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10taco's bell
i like twisted pairings, especially on a mental level. it's just deeper, and scarier, and just creeps and excites the reader at the same time.
favorite line: "Gloomy is, in her own way, doing Suki a favor, the kindest thing she can do without putting herself in danger."
it shows the extent mai is willing to help, and usually, that applies to the majority of people. loveloveloved it.
thanks for sharing! you're an amazing author.
10taco's belli like twisted pairings, especially on a mental level. it's just deeper, and scarier, and just creeps and excites the reader at the same time.
favorite line: "Gloomy is, in her own way, doing Suki a favor, the kindest thing she can do without putting herself in danger."
it shows the extent mai is willing to help, and usually, that applies to the majority of people. loveloveloved it.
thanks for sharing! you're an amazing author.
9/4/2012 c1 8Led Feynman M.D
Ok, here's the thing.
I like slash as much as the next guy. Maybe more. I realized I was a deviant child earlier today.
But if you ignore any kind of subtext, this is really good as just a friendship too.
This was very good and I liked it a lot.
8Led Feynman M.DOk, here's the thing.
I like slash as much as the next guy. Maybe more. I realized I was a deviant child earlier today.
But if you ignore any kind of subtext, this is really good as just a friendship too.
This was very good and I liked it a lot.
5/28/2012 c1 7paper streets
i'm really not sure what to say. this is stunning.
the disturbing elements, the twisted nature, the stockholm syndrome, everything is so perfect. and that last line...wow.i'm in awe of this, not gonna lie.
7paper streetsi'm really not sure what to say. this is stunning.
the disturbing elements, the twisted nature, the stockholm syndrome, everything is so perfect. and that last line...wow.i'm in awe of this, not gonna lie.
5/4/2012 c1 ami
This is really beautiful and should have more then 4 reviews. I love how you characterized both Suki and Mai making each of them being tortured in their actions. very powerful and well written, I applaud you.
This is really beautiful and should have more then 4 reviews. I love how you characterized both Suki and Mai making each of them being tortured in their actions. very powerful and well written, I applaud you.
4/15/2012 c1 gonewiththewind17
Love this story. It's tragic but very well done. I appreciate Suki's insight into Mai and really like how you explored their relationship.
Keep it up!
Love this story. It's tragic but very well done. I appreciate Suki's insight into Mai and really like how you explored their relationship.
Keep it up!
1/23/2012 c1 SamYouAre
This is great. I really like the insight that Suki has on Mak, it's pretty telling.
Wonderful to hear from you again. [:
This is great. I really like the insight that Suki has on Mak, it's pretty telling.
Wonderful to hear from you again. [:
1/21/2012 c1 69waterlit
This fic was oddly interesting! Beautiful writing - and I felt so sorry for Mai in the end. But at least she let Suki and the rest go (:
69waterlitThis fic was oddly interesting! Beautiful writing - and I felt so sorry for Mai in the end. But at least she let Suki and the rest go (:
1/20/2012 c1 30General Herbison
What, the, fudgicals? Okay this was easy enough to understand, powerful emotional scenes but I didnt get a sense of much between the two. It seemed more like Mai was trying to avoid causing Suki pain in a way of it being the right thing rather than anything else.
Interesting enough though, very well done
30General HerbisonWhat, the, fudgicals? Okay this was easy enough to understand, powerful emotional scenes but I didnt get a sense of much between the two. It seemed more like Mai was trying to avoid causing Suki pain in a way of it being the right thing rather than anything else.
Interesting enough though, very well done