for Asylum6/21/2012 c1 InsanityDerivedBlindLove
Can I ask where you found that picture you used for your profile picture thingy? It looks adorable and I wanna see it closer!
Can I ask where you found that picture you used for your profile picture thingy? It looks adorable and I wanna see it closer!
5/5/2012 c7 Readsalot4
Hey, if you really like Pride and Prejudice theres this thing on Youtube called the Lizzie Bennet Diaries which is like a modern adaptation of the book through a series of vlogs. Its really good and you might want to check it out. Anyways, I hope you get rid of this writers block soon 'cause I really like your story!
Hey, if you really like Pride and Prejudice theres this thing on Youtube called the Lizzie Bennet Diaries which is like a modern adaptation of the book through a series of vlogs. Its really good and you might want to check it out. Anyways, I hope you get rid of this writers block soon 'cause I really like your story!
5/5/2012 c6 Guest
Love love it! Hope u will write the next chapter soon!
Love love it! Hope u will write the next chapter soon!
5/5/2012 c7 Bookninja15
Good luck with the story. ^.^
I haven't read P&P, but I've read a few retellings and a video blog retelling( The Lizzie Bennet Diaries), which is awesome.
Keep writing awesome and good luck!
~Bookninja15 xD
Good luck with the story. ^.^
I haven't read P&P, but I've read a few retellings and a video blog retelling( The Lizzie Bennet Diaries), which is awesome.
Keep writing awesome and good luck!
~Bookninja15 xD
4/25/2012 c6 
22Midnight113
You're doing a great job developing these characters and their relationships with one another... that's really standing out in this chapter. Everything appears to be progressing smoothly, with the exception of the tension between Clary and Jace which adds nice conflict to the story. I like this idea of them being assigned to work together, that forced interaction should really so wonders. Keep up the good work!
22Midnight113You're doing a great job developing these characters and their relationships with one another... that's really standing out in this chapter. Everything appears to be progressing smoothly, with the exception of the tension between Clary and Jace which adds nice conflict to the story. I like this idea of them being assigned to work together, that forced interaction should really so wonders. Keep up the good work!
4/22/2012 c6 1TMIPinkGleeTwilight
Good chapter! I can't wait for Clary and Jace to kiss! Update soon!
1TMIPinkGleeTwilightGood chapter! I can't wait for Clary and Jace to kiss! Update soon!
4/22/2012 c6 Guest
nice chapter!
nice chapter!
4/22/2012 c6 8Bookninja15
As I said, I really like this story. You have a good handle of wording and it's not awkward at all.
I love it. xD
Haha, I can't wait to see how this reseach partners thing go. ;)
Keep writing awesome,
~Bookninaj15 xD
8Bookninja15As I said, I really like this story. You have a good handle of wording and it's not awkward at all.
I love it. xD
Haha, I can't wait to see how this reseach partners thing go. ;)
Keep writing awesome,
~Bookninaj15 xD
4/16/2012 c5 22Midnight113
Beautifully done, I loved their interaction at the beginning. It was real and genuine and the ending was well done. Fantastic work, update when you can!
22Midnight113Beautifully done, I loved their interaction at the beginning. It was real and genuine and the ending was well done. Fantastic work, update when you can!
4/10/2012 c5 Guest
I really like this story!
I really like this story!
4/1/2012 c4 22Midnight113
This chapter was beautifully done, fantastic detail and I love the first person narrative you've got going. That was an excellent cliffhanger as well. I can't wait for more!
22Midnight113This chapter was beautifully done, fantastic detail and I love the first person narrative you've got going. That was an excellent cliffhanger as well. I can't wait for more!