for Haruhi's broken cousin3/16 c1 
2Kumioko
I like the idea... but I think she woudnt be able to talk about her past so simpy with strangers... Anyway cant wait to see what happen next and hope u update soon!
2KumiokoI like the idea... but I think she woudnt be able to talk about her past so simpy with strangers... Anyway cant wait to see what happen next and hope u update soon!
4/18/2012 c1 2MissingHeiresses
its good but it doesn't really come together. the timeline seems off. and it seems like your rushing to fast establish the plot of problems. take your time with it and have fun!
2MissingHeiressesits good but it doesn't really come together. the timeline seems off. and it seems like your rushing to fast establish the plot of problems. take your time with it and have fun!