for Elemental Angels11/13/2012 c50 Rawzberry
Was worried you had stopped writing.
Was worried you had stopped writing.
9/10/2012 c49 
14Ita-chan18
ciao! ive been up awhile reading this story! i only have one story posted u here of my own reation, and i found this browsing other stories! very good story! i really liked it! hasta la pasta!
14Ita-chan18ciao! ive been up awhile reading this story! i only have one story posted u here of my own reation, and i found this browsing other stories! very good story! i really liked it! hasta la pasta!
8/14/2012 c49 Rawzberry
The chapter didn't suck, it was different than the usual ones since wev'e finally changed locations and pace. Take your time to write and think of your stories, you have the right!
Also, I've still been reading so don't worry.
I gave up on posting up my piled up reviews since I figured it would be quite useless as of now since well, they are from the old chapters (stating from chapter 8) and you'd probably get tired of reading through them all and secondly because youv'e already fixed a bunch of the stuff that I mention in the reviews.
I know this is abit late, but about your friend, I feel sorry for you though, that's part of life and you gotta keep moving so I'm glad your feeling better(if you are as of now.)
As for when the story will end, I suggest you make a ninja/magic/dragon training academy story where they learn about their skills and become great ninjas/magicians/dragon tamers about to be sent out to war or to some sort of global competition/tournament.
It seems like you like fantasy style stories, and I think that if you keep going in that direction, you'l hone it abit better.
Though, I suggest you watch some anime battle scenes or read some fantasy action novels and get some ideas from there. One of the major and recurring downsides that I found and noted in my reviews was that the battle scenes weren't diverse and intense enough. You often repeated alot of the moves you used. (Ex: the jumping and dodging of leg sweeps.)
Anywho, keep up the good work and I look forward to a satisfying end, as well as a new enjoyable story!
The chapter didn't suck, it was different than the usual ones since wev'e finally changed locations and pace. Take your time to write and think of your stories, you have the right!
Also, I've still been reading so don't worry.
I gave up on posting up my piled up reviews since I figured it would be quite useless as of now since well, they are from the old chapters (stating from chapter 8) and you'd probably get tired of reading through them all and secondly because youv'e already fixed a bunch of the stuff that I mention in the reviews.
I know this is abit late, but about your friend, I feel sorry for you though, that's part of life and you gotta keep moving so I'm glad your feeling better(if you are as of now.)
As for when the story will end, I suggest you make a ninja/magic/dragon training academy story where they learn about their skills and become great ninjas/magicians/dragon tamers about to be sent out to war or to some sort of global competition/tournament.
It seems like you like fantasy style stories, and I think that if you keep going in that direction, you'l hone it abit better.
Though, I suggest you watch some anime battle scenes or read some fantasy action novels and get some ideas from there. One of the major and recurring downsides that I found and noted in my reviews was that the battle scenes weren't diverse and intense enough. You often repeated alot of the moves you used. (Ex: the jumping and dodging of leg sweeps.)
Anywho, keep up the good work and I look forward to a satisfying end, as well as a new enjoyable story!
6/9/2012 c29 Rawzberry
Happy B-day :D
Been busy with stuff so haven't been able to read all that much.
But I have been piling up my reviews, starting from chapter 8 and up.
Will either be posting it on your review pages, or sending them through pm once they are done and ready. So don't worry, I'm still here and going to keep reading and reviewing.
Happy B-day :D
Been busy with stuff so haven't been able to read all that much.
But I have been piling up my reviews, starting from chapter 8 and up.
Will either be posting it on your review pages, or sending them through pm once they are done and ready. So don't worry, I'm still here and going to keep reading and reviewing.
6/6/2012 c26 DarkAngelGal
Lol at the end! I also laughed when Zephyr smiled when Danny said that he wasn't doing too good at his training, i could picture it so clearly. Jet and Chloe...oh la la...sorry just had to say that! Looking forward to the next chapter and by the way when are they going on the mission?
Lol at the end! I also laughed when Zephyr smiled when Danny said that he wasn't doing too good at his training, i could picture it so clearly. Jet and Chloe...oh la la...sorry just had to say that! Looking forward to the next chapter and by the way when are they going on the mission?
6/5/2012 c25 DarkAngelGal
Wow...I never knew Zephyr was jealous...i just thought he was one of those boy BFF's. Anyway...Yay! it's finally in Zephyr's POV! Can't wait until Zephyr notices Emma!
Wow...I never knew Zephyr was jealous...i just thought he was one of those boy BFF's. Anyway...Yay! it's finally in Zephyr's POV! Can't wait until Zephyr notices Emma!
6/4/2012 c24 DarkAngelGal
LMFAO! at the very end! By the way, how is Nathanianl not in her mind? I'm confused. I loved the ending of this chapter! I wonder when Zephyr and Emma will start hitting it off...
LMFAO! at the very end! By the way, how is Nathanianl not in her mind? I'm confused. I loved the ending of this chapter! I wonder when Zephyr and Emma will start hitting it off...
6/3/2012 c23 DarkAngelGal
It was sooo cute when they were kissing...then at the end i'm like oh **! Cuz if she opens her mind Nathanial will track her. This is bad. The kissing scene was sooo sweet despite that.
It was sooo cute when they were kissing...then at the end i'm like oh **! Cuz if she opens her mind Nathanial will track her. This is bad. The kissing scene was sooo sweet despite that.
6/2/2012 c22 DarkAngelGal
This is getting good! I have finals too so i know how it is! Luckily, it's the weekend and for now, i have time for both!
This is getting good! I have finals too so i know how it is! Luckily, it's the weekend and for now, i have time for both!
6/1/2012 c20 DarkAngelGal
Wow! That shocked me! No wonder he can touch her mind! Nathanial needs to GTFO of the circle and Danny needs to join!
Wow! That shocked me! No wonder he can touch her mind! Nathanial needs to GTFO of the circle and Danny needs to join!
5/30/2012 c19 DarkAngelGal
I read em'...i just could'nt yesterday cuz i was too busy writing my own stories. It will be even more difficult to read others work and write my own cuz of stupid finals (Booing along with you). Bt the way, I'm confused...is it Danny and Liz falling in love of Danny and Emma falling in love? It keeps switching back and forth.
I read em'...i just could'nt yesterday cuz i was too busy writing my own stories. It will be even more difficult to read others work and write my own cuz of stupid finals (Booing along with you). Bt the way, I'm confused...is it Danny and Liz falling in love of Danny and Emma falling in love? It keeps switching back and forth.
5/30/2012 c18 DarkAngelGal
Lol at the end..."ok i was wrong,I was not comfortable discussing this sunject" Again, lol! Danny's so funny! (btw, my school ends next Weds, so yay for me! Sadly I have to study for finals so i won't be able to publish chapters as much. Do you have the same problem?)
Lol at the end..."ok i was wrong,I was not comfortable discussing this sunject" Again, lol! Danny's so funny! (btw, my school ends next Weds, so yay for me! Sadly I have to study for finals so i won't be able to publish chapters as much. Do you have the same problem?)
5/28/2012 c1 Rawzberry
Created an account. You can pm me through here :D
I'd be glad to help out with pointig out faults and the goodies!
-Raz
Created an account. You can pm me through here :D
I'd be glad to help out with pointig out faults and the goodies!
-Raz
5/28/2012 c17 DarkAngelGal
Awww sweet! Danny can change into animals! I wish Rex and him can meet each other! -DarkAngelReviews
Awww sweet! Danny can change into animals! I wish Rex and him can meet each other! -DarkAngelReviews