for Keeping up a Facade4/6 c28 Guest
REALLY!?
REALLY!?
4/6 c13 Guest
WHYYYYYYYYYYY!? I ACTUALLY SCREAMED AT THE CRASH PART! PLease dont make me SREAM!
WHYYYYYYYYYYY!? I ACTUALLY SCREAMED AT THE CRASH PART! PLease dont make me SREAM!
3/31 c2 Jessica
i think annabeth will be good.
i think annabeth will be good.
3/25 c6 Guest
Chapter 6- u said no gods but your acting like they have gods here
Or are they just kids joking around but he said mom and stuff so apparently U LIED MAKE UP YOUR MIND CHOICE NOW HURRY UP
GODS OR NO GODS
Chapter 6- u said no gods but your acting like they have gods here
Or are they just kids joking around but he said mom and stuff so apparently U LIED MAKE UP YOUR MIND CHOICE NOW HURRY UP
GODS OR NO GODS
3/24 c37 
2Mayhaah
Yay! An update! That one isn't as sad as the other ones :)
That's a good thing.
But poor percy (Lol I typed poop XD)
Soo...Hi...
2MayhaahYay! An update! That one isn't as sad as the other ones :)
That's a good thing.
But poor percy (Lol I typed poop XD)
Soo...Hi...
3/23 c37 aquamarine girl 35
i would run to if i had to look at ares's ugly face as well. and Zues, MY BROTHER IS NOT A LOW LIFE!\
i would run to if i had to look at ares's ugly face as well. and Zues, MY BROTHER IS NOT A LOW LIFE!\
3/20 c37 4Alexandra Jackson rocks Hades
great chapter and the advice for the broken nose was correct. that is how you break someones nose, I would know because I took a self defense class
4Alexandra Jackson rocks Hadesgreat chapter and the advice for the broken nose was correct. that is how you break someones nose, I would know because I took a self defense class
3/20 c37 5infinity heart star lightning
Please keep updating this one! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
I love the close relationship that Nico and Thalia have :3 xoxo
5infinity heart star lightningPlease keep updating this one! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
I love the close relationship that Nico and Thalia have :3 xoxo
3/20 c37 Anonymous
NOOOOO! Why must you leave us in suspense? I have to say… this is one of the best mortal Percy Jackson and the Olypians story I've ever read! Your chapters are long too! But the abuse is too scary ;(... Whatever! You are an AMAZING author and keep up the good work! Now please chant with me: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
NOOOOO! Why must you leave us in suspense? I have to say… this is one of the best mortal Percy Jackson and the Olypians story I've ever read! Your chapters are long too! But the abuse is too scary ;(... Whatever! You are an AMAZING author and keep up the good work! Now please chant with me: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
3/20 c37 4alyaJackson
update more soon! can't wait for the next chapter and the return of perseus jackson!
4alyaJacksonupdate more soon! can't wait for the next chapter and the return of perseus jackson!
3/20 c37 14PARAMOREROCKS and Hoodie
I really don't blame Thalia when she said that if being rich meant acting like that, then she would never look like that again. Go Thalia! Lol update soon!
14PARAMOREROCKS and HoodieI really don't blame Thalia when she said that if being rich meant acting like that, then she would never look like that again. Go Thalia! Lol update soon!