just weren't quite right. Ehh, I'm probably just paranoid. Congrats though on finishing your story.
7/12/2012 c17 Guest
I just looked up the author you named in your author notes and developed a headache from reading his profile. Not only is his grammar bad, but so is his word choice, using wrong words/ not caring about gender agreement, homonyms, etc. Thank you for informing me about this author
I just looked up the author you named in your author notes and developed a headache from reading his profile. Not only is his grammar bad, but so is his word choice, using wrong words/ not caring about gender agreement, homonyms, etc. Thank you for informing me about this author
7/11/2012 c20 2xmanDELTA 507
thank you for doing what i requested...
very well done, what is thout's next move?
2xmanDELTA 507thank you for doing what i requested...
very well done, what is thout's next move?