for Apprentice of a Hero10/30/2012 c6 Just Another Rea
Other Konoha Ninjas who should be involved in dungeon crawling...
- Kurenai. Canonically, Asuma and Kurenai are lovers, so her will tell her for sure.
- Hinata. While I like her, chance of her going is low, unless Kurenai wants to bring her in. And since SWAC is SS rank, I really doubt it will be a good idea to bring genins into the place.
- Jiraiya. A good choice, but he needs to return to Konoha first.
- Tsunade. If there is a method for her to learn revive that can ressurect the dead within minutes of their death, she will join for sure.
- Konohamaru. Well, the only excuse for bringing him would be that he is Hiruzen's grandson. Well, he's kind of a big mouth, so I think maybe not...
- Might Gai. Though, he will probably want to bring Lee with him at least, so its another can of worms...
- The 2 gate Guards.
- Yakumo seems to be a good choice. Although the genin thing works against her, maybe there is a way to cure her in the "ruins"
Problems I can see:
Definitely attacks.
The following people will want to get their people to join:
- Danzo - he will want one of his Root to join
- Orochimaru - He's got spies... Especially Kabuto
- Sasori - He's got even more spies, lol
- Tobi - he seems to know everything
- The genins, especially Sasuke
- Other clans, also have to consider responses from other villages...
Other Konoha Ninjas who should be involved in dungeon crawling...
- Kurenai. Canonically, Asuma and Kurenai are lovers, so her will tell her for sure.
- Hinata. While I like her, chance of her going is low, unless Kurenai wants to bring her in. And since SWAC is SS rank, I really doubt it will be a good idea to bring genins into the place.
- Jiraiya. A good choice, but he needs to return to Konoha first.
- Tsunade. If there is a method for her to learn revive that can ressurect the dead within minutes of their death, she will join for sure.
- Konohamaru. Well, the only excuse for bringing him would be that he is Hiruzen's grandson. Well, he's kind of a big mouth, so I think maybe not...
- Might Gai. Though, he will probably want to bring Lee with him at least, so its another can of worms...
- The 2 gate Guards.
- Yakumo seems to be a good choice. Although the genin thing works against her, maybe there is a way to cure her in the "ruins"
Problems I can see:
Definitely attacks.
The following people will want to get their people to join:
- Danzo - he will want one of his Root to join
- Orochimaru - He's got spies... Especially Kabuto
- Sasori - He's got even more spies, lol
- Tobi - he seems to know everything
- The genins, especially Sasuke
- Other clans, also have to consider responses from other villages...
10/19/2012 c6 deadkid23
i love this story as for a new bloodline proto-type sounds like it whould fit and the armor could be from crysis2
i love this story as for a new bloodline proto-type sounds like it whould fit and the armor could be from crysis2
10/11/2012 c1 sgfasfgdasfgasgf
I read this until i reached this part:
"I am going to compress five years of training in one minute."
After which I closed this obviously bad fanfic and never returned, knowing that it would only get worse over time.
I read this until i reached this part:
"I am going to compress five years of training in one minute."
After which I closed this obviously bad fanfic and never returned, knowing that it would only get worse over time.
8/26/2012 c6 
19Reishin Amara
lol...with this u could even use 'bloodlines' from other anime...
Anko needs Branch of (Deadman Wonderland)
Asuma Smoker(onepiece)
Iruka...give em Chads arms.(bleach) they fit perfect.
19Reishin Amaralol...with this u could even use 'bloodlines' from other anime...
Anko needs Branch of (Deadman Wonderland)
Asuma Smoker(onepiece)
Iruka...give em Chads arms.(bleach) they fit perfect.
8/10/2012 c6 novaxe1
This is great! I wonder what they would do with a deeper understanding of flying machines. heck I wonder what the fight will be like when Orochimaru attacks during the chunin exams (assuming that still happens) Sasuke is getting real training this time around so he probably won't be as eager to leave, and goodness know the look on Orochimaru's face when he goes to attack and Konoha has a dozen or more kage level ninjas with a bunch of powerful bloodlines.
This is great! I wonder what they would do with a deeper understanding of flying machines. heck I wonder what the fight will be like when Orochimaru attacks during the chunin exams (assuming that still happens) Sasuke is getting real training this time around so he probably won't be as eager to leave, and goodness know the look on Orochimaru's face when he goes to attack and Konoha has a dozen or more kage level ninjas with a bunch of powerful bloodlines.
7/19/2012 c6 Erydanes
I so love powerful good guys. :)
I'd like to see Jiraiya included so that he can kick Orochi-teme's ** easily. :)
Please don't include Sasuke, nor any of the rookie genins. The Sandaime did say that the privilege is only for those with proven loyalty to him. Hmm... and please add Genma to the list too ... :)
I so love powerful good guys. :)
I'd like to see Jiraiya included so that he can kick Orochi-teme's ** easily. :)
Please don't include Sasuke, nor any of the rookie genins. The Sandaime did say that the privilege is only for those with proven loyalty to him. Hmm... and please add Genma to the list too ... :)
7/19/2012 c5 7Ivanjedi
You just can't help yourself, do you? No matter how many different plots you come up with, you will always overpower the good guys real fast.
That being said, would you mind if I used the setting you establish here (chapter one mostly) for my own story? (By that, I mean pretty much copying the chapter, and i don't feel like butchering or worse, plagiarizing your work) My own attempts at establishing a proper setup for Dungeon Crawl fic produced miserable results, and I really want to give the genre a shot.
the same goes to two other stories of yours, 'From Strange to X-man' and 'Arm Commander, Alexander', both of which have some serious potential, but you have left them in a state before the story had even started.
7IvanjediYou just can't help yourself, do you? No matter how many different plots you come up with, you will always overpower the good guys real fast.
That being said, would you mind if I used the setting you establish here (chapter one mostly) for my own story? (By that, I mean pretty much copying the chapter, and i don't feel like butchering or worse, plagiarizing your work) My own attempts at establishing a proper setup for Dungeon Crawl fic produced miserable results, and I really want to give the genre a shot.
the same goes to two other stories of yours, 'From Strange to X-man' and 'Arm Commander, Alexander', both of which have some serious potential, but you have left them in a state before the story had even started.
7/9/2012 c6 1Grey Muji
Hmm this is a really good and interesting story!
Hmm if its trusted ninja I'd have to say Gai is one of his best and most trusted Shinobi...
Also I believe you should include Sakura and Sasuke on Naruto request as they are technically still a team plus it would do them good and help them get stronger... But in body and their Outlook of things... Plus they both have enormous potential that hindered by things like hatred, fangirlism and so on...
Well that-
Well there is also Jiraiya, so maybe at some point later on...
1Grey MujiHmm this is a really good and interesting story!
Hmm if its trusted ninja I'd have to say Gai is one of his best and most trusted Shinobi...
Also I believe you should include Sakura and Sasuke on Naruto request as they are technically still a team plus it would do them good and help them get stronger... But in body and their Outlook of things... Plus they both have enormous potential that hindered by things like hatred, fangirlism and so on...
Well that-
Well there is also Jiraiya, so maybe at some point later on...
7/7/2012 c6 Guest
what you should have done is naruto being the one calling the shots and not the hokage. ruined a good story for me.
what you should have done is naruto being the one calling the shots and not the hokage. ruined a good story for me.
6/11/2012 c6 tn5421
Stories like this are the reason you are my favorite fanfic author. Please keep up the good work.
Stories like this are the reason you are my favorite fanfic author. Please keep up the good work.