for Through Red Eyes3/22/2012 c4 
17Darth Vyper
Great work so far! Nice to see how you managed to tie Darren and Evra into your story. And I love the flashbacks Reit seems to be having - it gives us a deeper sense of what's actually flicking through his mind, plus it adds a whole new depth to his character. I actually laughed a little when you finished off the previous chapter with everyone conveniently 'forgetting' about a certain sleeping vampaneze in the woods. ;)
Good job! Keep it up and update soon! Can't wait to read more. :)
~Jo
17Darth VyperGreat work so far! Nice to see how you managed to tie Darren and Evra into your story. And I love the flashbacks Reit seems to be having - it gives us a deeper sense of what's actually flicking through his mind, plus it adds a whole new depth to his character. I actually laughed a little when you finished off the previous chapter with everyone conveniently 'forgetting' about a certain sleeping vampaneze in the woods. ;)
Good job! Keep it up and update soon! Can't wait to read more. :)
~Jo
3/18/2012 c1 MacKenzie
Please update soon! This story is quite lovely(:
Please update soon! This story is quite lovely(:
1/26/2012 c2 17Darth Vyper
Nice twist at the end. And Reit does seem like quite a cruel character - I find it interesting that he can read and loves Shakespeare - your characters certainly have depth about them that is quite impressive and remarkable. I pity Cecelius though - poor child has clearly been through a lot in such a short amount of time. Great play with words as usual - can't wait for your next update. You have my curiosity tingling at this point. :)
~Jo
17Darth VyperNice twist at the end. And Reit does seem like quite a cruel character - I find it interesting that he can read and loves Shakespeare - your characters certainly have depth about them that is quite impressive and remarkable. I pity Cecelius though - poor child has clearly been through a lot in such a short amount of time. Great play with words as usual - can't wait for your next update. You have my curiosity tingling at this point. :)
~Jo
1/20/2012 c1 Darth Vyper
Wow! Usually I turn away whenever I read stories with OCs or unfamiliar characters - seen way too much of the same Mary Sue and Gary Stu flip flopping through fandom of late - but this is amazing. :)
You're a very descriptive writer, which is one thing I can truly appreciate. You've managed to capture emotions, surroundings and the persona of your own character - Reit - very, very well, and I'm quite astonished, to say the least. Loved your storyline - it's burgeoning with promises and a great amount of potential - and your pacing is quite good. Your story didn't drag or speed up too quickly - it moved along quite well and towed the readers along for a fun ride.
Perhaps the best part is your opening statement about 'hate' and how you linked it back to Reit. That, my friend, was simply astounding. A lot of people (myself included) sometimes struggle to string the dots between one specific theme and connect it to a character so fluidly.
Great work on the whole - loved the bit of suspense in the end - so I'll be keeping an eye on this. :)
Update soon! :D
~Jo
Wow! Usually I turn away whenever I read stories with OCs or unfamiliar characters - seen way too much of the same Mary Sue and Gary Stu flip flopping through fandom of late - but this is amazing. :)
You're a very descriptive writer, which is one thing I can truly appreciate. You've managed to capture emotions, surroundings and the persona of your own character - Reit - very, very well, and I'm quite astonished, to say the least. Loved your storyline - it's burgeoning with promises and a great amount of potential - and your pacing is quite good. Your story didn't drag or speed up too quickly - it moved along quite well and towed the readers along for a fun ride.
Perhaps the best part is your opening statement about 'hate' and how you linked it back to Reit. That, my friend, was simply astounding. A lot of people (myself included) sometimes struggle to string the dots between one specific theme and connect it to a character so fluidly.
Great work on the whole - loved the bit of suspense in the end - so I'll be keeping an eye on this. :)
Update soon! :D
~Jo